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Posted: 14 years ago

#161

Nice part...
Loved maan's feeling ...
cont soon...

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Posted: 14 years ago

#162

nice one. thanks for the pm

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Posted: 14 years ago

#163

nice n lovely update.keep it up😃

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Posted: 14 years ago

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Posted: 14 years ago

#165

wow!lovely update dear👏
waiting for next part😍

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Posted: 14 years ago

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Originally posted by: tanei
update sooon plzzz:)

I update last week but unfortunately it get lost due to power failure today am going to update again in the evening..😃...

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Part 13
Part 14

Geet:sorry today i came with my friend...don't need to come or pic me up
and I will reach home by my self...you carry on with your work...Bye

hmmm...nothing else he can speak..(he is not ready to cut the call) but she cut the call after informing him...

Maan doesn't know what hurts him what makes him so angry he drove his car very fast he don't know where he going he just drove in his own way finally he is out of the city.. where no traffic no noise can't even see people he get out from the car by pulling its door with force...

He don't know how to show his anger how to react to the new feelings which is killing him inside he want to be with her but she went with some one his heart is not ready to believe what happen in front of him...

For a Long time he spend the time by thinking about her and Finally he concludes him
Why am making things serious... Its just a coincidence that she met her friend so she went away with him... But before she moves far away from me i should make her mine...i should tell her how much i love her

with the thought he came back to KM where its already late dadi and geet went to sleep is the information he got from the servant and decides to speak to geet in morning and went to his room...

Where he found geet is writing some thing by sitting in bed..she didn't notice him till she founds him near her she closed every thing and placed it in her wardrobe soon and say..

Geet: aap.. When did you come ?
Maan : abi( he didn't see her face and answer)
Geet: soon freshen up and come i will arrange your dinner(saying this she is about to move out of the room)
Maan: vo..vo.. am not hungry (now he noticed her face )
her face went down it lost its color when he is answering...Before he came in she is laughing at some thing while writing and through out his conversation she is smiling before but now what happen to her... It seems she is about to tell some thing but she gulped in and simply said..
Ok fine then...am going to sleep... good night...(she told just like...as if she don't want to speak any more)

But he want to speak to her...
Ge...Geet..
hmmm( she is lying in bed turning back to him)
vo...vo mein...tu(at a sudden geet phone buzz)
she attend the call Hi sanjay(saying that she is about to move) ek minute she showed an action to maan with her eyes and went to balcony..

Which again hurts maan ... he observe the geet throughout her phone conversation she is enjoying and waving her hand in air and speaking to sanjay... he don't want to speak any more to her..so he slipped in to bed but didn't sleep till she came in to room...

Atlast she came in which he come to know by her payal sound he closed his eyes as if he is sleeping she came near him after seeing him sleeping she also slipped in her side of the bed and dozzed off... he founds she sleeping then he turned towards her side and seen her with out a blink

#I want you geet...Don't go away from me...#which is again and again echoing in his mind

for the next two days he can't able to speak to geet she is busy with her academics and he missed her a lot...Now maan not even picking and dropping her actually he didn't see her properly for the past two days..

She is flying to college soon in the morning and coming home late in the evening..He missing her badly it seems for him that she is avoiding him knowingly which he can't even bear...He also made him self busy with his work...

after these hard full days.. one day he went to one meeting as those clients are staying in hotel for emergency reason they want to go back soon so they want the meeting in the hotel itself... so adi maan and sasha with all the papers and file they rushed to the hotel where the meeting went well and client satisfied with the presentation and want to sign the deal.. maan felt little bit relaxed from heavy work and came out from there where adi and sasha discussing about the final details with clients...Maan made an excuse and about to leave the hotel...

When maan came out of the place and walk towards the entrance...he saw some girl laughing loudly that voice is very known to him..he can't move away form that voice he turn to find out who.. where geet is sitting in front of him she is laughing like any thing she is conversing with some one and enjoying it thoroughly he just moved a side and found the man whom she speaking with.. it is sanjay again...

He made his mind to move from there and moved away but before getting in to car one small boy came to him with full of red roses in his hand and asked him to buy that for his wife...
Wife.. he repeated that word again and smiled..
maan's subconscious mind speaking to him( that's me obviously)
Maan what you thinking now she is your wife...she wont go away from you.. go maan utilize this time go and make her yours tell her that you love her... go maan go what you thinking now go and make geet yours.. she is yours she is Mrs.MSK...go and propose her...

He immediately buy all the roses form that boy and hold in his hand and run into hotel and his eye again searched the whole place for his geet but she is in the same place where she sit before he leave but this time he is behind her he is very far away from her he can see sanjay face clearly but not hers.. he is longing to see her so he didn't care about any one even sanjay...He make his step forward where his hear beat increased in happiness to reach her... Now he is not very close to them but can see them near when he is about to open his mouth to call geet.. he found sanjay getting up and kneeling down before her and asking her to marry him...when she said yes he put that ring in her figure...
He didn't hear any bit of there conversation but he understood it by his action...So he is confirmed that she accepted his proposal...

He broken down now... he can't speak...some think is killing him inside that she is not for him from now...she belongs to some one else from today...no words to explain his pain...his arms fell down as it is has no strength and roses fell down from his arms with out his knowledge...
his kneels gone weak ...He can't walk..

he moved back wards seeing them for a while he walked back wards to the door while going out he again turned and see them where his eyes where filled by now but he is not letting his tears out..he controlled his tears from felling down ...he gritted his teeth...

He don't want to face any one he is broken down he don't want to speak to any one he is feeling the loneliness.. he feels there is no one in this world for him...He want to go far away from all especially from geet he didn't want to meet her again...

Lost n lonely coz you're the only
One tht knows me
Tht I can't be without you
Lost n lonely coz you're the only
One tht knows me
Tht I can't be without you

Hai kya yeh jo
Tere mere darmiyaan hai
Andekhi ansuni
Koi dastaan hai

Hai kya yeh jo
Tere mere darmiyaan hai
Andekhi ansuni
Koi dastaan hai

Lagne lagi
Ab zindagi khaali
Hai meri
Lagne lagi
Har saans bhi khaali
Lost n lonely
Bin tere
Bin tere
Bin tere
Lost n lonely

Koi khalish hai
Hawaon mein bin tere
Lost n lonely

Bin tere
Bin tere
Bin tere
Lost n lonely
Koi khalish hai
Hawaon mein bin tere
Lost n lonely
Ajnabi se hue
Kyun pal saare
Yeh nazar se nazar yeh milaate hi nahin
Ek ghani tanhaayi chaa rahi hai

Manzilein raaston mein hi gum hone lagi
Ho gayi ansuni har dua ab meri

Reh gayi ankahi
Bin tere
Lost n lonely

Bin tere
Bin tere
Bin tere
Lost n lonely

Koi khalish hai
Hawaon mein bin tere

he decided to not to meet her again for some days so he made an excuse of some project where it is not necessary for maan to go there but he volunteer him self and went to London where he has some other business too which is under direct control of dadi...

with out informing any one from the office he straightly went to London
in private flight...Not even to dadi and meera he informed his departure..he switched off the mobile and didn't inform adi about where he going to stay and details... he went just like that with out informing to any one...

PRECAP:: Dadi is ill in the absence of maan

Part 15

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Edited by nishha - 14 years ago