ArHi: A Vivid Array (OS Gall) [Blog Link : Pg 33] - Page 8

Originally posted by: -Murphy369-

Hey Aanya!
I am going to comment part by part in case I don't miss a part which needs to be appreciated :)
A beautiful angle to look from. It would have been natural if the CVs would have shown a hug after that, Khsui was scared and that was evident, but nevertheless, it was a great experience. It is a great feeling to have someone around n the time of need and you can actually say that, yeah she/he is there.
Great one, gonna read the next one soon.

Note: You should have posted those writings a way before :)

Originally posted by: ..KaJenDelena..

AANYAAA!... DONT BE SHOCKED IT IS ME! AHAHAHA ;)

So Honestly I have no idea what "Is pyaar ko kya naam doon" is about coz I have never watched it. lOl. But I cant help but Love that guy who plays Arnuv- and I have never seen his acting but he has what KSG has- something in him makes me admire him. Pretty sure I didn't make sense, bu you get me ... right? lOl

anywho As ususal you write flawlessly and beautifully! Your description of feelings and emotions alway makes me admire you as writer even more. I seriously love you Aanya for everything that makes you... you, your so sweet and kind and on top of that one of the best writers I have come across on IF! Never change. Sorry I have been the worst friend ever! I hardly ever comment on anyone's FF's/OS and you and Antara were my only exceptions but with time ticking away and year 12 scaring me to death, school, and family hasn't permitted me to comment on your work. Sorry.

You write amazingly and honestly You dont need me to tell you that. Every sentence was beautiully put together and it made it totes worth reading and thats coming from someone who has no idea what the show is about or who the characters are.The insight of "Khushi's and Arnuvs" characters has now given me a better understanding of the show- so basically Arnuv is the angry young man with a soft heart type of person and Khushi is like "geet" in a way? I dont know but I think the show is a better version of Geet with few changes here and there and with hotter male lead. lOl. You protrayed everything beautifully.

ps; I LOVE the title, simple and fits perfectly with the story!

With Love, Priyanka.

Originally posted by: ..KaJenDelena..

AANYAAA!... DONT BE SHOCKED IT IS ME! AHAHAHA ;)

So Honestly I have no idea what "Is pyaar ko kya naam doon" is about coz I have never watched it. lOl. But I cant help but Love that guy who plays Arnuv- and I have never seen his acting but he has what KSG has- something in him makes me admire him. Pretty sure I didn't make sense, bu you get me ... right? lOl

anywho As ususal you write flawlessly and beautifully! Your description of feelings and emotions alway makes me admire you as writer even more. I seriously love you Aanya for everything that makes you... you, your so sweet and kind and on top of that one of the best writers I have come across on IF! Never change. Sorry I have been the worst friend ever! I hardly ever comment on anyone's FF's/OS and you and Antara were my only exceptions but with time ticking away and year 12 scaring me to death, school, and family hasn't permitted me to comment on your work. Sorry.

You write amazingly and honestly You dont need me to tell you that. Every sentence was beautiully put together and it made it totes worth reading and thats coming from someone who has no idea what the show is about or who the characters are.The insight of "Khushi's and Arnuvs" characters has now given me a better understanding of the show- so basically Arnuv is the angry young man with a soft heart type of person and Khushi is like "geet" in a way? I dont know but I think the show is a better version of Geet with few changes here and there and with hotter male lead. lOl. You protrayed everything beautifully.

ps; I LOVE the title, simple and fits perfectly with the story!

With Love, Priyanka.

Originally posted by: Ankita.M

Sorry 😔 that I am so late with this one .

Blame my boss, and my teachers for all the work they give HMPH :(

Anyhow :) AHHH wow now that I am an addict of this show as well ;) I am just so glad you've started this OS thread :D

WOW the first one was extremely amazing , the way you managed to explain his feelings for her, and hers in concern of him, were beautiful. You put that down perfectly. That hug was a beautiful touch to the scene, something that does come naturally. Something that should have happened or something that I expected myself :)

WOW the second os was so amazing, a really touching imagination and something that has made me so damn happy ROFL. Khushi as Arnavs wife :) you've made me want to see that happen in IPKKND now.

They're both going to be amazing pillars of strength for the other, which we can already see now, and which is something you showed really well =)

It was a cute and simple one shot, something thats happening in the show for sure ROFL.

ILY Aanya 😳

Originally posted by: Aanya_taanu4evr

*Blinks* *Rubs eyes* *Sees that the comment is still there* *does a happy dance*

^ That was my reaction in the afternoon, obviously 🤣

PRIII <3 <3

OMG it's been like 3472394720840 years since you commented or we talked 😲

Okay, as for IPKKND, you've gotta see it! Given, it's a little cliched and a tad bit dramatic but seriously, Barun [guy who plays Arnav] and Sanaya [plays Khushi] have electrifying chemistry! Watch it once, it's amazing <3 And Arnav is hot ☺️

Damn I missed you feeding my ego 😆 Thank Youu <3 And look who's talking about being an awesome writer 😳 LOL.

It's alright! I understand, Year 12 must be tough and still you took out the time to read and comment makes me feel happies 🤣 Drop in whenever you can! <3

As for characters, yeah it's pretty much like that, although the Arnav I've shown in the second OS is nowhere near to the one in the show, that stage is far away 😆 And I've never watched Geet so idk about that, but Khushi is a treat to watch! Great acting by Sanaya :) And OMG yes, Barun is WAY WAY WAYY more hot than Maan. Don't get me wrong, Maan is good looking but I don't find him hot :P

Thank youuus for the title :D

Love youu <3

xoxo

Aanya