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Originally posted by: punam2712

well... i know how many people hating geet...
but its only 4th day in... and you have to bare with her...
it won't be easy to fall for someone...
you have to bare with me...🤢
the rudness... we can see its not her but let her time to calm down..
its not easy when you here your husband is blind and no one bothered to tell you... even when you know its no one fault its natural to bring out your frustration


HEY YOUR STORY IS GREAT. IT IS A NEW CONCEPT AND I AM LOVING EVERY BIT OF IT.
NOBODY CAN HATE GEET HERE, HER FAMILY HAS BETRAYED HER AND THEN FORCED HER TO GO BACK
ALL GIRLS HAVE DREAMS REGARDING THEIR MARRIAGE AND HUSBAND. AND TO COME TO KNOW THAT YOUR HUSBAND IS BLIND AFTER MARRIAGE IS A LOT TO ACCEPT. SHE DIDNT EVEN KNOW HIM BEFORE THE WEDDING, SO CAN SHE HAVE FEELINGS FOR HIM AND ACCEPT HIM THE WAY HE IS. IT IS ONLY WHEN YOU LOVE SOMEBODY THAT ONE ACCEPT ALL THE SHORTCOMINGS
GEET WILL TAKE TIME TO ADJUST AND START TO FEEL SOMETHING FOR HIM
I THINK MAAN WAS MORE AT FAULT HERE
HE SHOULD HAVE TRIED HARDER TO TALK TO HER AND FIND OUT WHETHER SHE KNEW THE TRUTH
BUT WHAT I LIKE IS THE FACT SHE DOESNT FEEL PITY FOR HIM, HE HAS ACCEPTED HIS LIFE AND FOR HER TO PITY HIM WOULD BE LIKE RUBBING SALT ON HIS WOUNDS
LOVE THE WAY YOU HAVE SHOWN HOW INDEPENDENT HE IS AND WHAT ALL HE IS CAPABLE OF DOING
ONE QUESTION - HE IS SO WELL READ - BUT HE DOESNT KNOW WHAT HAPPENS BETWEEN A MAN AND A WOMAN
DEV SHOULD EDUCATE HIM IN THAT ALSO😉






Originally posted by: maureen84

amazing update sweety...

i totaly agree wid u...its only 4 days into her marrige n u can,t fall for someone overnight...
i don,t hate Geet even i understand her POV...
i love this Maan ...
n wanna him to see also...
plz. make Geet working hard to bring back his vision slowly...after they fall in love as its painfull to see him blind




Originally posted by: Ramhari

OMG Geet is so filled with hatred.
It is so much that at the present situation whatever humanity is in her is being completely suppressed.
She cant help but hate Maan.
Poor maan is putting up so much so very well.
He is trying hard to find out and judge what she feels
The more he finds out the more Geet hates him and his smartness.
Geet is too shocked and hurt to realize that blind people are human too they think and feel the same as any others.
She is in no condition to think from others POV.
Hope she doesnt go too far like remorse waala Maan.
Then it would be very difficult to get her man back.
Maan i am sure will put up with all her hatred and anything she throws at him.
But once she realizes her mistake she will repent big time.
Ooops she fainted again.
Wonder whats going to happen next
Waiting for the next part





Originally posted by: maaneet5

Fire kya batavoo is FF se hum kitna jud gaye me din me mail check karna bi bool javoo magar tera update padna nahi bool rahi





Originally posted by: sweet mamtha

REALLY luved this FF👍🏼👏

new concept maan is blind
brillantly written pls continue
add me in ur Pm list





Originally posted by: Madhuri53

Great part...amazing...Yes it is true she get time to underdtand him, his living, his behaviour, everything about him.loved it very much. write such small, touchy moments to express their unkown fondness so that geet start concentrating, understading him without any betrayal.




Originally posted by: sansheen99

so happy that you wrote that part abt maan knowing where geet is without her payell wowhooo i want more parts like that to freak geet out,,,,sooo happy thanks for update...once again plesase dont plan any MUS between these two,...then you wont have to be scared how ppl react...all is well😉




Originally posted by: Maya_P

it's irony how a blind person has the capability to see while the person who can see is blind...both updates were wonderful...i love the fact that u didn't make Geet feel pity.i think right now rudeness is better than pity.and i love Maan zest for life despite being blind...update soon




Originally posted by: blueopal

hey nice updates dear...
finally geet started to notice maan's ability...i mean hearing n sensing ability...
i loved it...looking fwd...

u know one thing ,i promised myself to only open my account in IF during weekends...but u make me to longing for this FF...k am happy by the way...hurry to college...
love u...looking fwd...




Originally posted by: mystique_girl

This story has been going great...


Even I was a bit annoyed at Geet's extreme reaction at first - but again, its justified. Who would in their right senses want to get married to a blind man even though he might be exceptionally capable. If that does happen somehow, there are extreme reasons behind it always - like love - or maybe poverty. In her case its been an arranged one with none of these constraints. So I know she'll take time to cope up and know Maan - only then can she step forward. I just hope she is a bit kind in her behavior towards him and his family. He is not to be blamed for being blind.

