MG SS : Abandoned;[COMPLETED] last part @ pg 18 - Page 9

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Posted: 13 years ago
#81
hai

this is awesome
i think dev is fraud
he is using geet
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Posted: 13 years ago
#82
waiting...when are you going to update...???
Tyro thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
#83
sorry for not updating for three days...

was busy with festivals...

if u want i can update now...but it will take half an hour...

otherwise tomorrow...definitely i will update...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#84
As per your convenience dear
will be waiting
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Posted: 13 years ago
#85
really interesting story so far...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#86

Hi all

How r u

Thanks a lot for your comments and likes

It really matters a lot.

Here is the next part.



PART 12




Geet comes out of her room and starts to look for a secure place where she will be able to do the transaction.




A nurse comes in Geet's room to check on her, but she does not find her.




Here Geet finds a computer. She hides below the counter so that nobody will be able to see her. She tries to log in, but to her dismay the computer is password protected and she is unable to connect.




The nurse calls the security and says, "The patient is room 4A is missing. Her name, Geet Handa."




The security man tells her, "Okay. Look out for her. I will inform Naintara Ma'am."




Geet is again running, trying to find another computer. She comes in front of a door where it is written- Admin Head. She at once enters the room.




In the security room, Satish is continuously trying to locate Geet while Naintara and Kartar are standing there.




Naintara breaks the silence and speaks, "Till she is here, in this hospital, she is my responsibility."




Kartar says, "I will find her. Trust me Ma'am. If you permit I will tell my men to do everything possible to find her."




Naintara nods and says, "Okay. Do it. She is a patient. And I also want a security man on her room in case she decides to come back."




In the Admin room, Geet was able to log in the computer. She opens the official website, logs in her account, enters the amount to be transferred. The computer asks to CONFIRM it. She is hesitating whether to do this or not.




Naintara comes out of the security room, enters the elevator and is coming towards her cabin.




Geet presses YES to confirm the transaction.




After that she slowly slips out of the cabin.




Maan is in his car, driving, but is unable to concentrate. All that happened was bothering him. It all looked suspicious but he was not able understand what it was.




Geet runs down the stairs after coming out of the room to go the location.




Maan parks his car, enters his office with the book in his hand which he forgot to give to Geet and goes directly into his cabin.




Geet enters an abandoned area in the hospital and looks around to find someone. Many of the walls have been broken down and there were long plastic curtains flying with the wind.





Geet shouts, "Someone here? Anyone?"




As she says this, she sees Hari entering with a limping Dev, holding Dev with one arm and carrying a gun in his other hand.




She sees this and says, "Let him go."




Hari holds his hand even tighter. Dev winces.




Geet is now more worried for him, she takes out her mobile and tells him, "See this. I need to send an e-mail to complete. So you better let him go."




Maan looks at the book in front of him and he sees a bookmark in it. He opens the page where the bookmark is and starts to read.




Hari lets him go and Dev at once goes to Geet and hugs her.




Dev on hugging Geet is very relieved. Geet also is very relieved and says, "I thought I had lost u forever."




Hari takes out his mobile and calls someone.




Caribbean Island: [All that is happening on the island bank will be coloured in purple]




A man is talking with a client and says, "This is the best bank on the island. You can trust us. your work will be done properly."




Suddenly his mobile rings. He excuses himself and picks up his call.




Hari says, "Have you received it?"




He says, "I am on it. Will go and check now."




Dev comes out of the hug and says, "Great work honey. Fantastic."




He goes a little backward, looks at Hari and says, "Let's take this brace out. It is really hurting me now."




Geet looks baffled and asks, "What are you doing?"




Dev looks at her, makes an innocent face and says, "Haven't you been paying attention? There is no Dev."




Geet is not able to understand, "Dev?"




He smiles, shakes his head and says, "There is no Dev."




...

As I will be updating daily, the updates will be short and I don't think PM will be required


This is about to end. Just two more parts, i think.


If still some of you require PM, let me know by leaving a comment.

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Posted: 13 years ago
#87
awesome
So there Dev that is acting as Dev is the real crook
Cont soon
Luv
TC
Atiffa
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Posted: 13 years ago
#88
Thanks for the update dear
OMG Dev is a crook
Poor Geet
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Posted: 13 years ago
#89
Uh oh oh that was a shocker
Poor Geet was completely manipulated
Hope Maan comes to the resue soon
waiting for the next part
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Posted: 13 years ago
#90
Just came across this SS and I have to say it is fab!!!!
Love the story!!!
Please add me to your pm list
Saba xxx

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