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Posted: 13 years ago
#41
Maybe like his mom left him at the age of 1 to pursue acting and she tries coming back and past first please 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
#42
confusion followed my maans past
maan past gf should be like she si not respecting his family or may be she is falling for other man also at the same time
dont no its upto u
u decided and give us a soon update dear
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Posted: 13 years ago
#43
Confession first Plz
Then the Past
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Posted: 13 years ago
#44
confession pls ...

also maan's past in a different way, probably we can show that maan and his gf are in love, and she gets killed, something like that...so sam is not the villian here for once 😆
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Posted: 13 years ago
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first confession then maan's past ...

ok it can be like she ditched him 4 some other guy ...

or just playing with him as in a passing affair ...

or may be ... she ditched him 4 modeling n stuff ..

or may be ... she was with him just coz he was hot n handsome ... like show off sake ...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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First confession and then Maan's past..
Which could be the due Maan's estranged parents whose love failed...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Heyy Nazmaa ! Superb :D i've read all in one shot .. too good :) Could you please add me to ur pm!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
#48

Hey Guys!!😊

Well I Did Say I Was Going To Just Update On Weekends But I Couldn't Help Myself ..
I Have Updated And Well Lets Just Say I Want Loads Of Comments Than Usual..
2514 Words In Just This One Update..
And My Bum Has Gone Numb Sitting For 2 Hours Straight.
Hope You Like It..

Chapter 35.. Total Words!!! 2514 Words...

Maan, Yash, Prem And Arjun had arranged for everything... From flowers, to candles,drapes to lightin and even the food.. He was going to make this special for his Mishty.. His Geet.. He thought about what arjun had said but to think about it but he wanted everything to be Perfect with him and geet.. Whatever Happened in the past was in the past... He Was Possesive when it came to his ex-girlfriend...

He Decorated The Pool First.. He started sprinkling the rose petal on the water put all the kept doing was sink... he tried again and got frustrated.. He went to Yash...

Arre Yaar Mujse yeh nahi hota... " He Said Makin a face.

Yash Sighed! He looked at the pool and shook his head... Maan was right He Could do that..

"Dekh Yeh Sab Hum Char Log Nahi kar sakta" he said to the guys.

"Veerji.. Ek Kaam Kyun Nah karta.. Hum Armaan bhai Ko bulaleh??" he asked Yash..

"Armaan>?" maan repeated...

"Armaan! Humara Chacha ka beta!" he said...

"Vo in sab main ek expert hai" Said Arjun Laughing

"Is Neh Yeh Sab Bohat Bar kar Chucka Hai" Yashed Grinned...

"Haan Phir Bula Lo Usko" Said Maan...

They called armaan and he came... he told them what to do and how to do it..

All 5 boys Set out to work..

They all started Putting Rose Petals in the pool covering the water... the Sprinkled lots and lots of Petals until they stayed at the top..

Then Armaan placed Candles All Around the garden making sure itwould look beautiful and romantic when the candles will be lit.. look . Yash Placedone candle in 1 plate.. he did this three times... He Passed the Plates to Prem Who Then With Help Of Arjun Placed them in the kitchen... they told maan when he comes here to make sure all the candles are lit...

He Then Set up the table.. He Put outwhite plates and napkins... Cutlery and the chairs..

He Made sure everything Looked perfect.. He quickly got a plate and put it near the enterance with a rose on top of a small table near the cloakroom.. he put a few candles around the plate and a few small red petals around the plate...

He asked his workers to do the rest of the setting up while he goes home for a rest.. he also told them to make sure before they came all candles were lit and the three plates with candle on them he wanted them lit too and placed in the water... he always wanted the small lights that are for the verenda to be put on aswell...

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Geet had been sittin down thinking of who could have sent her the teddy.. she was sittin on her bed with the teddy in her hand.. she thought maan must of sent it but still was unsure...

"Maan yeh nahi baaj sakta." she said out loud!!!

"Lekin Agar maan ne bayja tho?" she questioned...