This is a unique idea and the storyline is soothing to the heart.

Bravo for taking this up - dont worry - there will be some people who will read this story no matter what becoz of its content.😊




Originally posted by: $ara_$hachi

awesome

why don't Geet understand Maan just like others ... i know she expect a normal love filled life with a hubby who can read her soul & appreciate her beauty but Maan is doing his best ... he can still feel her, know what she maybe thinking, where she could be possibly now ... more than a blind man can do ... the reality is harsh but her behaviour is worst than that ... thank god she is thinking now

plz do cont soon & do PM me




Originally posted by: ritzy09

Hi Keya...just caught up on this FF...banging my head for not reading earlier...it is amazing and beautiul

I love it. Maan is so sensetive...he understands her fear and pain
Geet's reaction is totally understandable...poor girl is in shock...her family was quite traitorus ...if Rano was so sure of Maan's good nature she should have tried to convince her...she is just 19 for god sake...I still remember when I was 19...god I would have freaked out in such a situation
There is huge difference in a 26 yr old girl and someone who is not even a graduate...life teaches you a lot...at such an age it is really a big shock
I am hoping slowly she will get to know his good side...his intelligence...his loving and caring nature...that will calm her down and help her in accepting him and dare I say loving him too



Originally posted by: sakshi04

superb update i don't know why people hating to geet i just come to know by ur wrting that people r hating its just suggestion to people who r hating geet pls try to think from geet pov then u will think that geet is doing nothing if we people r in geet place wt we will do god knows i hope that wt ever happen with nothing should happn in such life but i have heard thiskind of thing also that there are people who marry their daughter to blind or handicapted people only beacause they do want to give money to groom family or say that they don't want to speand money for daughter marraige they will do all possible thing for son marraige but for daughter they think she is the burden on their head this kind of thing already happening so from this fiction try to take possitivity in ur behavoiour and think from geet pov also as for update i hope nothing should happen to geet n for this fiction i know time is the best medicine for maaneet realtion





Originally posted by: crazydevil87

luved d part dear...i like d way geet is attracted tiwards maan atleast their is something to bind geet to maan... dat was awesome wen maan was talking to d couple n geet kept staring maan...
m glad geet behaved nicely wid everyone...
i love it yaar how maan feels her restlessness...n gets restless himself...
oh dat part wen geet was sitting on sofa looking at him mazaa aa gaya...
d way she reacted wen she realised he knew her precsense all d while was funny as well as my heart was doing happy dance because geet thoda thoda hi sahi maan ki intelligence ko samajh rahi hai...
thank u sooo much keya... m officially in luv wid dis 1...





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loved it..each line is amazingly described...& u have given exact pictures collection of maan.
I totally agree with geets frustration anger everything... Sure it will take time for both of them...
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wowew... U r updating...meri toh khushi ke mare ankhen khuli rehgaee...
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Mahsoos...
part 13





Geet slowly opens her eyes, found maans warm hand against her cheek. Her eyes looked here and there, a red mark became visible on the left hand side of her forehead. She picked her hand up and touched gently "ouch..."
"don't touch. Mom have gone to bring you some ice pack."
"your stupid door" she mumbled. Maan kept quit, he found the whole situation rather amusing. A small, tiny small smile became visible barely noticeable.
"lay down, don't worry. You will be fine."
She looked at him with killing gaze.
Couldn't he tell earlier that there is a big stamp on the side. Ugh! Who was she talking to. He is blind.
Avantika walked in with ice pack. "Get up beta, how are you feeling?"
Maan slides his one hand under her neck and another over to the waist, gently picked her up. Avantika held a ice pack, and then soon after one by one whole member of the family walks in to see what exactly what happen! Geet felt like she was in a show, a icon to see. she hid her face and suppressed more under maans arm.
"maan, I think now you should consider moving it, what if something serious happen."
"I warned her... But it was to late."
Everyone nodded there head in shame at the same time, geets eyes widens further it was like a robot.
"yes, when vicky went to the hospital, dev nearly went to bed rest for 2 days and poor anni now she always bends before going in to that room and shall I make a list."
"I am blind not anyone els!"
His one word took the amusement way from everyone's mouth. He was dead serious, and that petrified any one. The whole room was silent like a graveyard and geet with shockingly gazed upon her so called husband with fear. Oh gosh, this is blind bully, but why she had a gut feeling he kept it for something els.

One by one everyone left, after almost 3 days they managed to see the new bride. Situation around the house wasn't easing but it was surly in a positive direction.

Next morning, geet slowly opens her eyes. Looking here and there. She picked her self up and some weird reason she gazed at maan door. It was 7 am. She have lose the habit of waking up early after leaving collage! Collage. Geets eyes widens. Friends. She have friends... Geet took her phone from the side and called anjali...
"GEET..." she shrikes
Geet took the phone far way from her ears. Rolling her eyes..
"so tell me how was the S.R" her voice sounded supper cheesy...
Geet looked down... Her eyes filled up again in the thought her husband is blind. She wiped it off and slowly whispered "hi..."



