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Posted: 13 years ago
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SPECIAL THANKS TO crazysky THIS CHAPTER IS DEDICATED TO THE SAME PERSON



It was 6 months since kriya and rey cofessed their love ……………………..Sharon was hosting a party in her farm house on the ocassion of swayam's b'day …………………….. the whole gang was gathered in the place ……………………..

" arre nilesh jaldi karo na ………. Agar swayam aagaya toh saara surprise karab hojaega " sharon shouted to sppe up the work ……………

" sharon tum tension mat lo everything will be fine waise swayam toh ko to pune se aane mein shaam hojayega …" kriya assured

Everyone were busy in the work alloted to them …………………. kriya was checking the decorations when rey hugged her from behind ……………………

" rey ye kya kar rahe ho chodo koi deklega " kriya snapped his hands
" toh dekne do " he said closing her eyes and feeling her
" koi aajayega "
" aane do "
" main tumhe tapad maroongi "
" maarne do "

Kriya laughed it was when rey realised wat he said ……………

" toh maroon ? " kriya asked while gesturing to slap him

" u baat cutter ab mere actions bhi cut karne lage ho " he complained making fake anger

" oh ! baby ko bura lagaya ? " kriya asked pulling his cheeks

" haan bahut ……….. ab tum jaldi se mere mood teek kardo " he said pointing to his cheeks demanding a kiss ………………..

" rey aap bahut badmaash hogaye ho aajkal "

" toh iss mein bura kya hai ………………… btw its not called badmashi its being romantic ……………..R O M A N T I C ………. Matlab samaj te ho na " he said stressing each letter ……

" haan mere Shah Rukh Khan ……………… ab romance bahut hogaya aap jaake apna kaam kariye …………………. Waise bhi sharon bahut tensed hai humein uski help karna chaiye " she said on serious note

" teek hai baba jaraha hoon " he said making faces and went

Sharon was busy doing her opps….. ordering others …………………….
" all set sharon " she heard a voice and suddenly turned to the source there stood a smart and young gentleman with perfect body and killer looks

" OMG !!! raghul tum ………….. wow wat a surprise " she said with full excitement and hugged him …..
" suna ki tum koi party organise kar rahi ho toh socha ki main bhi help kardoon may I join u " said raghul
" of course yaar ………. Come I ll introduce u to my frds " said sharon

She introduce raghul to everyone as her cousin …………….. everyone were glad to see him ………………….

" rey yeh kya hai ? " kriya stood with a rose in her hand
" rose hai sweet heart " he said simply
" ha ha ha muje pata hai muje koi color blindness nahi hua ………………. Aapne white rose kyun order ki ………….. sharon ne toh red order karne keliye kaha hai " she said
" patta hai sweetheart but muje toh white hi pasand haina " he said
" impossible rey ………… agar aapko yaad nahi hai toh main batadoon ki yahan swayam ki b'day party chalrahi hai aapke nahi …………….. isliye white nahi red roses hoga " she said deteminingly
" nahi white "
" red"
" white "
" maine kaha na red"
" ab toh sirf whit hi hoga "

" chill guys " they both tuned to see raghul
" rey aap itni beautiful ladki ke saath itni choti si baat keliye jagada kyun kar rahe ho " raghul said eyeing at kriya rey was defo not approving tat
" nahi nahi hum jagada nahi kar rahe hain " rey said not liking to involve anyone in their personel love fights

Kriya was well aware of rey's thoughts so she decided to play with him …………………

" arre aise kaise jagada nahi ……………….. hum toh bilkul arguee kar rahe te rose ko lekar " said kriya ……………… rey gave her a 'shut up look' but she smirked seeing him

" woh tats bad ……………. Kriya aap fikar mat kariya rose shopping mein main aapko help karta hoon " said raghul

" oh really tats so sweet of u " kriya said wwith a smile
" oh chaliye "
" sure "

Kriya and raghul went to the market to do their rose shopping leaving a fuming rey behind ……………….

