OS:A blessing in Disguise(NainitalTrip Part3/pg22)

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taniks

@taniks

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#11

Pls continue it is so interestin

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@-SilverAngel-

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#12

Originally posted by: the_rain

Great one Mahi, it's exactly like Khushi to blame it on Arnav...I was giggling madly on the line, "koi apni gari ki dikki check karray bagair kaisay itnay lambay safar par nikal jata hai..."

Really, she's a one-piece sample...😆

Aur likho! *greedy* 😈

Thanksss so much for liking it Bristy... will try to write more to it...Khushi truly is one piece... one in a million... after all she's the one made for Arnav na? so she has to be special... Aik Raakshas aur aik Pari ki kahaani!!

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littlemoi

@littlemoi

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#13

mahi this is sooo good!!!

you have to continue!!!

i seriously can see this happening in the show!!

awesome job!!

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Hanieya Rehman

@Haniibee

Navigator

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#14

It was very sweet! Not too passionate or over-the-top but totally cute and funny just like our very own Jalebi Bai! I loved the way you kept her and Arnav in character while creating a good 'rabba ve' scene!

Thanks a lot! Keep writing!

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..Anj..

@..Anj..

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#15

wah kya OS likhi hai thumne mahi 👏
mazha aa gaya

my like button is not working but i told u na that..
i loved it!!!!!!

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pri12

@pri12

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#16

amazing ...totally luved it...hope real mein bhi aisa ho jaye

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SillyPepper

@SillyPepper

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#17

Hey Mahiya...Awesum gal!

dekhiye hum Anjali ji say kaheingay kay aapko roz subha saat badaam (almonds) khilaayen takay dimag ki batti toh jalay."

This one cracked me!

Loved it!

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Afreen

@-GredForge-

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#18

awww mahi this is sooo cute!beatifully written!<3 it!:)

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priya pinky daswani

@pinky_blueskies

Stunner

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#19

Fantastic OS, Mahi.. I could picture out the whole thing!

It's amazing.. I just loved it!

The ending part when Arnav goes out to check on Khushi but sees her in the hallway was just AWWW.. 😍

I'm excited to watch ArHi in Naintal already!😳

Edited by prinky02 - 13 years ago

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BIackSwan

@BIackSwan

Trailblazer

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#20

maaahiyaaa 🤗 🤗 🤗

one jappi from me, one from arnie & da other one from kushiji...

loved ur os darlin! da latter part is def happening tomoro cuz our kushi girl is sooo not gonna sleep alone! i wanna see an arhi hug tomoro just like u'v written here...

mwaaah love u!

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