"Haii..." she sighed..

She got up of her bed and placed her teddy back down on the side table.. she sat infront of the mirror and started combin her hair... She was about to get up and go down when her phone rang..

"Hello?" she Answered..

"Geet" Came a voice..

"Maan SIR" she said... emphasizin the sir part..

"Haan Geet.. " He said...

"Kya Hua Sir... Aap ne Phone Kyun Kiya?" questioned Geet..

"Vo.. Geet..." he started off...

"Haan Sir Bolo" she Cut In...

"Geet Aaj" he started off again only to be Cut off

"Bolo na sir." she said Giggling Silently.

"GEEET!! Chup! Bilkul Chup!! Aab tum chup rahogi aur main bolunga!! He said with anger and frustration in his voice..

"Hmmm" she said... Making a sad face...

"Geet aaj Humari meeting hai..." he said seriously..

"Kya!!! Aaj?? Lekin SIR AAj tho sunday hai" She said shocked...

"Haan Geet.. Yeh Meetin Humara Compan Ke Liye Important Hai.. Isilye Humme Aaj yeh Meetin Attend Karni Padagi..." he said .. Maan was trying his best not to laugh out loud but he couldn't help it... so he put his hand in his mouth to supress the laughter...

"Lekin Maan.. Main Veerji Ke Saath Shopping Ke Liye Jana Tha".. She said sadly and startin pouting... suddenly all her plans of emptying her veerji's pockets had gone down the drain

"Sorry Geet.. Lekin yeh bhi tho important hai haina??" he qestioned her... as soon as he heard her speak again.. he felt bad for lying to her about the meeting.. which was not going to happen really .. but then he thought she'd love the suprise And When she see's how much he has worked for this little confession date than she'd love him even more...

"Hmm.. Haan.. Maan Main Veerji Ko Bol Kar Aaithe Hoon. Waise Kitne Baja Ki Hai..?" she asked him, hoping she could get atleast an hours shopping Done at the latest.. she looked at the watch it was only 1..

" Geet meeting saath baje ki hai.." he told her..

"7?.. Maan Main Pehle Shopping Karoo ?? Please Maan... Main Jaldi ghar aajauengi Ready Hone Ki Liye?? she pleaded .. hoping he would say yeah..

Maan thought about it.. Maybe he should just let her shop first.. after all Her brothers knew the plan..

"Haan Geet.. Tum Shopping Karne ke Liye jana Hmm" he told her...

"Thank You Thank You Thank You" she Screamed in happiiness down the phone...

"Geet Main Tumhe 6.15 Pick Up Karne Ke Liya Aajunga.. Hmm.. Vo Hum Meeting Ek Resurant Main Karenga.. Okay Bye" he said in a hurry and put the phone down beffore she could get another say in...

Geet looked at her phone..

"Dusht Danav!!" She Said Angry That he cut her off without letting her say bye..

Geet shook her head and realized she had time to do her shoppin.. so she got ready and ran downstairs And Dragged Yash, Prem,Arjun And Arohi To The Mall To shop...

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Geet had got out her White sari & backless blouse...

Back Of Geet -

she had straightened her hair and left it down covering her bare back.

Front Of Geet-

She Wore Simply Jewellary As she liked the plain look She Had Her Heavy Earings On ... She did her admake up & Waited For Maan..

Maan had come he walked in the house, eyes searchin for geet... He went to the living room...

He had White on too... With his Black Trousers.. More In A Formal Look...

He waited for Geet to come down... She Had covered herself in a long black jacket with wouldnt show anything she was wearing... she thought of suprising maan.. "why not" she thought.. "I might aswel Have My Own Fun From This Dinner" She Lauhed silently...

Maan Looked towards the stairs as he heard Yash Gasp... He Saw Geet coming Down in a black Lon Jacket.. Covering Her Entire Body... She Looked Beautiful Even though he didnt know what she was wearin...

Geet saw maan... He Looked HOT!! she thought... she blushed slightly..

