MG SS : Abandoned;[COMPLETED] last part @ pg 18 - Page 8

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Posted: 13 years ago
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oh my my this is just getting better
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Wonderful...mystery is getting more mysterious...😕
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Posted: 13 years ago
#73
OMG thanks for the update
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Posted: 13 years ago
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it is getting more mysterious
awesome update
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hi all

How r u

Thanks a lot for your comments and likes

It really matters a lot.

Here is the next part.



PART 11





Maan is standing with a doctor looking through the glass window.




Inside, Geet is lying on the bed, still under the effect.




Maan was lost looking in her when the doctor called his attention.




The doctor says, "She might be in here for a while."




Before he responds to doctor, he gets a call on his mobile.




The one sided conversation was like this:




"Yes Sir……Everything okay??...ok…………..I will be there soon…….right Sir….."





Then he turns towards the doctor and says, "Are you sure she will be fine?"




The doctor nodded at him.




Maan looks at the watch; doctor sees this and says, "You can go if you want."




Maan looks at him and says, "Okay. Just take care of her and in case of any problem, here, take my card and call me."




He leaves from there.




After some time Geet wakes up and is sitting on her bed.




Someone knocks on the door and says, "May I come in?"




Geet smiles and says, "Hari ji."




He also smiles and says, "I heard what happened. Here take this," he hands her a bouquet.




Geet takes it, keeps it aside and says, "They think I am crazy."




He gives a sympathetic look and says, "No, you are not. You just want to see Dev."




He continues, "You made an outburst and got into an accident. You have to be careful. You lost your mom and dad. You are living alone with only Dev by your side. You work with the RBI in the Deposit account department. You are the AGM. In fact with the recent economic slowdown, you have been given the responsibility of filling up other banks' account."




"That is true. But how do you know all this?"




"I have done my research."




He then takes out his mobile and shows a picture of Dev with bruise on his face and says, "You have access to unlimited funds."




(Please imagine Dev's face instead of this guy.)



Geet gets angry and says, "Don't, don't you dare hurt him," she then takes a breath and says, "So, how much?"




"50 crores."




Geet looks at him in a disgusting way.




"I want you to wire transfer all the money to island i.e. the Carribean. Here are the details of the account."




Geet takes her mobile and says, "Shit!"




Hari looks at her and says, "What happened?"




Geet replies, "I have no wi-fi."




Hari looks at his mobile and says, "I have checked mine."




He seems irritated and calls his man, and says to her, "I didn't think I have to do this but now, need to do hard time."




The call is picked up and he says, "Cut his finger."




Geet gets scared and says, "No, wait, see," she keeps her mobile in front of his eyes and says, "I can't. There is no signal."




Hari looks at it and then says to his man, "Hold it."




He then looks at Geet and says, "You have 30 minutes to find a computer and do this. If you tell or do anything else, Dev dies."




Geets sighed and says, "Okay."




He then gives her a location and says, "Meet me here after doing everything."



...

As I will be updating daily, the updates will be short and I don't think PM will be required


You all can check the thread


If still some of you require PM, let me know by leaving a comment.

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Posted: 13 years ago
#76
love it.
so someone kidnap dev for money
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Posted: 13 years ago
#77
awesome
Some one has kidnap Dev for money
Poor Geet
Cont soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
#78
Hey dear awesome update!!! aww she's fine...wow yet i think it's dev's plan to get the money
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Posted: 13 years ago
#79
uh oh oh
somebody kidnapped Dev
Poor Geet is caught now
Wonder how she is going to manage
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Posted: 13 years ago
#80
Thanks for the update dear
i have a feeling that Dev is also involve in this plan

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