"so, 4th day, when do you want to give your friends some time? Or shall we come home and steal you from ji-ja-jis eyes..." she teased.. "I bet he didn't let you go anywhere, not even for a second. Wants you right in front of his eyes"

Oh this wasn't easy at all, not it sounded more patronizing. "can you please be quit."
"fine fine... Give the phone to jijaji... I bet you lot are still in bed."
Geet looks at her empty bed, just by her self... "he is not here!"
"oh... So that's why you called us... Where is he?"

Geet suddenly hard the noise again, his heavy breath. She stood up on the bed, listening to anjalis rubbish and then slowly walked towards his room, she looked at her payel. It was making loud nouse as usual, she took them apart and then slowly opens the door...






Maan again was in his usual exercise. His every muscle became visible. Mark in every part, she had this temptation to walk by and touch every part, mahsoos the warmth, the bare skin, the crawling sweat. She lost the phone somewhere. She peaked from one side of the door. The dark Hazel brown eyes observed each contraction of each muscle. She hold one of the pillar, leaning towards the open door, making minimal noise as possible, her heartbeat rose in an incredible speed. Parting the pink lips, inhaling much oxygen as possible. Her foot held the ground. Frozen... She pepped further as maan moved through out the room, she was like a dog on the floor, half in her room while another half in maans room...
As he moved the door locked the view, but then suddenly maan came stood in front of him. Geet jumped sitting back on her soft but, moving backward, breathing even harder. His surprising appearance was only petrifying him...

"geet?" he could sense she is on the floor, specially how the payel bashing against the floor. "what are you doing on the floor?"
Geet quickly stood up, rubbing all the dust off. "au, me- umm..." her eyes looked everywhere but not his face. Which was giving her one of the most pathetic look ever.
"your friend!" he held the phone from his room. She was bubbling on and on, specially after knowing it's tere ji-ja-ji"
He made a irritating face. Not that he did not like it but she talks to much.
Geet quickly snapped the phone from him "I will call you later" and cuts the call.
"you can talk! I am leaving."
"I- oh- umm..." geet twisted her nightdress, highly short and very low... The sexy night dress completely went out of her head as she was still gazing him up and down, and somewhere thanking good he can't see.
"my friends having a collage party. I want to go."
"do you want me to drop you?"
"NO!" she quickly adds...

Geet got ready and stepped out of the room for the first time, she have completely kicked the thought out that a newly wedded lady not suppose to go anywhere without her husband. As she hurriedly walked down bumping in to vicky & anni...

"bhavi?" vicky stopped her while anni with a smile. Geet still remembers the other day when she have been beyond rude. She was becoming a witch. Geet hated that thought.

"are you going somewhere?" anni wondered.
"yes, my collage party." she quietly answers.
Meantime one of there aunt came around. Looking at geets jeanse and top. She instantly didn't like it but, she ignored it.
Geet tried to bend down to touch her foot but she stops, kissing her forehead.
"really good to see you out."
Geet looks down with a force full smile. "are you going somewhere?"
"yes, au, meri collage party."
"aww, that's great. You enjoy your self... Vicky, come with me. You have to help me with some garden plan." bua looks at anni and vicky while geet tries to disappear.
"but I am taking anny out!"
Bua thought for a while then looks at geet, "geet why don't you take anny."

Geet looked at anny with fear then at bua. She wanted to say no desperately, what if she muddles up. Her leg was already giving up... She smiled unwantedly and looked at ani which bua took as a yea.
"that's great let's go vicky"
"thank you bhavi"

\thanks for all the lovely comments it really means allot...
gosh one more part in few hours :D
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Edited by FIRESafiReFIRE - 13 years ago
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hey!!!!!!!!!!!!

yaaayyy!!! me first, ive never been first to comment on your fanfics!!! 😉Thankyou for updating😛, i love your fanfics cause they are soo realistic, different and original...im sick of reading the same old maan business tycoon and poor old innocent geet🥱🥱🥱..so coming to the update:
👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏
we can sooo see that for geet kuch kuch hota hai!!!! 😆its good to see she is over the fact, that her husbend is blind...but i wonder how they will become close, i feel sorry for maan,😭 he seems so nice yet geet is being mean to him😡...thankyouuu for updating🤗 and please continue soon and please oh please oh please, don't end it quickly, pleeeaseee😭😭😉
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thanks for the update
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Can I say I am in love with this ff
It's just so natural
I love geet & maan chracter this couple far the best
Oh I really love how geet answers back but still frighten
And maan I don't think he is all calm man
Lol
He looks I don't know, I am in love with him.
And haha he got irritated with geet friend.
And I am bit worried about the party
Why do I have bad feeling?

Update next part soon

Not few hours right now
Then go and do your study
This ff is so addictive
Edited by BadGirlKiss - 13 years ago
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awesome Keya...Maan can actually feel her...it is kind of uncanny
precap is promising...i really want Geet to have good time with Annie and understand what a gem she is. It will be ok if at first it is out of guilt of being bad to her but I seriously hope some posiitve comes out of this trip

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