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maaneet5

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Posted: 13 years ago

#81

Update more parts so that we can be in the flow

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maaneet5

@maaneet5

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Posted: 13 years ago

#82

in 1st part only u have mentioned they are going to be married i want to see how u mold them becoming one bond

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rupzloveu

@rupzloveu

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Posted: 13 years ago

#83

awesome ... superb ...

thnx 4 d pm ...

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swetha10

@swetha10

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Posted: 13 years ago

#84

congrats on the new ff...

wow brilliant start.. really beautiful...

hmmm maneet getting married n maan blind..

sounds interesting...

continue soon

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cloudflower

@cloudflower

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Posted: 13 years ago

#85

congrats for your new FF dear 😃

beautiful start , loved itmaan is blind and geet is marrying him who will support him through their mehsoos , it is awesome dear

loved muskan di's poem . it added more glow to your beautiful update just like char chaand laga diya hai 😳

thanks for the pm

eagerly waiting for next part

please continue soon dear

btw all the best for your uni work 😳

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Kshitija

@krndr

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Posted: 13 years ago

#86

Superb start to the new ff

So Geet's 19 and does not want to marry

But is Maan blind here? Why is he using Brail here ?

Is that what the Title suggests Mahsoos

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Pallavi

@QueenbeePallavi

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Posted: 13 years ago

#87

Keya liked the new idea a lot..do continue and its slight suspense in the air feel is also working good.. plz continue dear..shall love to read more about this new Mahsoos... good luck ahead..

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Shimmerr

@Shimmerr

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Posted: 13 years ago

#88

wooow dear!!
great concept!!
pls continue!!
so if i have understand it right, maan is blind and they were looking for a bride who will take care of him.
dadi and maans mom are coming home happy, so that means that geet or someone else from her family have said yes to this proposal.
but the precap says that maan d
ont want anyone to take care of him, as he dont think of himself as an ill person and that just ill persons need to be taken care of.
so he wont agree to this proposal as he would want a bride and not a care taker.
but maybe when he get to know the name of the girl, he will accept or wants to meet her.
but will geet accept the proposal eather??
if yes, she will.say so because of pitty or because she will help him??
what will she think about him??
does she even know that maan has is blind??
or do i.mistake everything and maan is not blind, but ani is, or he is not full blind or anything like that??
me now totaly confused?!?!
pls continue soon dear!!