"Chale Geet" he said..

"Hmm" she replied... and off they went..

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They reached his Outhouse... both out of the car Geet was confussed this wasn't A resurant... she looked at the building.. it looked beautiful..

"sir yeh tho resturant nahi hai??" she said confused...

"Haan Geet Janatha hoon" he replied...

"Phir??" she questioned.. Raising her eyes at him...

"Geet Aaj Yeh Humara Liya Hai..."

"Matlab" she asked still not understan ding What was going on//

"Geet Just come in side" he said... he walked in followed by Geet...

"Geet Tum Apna Coat Waha Rako Main Abhi Ata Hoon..." he said and left her coat in the cloak room he showed her...

She hung her coat up and turned around to see a table with A rose on the plate and Candles around it... it looked beautiful.. A Note Next to it..

"Geet For You"

...

She picked the rose up and smiled... She waited for Maan to come.. Once maan came he froze as he took he.. he checked her out with his eyes... She Looked beautiful he thought.., She Could feel his eyes undressin her and this made her blush... Her heart started thumpin..

"Geet You Look Mouth Watering Beautiful" He whispered in her ear slowly... unable to take this closeness she hugged him in shyness and fear... His hands automatically reached her waist... He Stopped breathing as he Felt her bare back... Controlling himself he removed her from his arms and he took her outside... she went out and stopped as she took in the beautiful sight...

Her eyes watered as she looked around... Maan did all this for me she thought.. Smiling and Crying at the same time...

She saw maan Behind her.. She Could Felt His eyes gazin at her.. She looked up at him and blushed...

He then Guided her to the table wherre she got another shock..

"Maan why did you do this" she said eyes watering...

"Geet Tumhara liye" he replied honestly..

They sat down and had their dinner...

CONFESSION TIME PEOPLE!!MAY CONTAIN SCENES UNAPPROPRIATE FOR UNDER 18'S

Geet Looked at maan who was lookin back at her.. He didn't know where to start...

"geet aaj main tumse ek baat karna chahta hoon" he started off saying..

"Pata hai jab se maine tumhe dekha hai Geet, dil main ek aajeeb se kashish hoti hai... tumhara naam sirf ek hai jo mujhe mera saasain cheen sakthi hai... jab main tumhe dekhta hoon je karda hai ke main tumhe apni bahoon mein leh loon.. Jab tum dukhie hoti ho tho mein dukhie hota hoon... Tumhe apne saath lena ka maan karta hai... tumhe is duniya se chupa loon.. jaake koi bhi daard koi bhi aasoon tumhara paas na aa sakay.. jab tumhara saath vo hua hai na mujhe us din se aaj tak us dev ko zinda marnea ka maan karta hai.. usse vo dukh do jo usne tumhe diya hai.." he said walking towards her... he smiled at her while walking towards her.. his heart thumping.. his arms paining just to hug her...

Geet was crying now.. Crying in Happiness as she Felt had recived the world greatest gift.. Her Love... she was going to get her love...

"Maan pata hai.. jab aapne Pari ko ghar leh kar aaye tho mujhe aap par bohat gussa aaraha tha.. Is pyar naam ka shabd par gussa aaraha tha... Jab se mera haat ko chot lagi hai us din se main aapko bohat nafrat karti thi..." she said... she looked at him.. with anger and frustration..

"Phir mujhe meera ne baatiya ki aap ko Mera haath Ke chor se bohat gussa thay aapne aap par.. aur vo mujhe kehne lagi ke aap mujse pyaar karta hai" she stopped.. she was stood right infront of him... tears streaming down her face... he lifted his hands to wipe her tears.. as his had touched her face Geer shivered..

"Geet.. Vo sach keh rahi thi... i was soo angry at myself for bringin pari in... and when i said pari was my girlfriend i didn't expect you to get hurt... seeing the blood from your hands flow nd that too because of me made me feel guilty and mad... " he said and slowly backed off..

Geet Stopped him...

