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Posted: 13 years ago
epilogue
seriously dear u have now made me question myself about my comments...
firstly thanks for this lovely FF and epilogue...
i had accepted Maan however hes before epilogue but after the Sameera's letter i feel that idiot is really an idiot...
sigh not only did he try to punish himself but the torture he gave Geet for no reason at all was so foolish on his side that too when she was needing him so much...
hes the biggest fool on earth...
Geet has accepted him now as she cant live without him and accepted him with all his faults and sins, as she thought...
but Maan duffer could have cleared it before itself coz she was PREGNANT at that time and not just lovers to have done this to her...
but well am happy that he didnt get intimate with Sameera and i felt though he doesnt feel anything for Sameera still he left something to her which is basically Geet's by getting intimate...
but thanks dear for this wonderful FF...
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: spvd

epilogue
seriously dear u have now made me question myself about my comments...
firstly thanks for this lovely FF and epilogue...
i had accepted Maan however hes before epilogue but after the Sameera's letter i feel that idiot is really an idiot...
sigh not only did he try to punish himself but the torture he gave Geet for no reason at all was so foolish on his side that too when she was needing him so much...
hes the biggest fool on earth...
Geet has accepted him now as she cant live without him and accepted him with all his faults and sins, as she thought...
but Maan duffer could have cleared it before itself coz she was PREGNANT at that time and not just lovers to have done this to her...
but well am happy that he didnt get intimate with Sameera and i felt though he doesnt feel anything for Sameera still he left something to her which is basically Geet's by getting intimate...
but thanks dear for this wonderful FF...


opps!!! i expect this reaction from you after that epilogue i was eagerly waiting for your comment over this epi...😆😆😆
maan is really a fool...

but at that time during pregency geet is not in mood to listen to any of his words if he said any thing at that time also she might not have believed him... she not even want to read that letter...😕

Its all misunderstanding... maan is feeling guilty one side and geet is thinking as he cheated...
but at last both understood there love... Its matter is in it..? these one year proved how much they love each other...



i want to tell you this special thanks to you for commenting on each and every part... i used to wait for your comments some times..😳





Edited by nishha - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
lovely ff...

beautiful end...

do PM me when u write a new one...
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: nishha


opps!!! i expect this reaction from you after that epilogue i was eagerly waiting for your comment over this epi...😆😆😆
maan is really a fool...

but at that time during pregency geet is not in mood to listen to any of his words if he said any thing at that time also she might not have believed him... she not even want to read that letter...😕

Its all misunderstanding... maan is feeling guilty one side and geet is thinking as he cheated...
but at last both understood there love... Its matter is in it..? these one year proved how much they love each other...



i want to tell you this special thanks to you for commenting on each and every part... i used to wait for your comments some times..😳








thank dear for liking my comments...its always like this i read the before day and comment the next day...anyways back to this i liked the way twas handled and most importantly he did nothing but still punished himself for even starting it or guilt like we say...but he could have some how sworn and made her listen hes still hers in every way...i wouldnt have minded had it been before their marriage or before she was expecting but either werent the case...u know how it would have been for a pregnant woman who loves her hubby to no extent gets betrayed when its actually not and getting the torture and being at the receiving end and the emotional turmoil in this their case for no reason...thats why i said Maan is an idiot...but now their relationship is much more stronger and forever...just i imagined the story in reality dear so only mad at Maan now...but liked it either wise that ths story's end before and after the epilogue...liked it...hope u get my point...
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: spvd

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thank dear for liking my comments...its always like this i read the before day and comment the next day...anyways back to this i liked the way twas handled and most importantly he did nothing but still punished himself for even starting it or guilt like we say...but he could have some how sworn and made her listen hes still hers in every way...i wouldnt have minded had it been before their marriage or before she was expecting but either werent the case...u know how it would have been for a pregnant woman who loves her hubby to no extent gets betrayed when its actually not and getting the torture and being at the receiving end and the emotional turmoil in this their case for no reason...thats why i said Maan is an idiot...but now their relationship is much more stronger and forever...just i imagined the story in reality dear so only mad at Maan now...but liked it either wise that ths story's end before and after the epilogue...liked it...hope u get my point...


yeah i get your point some what i think...😉

you know my climax is part 50...
and an happy ending with sam's letter as in jillunu oru kadhal movie..😆

but at last i change my mind after seeing more negative comments about maan's attitude in that sameera 's part so changed that letter as a trick and changed the climax..😳😳

to make every one happy😃 at the end its not part of my story...😳


i don't want some one to feel that geet is sacrificing her life by forgiving maan for me both are important characters...😛

any ways story ends and in a happy note...😃


Edited by nishha - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: nishha


unaku adu adventure story mariya theriyudu..😕 poi nalla mental hospital ah pathu admit aagu..🤣🤣🤣


adventure story 😕 lol 😆

Akka Chennaila keelpaakathulaiye admit pannalama

IIlai madurai na Ratna mental hospital la admit pannalam

but i thimk keelpaakam oru nalla choice 😆
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: nishha



he he...😆 its just a trick to prove there love any ways happy ending you loved na..
😃


adha ippadi dhan prove pannanuma

COK madiri letter pootu mudchuteenga

but thank god idhu happy ending ff

illaina neenga ithanneram bhai kadaila irupeenga
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Posted: 13 years ago
great dear... maan never cheated Geet... nd finally she came 2 know abt dat...
HappY Ending... lovelyyy
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Posted: 13 years ago
read it in one go loved it
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Posted: 13 years ago
sorry sorry sorry sorry sorry sorry sorry sorry sorry sorry sorry sorry sorry sorry sorry sorry sorry sorry sorry

for the late comment

awesomne dear👏 ⭐️
loved it a lot🤗

ana oru vishathula naan unmela semma kadsupila irukken😡

adi paavi 😡 oru thapum seyyale maan . enga ellaraiyum avana hate panna vachuttale 😡

ana kadaiseelaiyavadhu unmaiya sonnadhala nee bai kadaila irundhu thapicha

illaina nee gaali

any ways

oru 2nd epilogue kudukka mudiyma pls

wanna see maaneet with 2nd baby😳


awesome dear

i wanna be with u la aarambame seriousa irukku

why this kolavri is right opposite

love ur works dear ❤️


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