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Posted: 13 years ago

Haila to all of you...Kaise ho guys????

Well yeah I am back!!!!Wahoo!!!

Did u all mizz me????mmm...Did I tell u that my exams were great??!!!

Okay never mind...And the gud news is I've winter holidays till Jan 2nd...Wow!!!

Okay enough of my bak-bak and here's the next part...PLEASE READ THE NOTE AT THE END OF DIS POST..

PART 14:MY DIA,MY PRINCESS...

Geet went pale on seeing him-the man who ruined her life

The man who was the reason for her suffering.

She felt tears prick her eyes.

"Tum?!"was the only word that came out of her mouth.

~*~

Maan was euphoric today.His life was standing before him.

He wanted to hug her tight and say that he never wanted to hurt her.

He wanted to tell her that he loved her.

"Geet.."he said as he proceeded to hug her tight.

It was heaven!

After holding her in his arms he felt complete.He wanted to cherish the moment.

He was about to kiss her when he felt her push him away.

"Geet?"he said his voice laced with pain and hurt.

"DON'T U DARE MR.MAAN SINGH KHURANA.DON'T YOU DARE!"she yelled.

"Geet,Jaan I'm sorry"he said with regret.

She laughed.

~*~

Dia looked around the huge buildings and felt her jaw drop.

She looked around and found everyone speaking Hindi.

"Dekha,dia?That's why mamma advised you to speak in hindi.Now see!"she said to herself and bumped into someone.

"Oops!"they both said.

The boy turned towards her and looked at Dia who was in the verge of cryin and she was constantly mumbling Sorry.

"Hey It's Okay!"he told her gently.

Dia smiled a bit and said,"I'm Dia and you?"

The boy replied with attitude,"I'm Rajveer..Rajveer Dev Singh Khurana!"

~*~

Maan looked shocked.

"You're sorry?Sorry for what Maan?"

"Sorry for coming to New York to avenge me for Sam's doings?

"Sorry for bumping into me?

"Sorry for spilling coffee on my branded shirt?

"sorry for becoming my friend?

"Sorry for pecking me everytime you say bye?

"Sorry for making me fall into your traps?

"Sorry for spending your leisure time with me for two years?

"sorry for rescuing me from those filths who wanted to rape me on Shane-Rach's engagement?

"Sorry for drinking too much?

"Sorry for making love to me that night?

"Sorry for leaving me alone the next morning?

"Sorry for setting up Lisa to play your fake-gf?

"Sorry for letting me alone with her with no one in the world for us?

"Sorry for making me discontinue my studies?

"Sorry for making me go away to London along with her when I came to know you were searching for me in New York?

"Sorry for making us broke there and return here?

"Sorry Sorry Sorry...Sorry for what Maan?Jawab do mujhe!"she cried clutching his collar.

~*~

Rajveer led Dia to her classroom and said,"I'm in upper class Okay?If u want any help just call Veer from upper class..Madam Keshav will lead you"

Dia smiled and said "Thank you Veerji,For everything" and placed a peck on his cheeks and ran away inside the class room.

~*~

Maan knew he was wrong.

"Geet..Please..It was a mistake!"he said.

"Mistake??!!Yes U r right..It was a mistake that you chose me-an orphan as ur target.

"It was a mistake that you made me fall for you..

"It was a mistake that though I should hate you I'm still in love with you MR.KHURANA!"she yelled.

After a long pause Geet opened her bag and took out an album and threw it on the table.

She looked at him and said,"And you know what was the only good thing that came out of all these mistakes,It's this!"she said pointing to the album and running away from the room crying.

~*~

It was 3.00 PM and school got over.Dia came out of the classroom and was quicly joined by Veer adn they both talked about class when-

"MR.RAJVEER KHURANA!"a voice said.

Rajveer ran towards the voice yelling "PAPA!"

Dev lifted Veer up in the air and spun him around while Veer giggled.

Dia was watching the scene silently.Deep in her heart,she wanted her father to hug her, to play with her, to help her ,to build sandcastles for her..