"Maan, I Love You.. " She Said.. Smiling Crying...

Maan Stopped... He looked at geet... he could see genuine love in her eyes for him.. he knew she wasn't sameera... he knew she was the real deal.. she was for keeps..

Maan Turned around And hinting to the Band players to play the song...

[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ek0OzWuB24c[/YOUTUBE]

LISTEN TO SONG ASWELL LOL :p

Maan walked infront of Geet and Went Down on One Knee... He held her hand and gestured her to sit on the chair with his eyes... Geet sat on the chair.. He looked into her eyes and started singing..

Dil ka yeh kya raaz hai, jaane kya kar gaye
Jaise andhero mein tum, chaandni bhar gaye

Geet looked into his eyes and saw how he was feeling.. His eyes was conveying his feelings.. His love for her was real..

Dil ka yeh kya raaz hai, jaane kya kar gaye
Jaise andhero mein tum, chaandni bhar gaye
Kare chaand taaron ko, mashoor itna kyun
Kambakht inn se bhi khoobsurat hai


Geet felt shy with his constant Nazar.. she let her hand out of his and ran... she stopped behind a pillar and started panting regaining her breath.. her chest movin up and down.. Maan stood behind her.. she felt nervous...


I love you, tu ru ru... Yeah yeah... (3)
Din bhar kare baatein hum, phir bhi lagey baatein adhoori aaj kal
Mann ki dehleezon pe koi aaye na, bas tum zaroori aaj kal
Abhr main hoon, tu aasmaan hai
Paas hai tu, par kahaan hai
Zidd meri tu nahin, meri aadat hai tu
I love you... I love you... I love you

She shivered alittle feeling cold.. he immediately Hugged her from behind.. his arms around her waist laying on her stomach.. her hand covered his making his tightened his hold on her... his face nuzzled in her neck... he kissed a little below her ear a bit her slowly.. Geet blushed and tightend her own hold on his arms... she moved into his warmth... smiling..

Kabhi kabhi main khud se hoon yeh poochta
Main tere kaabil bhi hoon kya
Itna toh mujhe hai maloom mil ke tujhe
Behtar main insaan bann gaya
Thoda thoda, tujhse seekha
Pyaar karne ka tareeka
Dil ke khuda ki mujhpe inaayat hai tu
I love you.. I love you..


She Turned around and hugged him tightly kissing his chest.. tears flowin down her cheeks... arms around his back and her head placed right above his heart...


Dil ka yeh kya raaz hai, jaane kya kar gaye
Jaise andhero mein tum, chaandni bhar gaye
Kare chaand taaron ko, mashoor itna kyun
Kambakht inn se bhi khoobsurat hai tu

she moved back alittle still in his hold.. moved his shirt so she can view his left hand sidee of his chest... She slowly bent her head and placed a kiss just where his heart is... She Whispered "I Love You, Maan." She let her lips linger there until a drop of her tears caused maan to move her head back..


I love you.. I love you...

" I Love You Geet" He moved her head back.. using his thumb her wiped the tears from her face.. leaving small kisses just above her eyes... he kissed her forehead to let her know that no matter what happens he will always be there for her... no matter what lie brings them they will face it together good times and bad.. she Moved her arms around his neck.. she looked into his eyes and it felt like time had completely stopped.. she slowly came out of the small eye lock and let her eyes roam his face.. her eyes stopped at his lips. a small hesitation but then like she got power from No-where She Kissed him..

She Place her lips above his and kissed him hard.. Let him know how she Feels... How much she loves him.. How much she needs him.

Precap -

Geet's Love Put To A Test When Maan's Past Is Revealed..

Please Comment And Like
P.S Sorry for late pm... india forums was down yesterday.. Also i am still updating at the weekend so don't worry lol :P
Edited by Nazmaa - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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awesome dear loved it wanting to know about maan's past
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Posted: 13 years ago
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confession first...n now past...waiting but no MU between maaneet plz
Edited by monika1992 - 13 years ago

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