It was 1 hour since kriya left with raghul rey was really angry ……………….. suddenly he heard kriya's voice who was chatting with neha and vishaka ……………….. rey went to her

" excuse me gals sry I ve steel ur frd from u for a min " he said dragging kriya to corner ………….

" kya hua rey ? " she asked
" u r asking me kya hua …………. Tum nahi jaanti ……………. Bolo " he said
" sach main I don't know"
" why did u go wit tat moron ? "
" moron …… who koun? "
" uss raghul "

Kriya began to laugh

" aap ………. Aap ………. Seriously ……." Kriya said laughing
" ab kya ? " he asked

Kriya put her hands around his shoulder …………….

" aap jealousy exp mein kitne pyaare lagte hai " she said
" main tumhe joker lagta hoon ? " he asked annoyed
" nahi baba aap bahut sweet lagte ho …………………. Haan ek aur baat maine uss 'moron' ke saath nahi gayi ……………… main toh bas mazak karrahi ti " she said

" mazak ? ………………. Ab main batata hoon mazak kya hota hai " saying tis rey started to tickle her …………..
" rey plzzz chodiye "
" main toh bas mazak kar raha hoon "

Kriya somehow managed to escape from rey

LATER IN THE EVENING

Everything was set ………………… all were waiting for swayam………….

" sharon main aagaya " saying this swayam opened the door

" surprise ! " everyone shouted

Swayam was stunned " wow " tats wat he managed to speak

They all cut the cake and and had a small cake fight ……………….later swayam and rey was sitting near the pool admiring their respective gal

" life kitna badalgaya na" said swayam
" haan ……. Maine kabi socha nahi kriya aur sharon ek saath party karenge "said rey
" dosti sur pyaar cheezhh aisi hai ……………… insaan ko kaise bhi badal sakta hai " said swayam
" true but humare life mein dil aur dosti ke alawa bhi ek spl element hain " said rey with smile
" DANCE " they both said in unison

" guys yahan baitke kya kar rahe ho ? swayam yee party tumareliye hain aur tum aise ek koone main baite ho ………………. Come on guys lets dance " said sharon almost dragging them to dance floor

The whole gang was dancing together soon the music changed to romantic slow number and they joined their respective partners …………………….

Rey was looking at kriya intensely

" rey aap aise kyun dekrahe ho ? " she asked not abling to take his piercing eyes
" kyun na dekoon tum itne gorgeous jo ho "
" acha "
" koi shak ? "

The party continued with full on dosti , unlimited dance and way full of romance ……………

PLZZZ COMMENT

THIS IS LAST AND FINAL CHAPTER HOPE TO WRITE FRESH OS

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Posted: 13 years ago
#32
luvd it di
thnx 4 the pm
happy diwali2 u!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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WOW!!!! JST FAB... THIS WAS GRT... HPE U WRITE SOON ... U ALL ARE REALLY AWESME WRITERS...!!!😊👏⭐️
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Posted: 13 years ago
#34
Hey gr8 update
Rey kria rose fght
kria makng him jealous lovd it
kria sheran party toghtr hehe awsme man
hope u wrte mre 4 kreyaansh
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Posted: 13 years ago
#35
it is sooo good keep it up. waiting for more


HAPPY DIWALI TO ALL OF YOU.
MAY THIS FESTIVAL LIGHT UP YOUR LIVES FOREVER AND BRING HAPPINESS AND NEVER ENDING JOY IN YOUR LIFE😊
Edited by monaya24 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#36
it was fantastic superbbb
plzzz do write more
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Posted: 13 years ago
#37
fabulous luvd it
Happy Diwali x
cnt w8 2 read more
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Posted: 13 years ago
#38
awww sooo cuteee!!! awesome os!! plzzz continue soon!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
#39
YAAR A VERY BEAUTIFUL ENDING MARKS A VERY GOOD BEGINNING! AWESOME JOB LOVEEED KRIYANSH MUSIC!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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superb one...



for the beautiful OS




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