Dia felt tears roll down her cheeks and quickly wiped them and said to herself"Mamma is there!"

~*~

Naintara came from behind and said,"Aww..mera bacha..kya hua aaj school mein?"as she ruffled his hair.

"Mom..Don't do that Okay?"he complained causing Dev to laugh.

"has lo.."she said turning her face away.

Dev held Veer by one arm and by the free arm he circled Naintara's waist and brought her close while still rubbing his nose with Veer's causing him to giggle.

"Oh..maine bhul gaya.."Veer said as he jumped from Dev and ran towards Dia.

He pulled her by her hand and took her to his parents.

"Mom Dad..yeh hai mera naya dost-Dia!"

~*~

Maan felt his heart rip.There were numerous photographs of Dia-his daughter and Geet.

He let tears roll down freely.He had a daughter-their daughter..

The feeling was amazing!

He took out a photo and hugged it close to his heart..

God knows for how much time he sat amidst those photographs.

And that was when he heard the commotion outside.

~*~

"Look,Ms.Receptionist,I wanna meet my mom,Okay?"Dia said in an authoritive voice.

Before the receptionist could reply Maan came out and said,"What's going on?"

Dia turned towards Maan and his heart skipped a beat.

It was his daughter.His daughter of 4 years Before he could reach her another voice called out her name,"Dia?!"

~*~

Geet had just signed the formalities of joining the job cos she knew it was important for her and her daughter.

She didn't care if Maan was their boss.

And that was when she heard Dia arguing.

~*~

Dia rushed towards Geet and narrated how Veer had helped her,how his parents offered to drop her here..

When she was finished Dia looked around and asked,"Kya..Why are all of you giving me dis despo-looks?"

Peels of laughter erupted as Maan felt tears cloud his eyes.

"Okay baby..What do u want?"Geet asked Dia.

Dia looked down trying to control her tears and took out a paper from her bag.

Geet knew something was wrong "Dia,baby?"she asked gently.

Dia looked up at Geet with tears and said,"Mamma mujhe kal classmates ke saath ice-cream parlor jaana hai!"

Geet smiled and said,"tho aap itni choti si baat ke liye itna pareshan hai?"

Dia shook her head causing Geet to frown.

Gathering courage Dia said,"mamma,uske liye papa ka sign chahiye..par mere paas tho papa haye nahi..main kaise jaa sakthi hoon?"

To be cont..

Note:

Guys thank you all for giving me great support and keeping this thread alive.Never did I think in my dreams that I would write some stories and bore you all!!

As you all know I'm in tenth grade at present,The next term will be hectic my teachers said.I'll try my best to manage both the FFs in the next term i.e. January to April

So there will be updates only once in TWO WEEKS for both the FFs..(One week update for Language of Love and another week update for Tied by the Sacred Knot)

My SS Revenge is sweet will be over soon.I'll try my best to finish it in the coming week cos I'll update it most probably daily.

I just hope you will be giving me the same love...

Love u all and don't forget to check out the new FF:Language of love written by Frankie(music_girl) and me..

Link:

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/2401717/mg-ff-the-language-of-love-ch10-pg41-6-aug-2012

I hope you all will like it..

Love,

Amanda..

PS:The person who's the first this time will receive a sneak preview of the next part thru PMJ

Let's see who the person is...Waiting fr ur likes and commentsJ

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Posted: 13 years ago
brilliant update..loved it


gosh i am fiorst...yippii...doing happy dance😆
Edited by mollycoddle - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
perfect.. hope Maan signs it..
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Posted: 13 years ago
That was shweet part
Geet knew what Maan did n why he did
Dia is sho cute
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Posted: 13 years ago
loved da update
do continue
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Posted: 13 years ago
awsem love it dia is so sweet
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesum part..
luvd all the qns of geet..
dat was a dhamakedar confrontation!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
loved it...
maan got to know the truth now...
he is gonna hate for wat he did to her...
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Posted: 13 years ago
superb brilliant update
loved it
cont. soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
very emotional awesome update yar

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