New SS:Revenge is sweeettt..epilogue/pg 126 - Page 37

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Posted: 13 years ago
THIS IS NOT FAIR
YOU CANT GIVE A SNEAK VIEW TO ONLY ONE PERSON
WE ALSO WANT ONE
DIA AND VEER ARE SO CUTE
SHE ALREADY THINKS OF HIM AS HER BROTHER
GEET SHOULD NOT FORGIVE MAAN
HE PLAYED WITH FEELINGS FOR REVENGE AND NOW WANTS HER BACK
WHAT ABOUT HER SUFFERINGS IN THIS TIME
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Posted: 13 years ago
part 14
nice part...
good Maan deserves many slaps...
poor Geet...
oh Dia is so lovely...
cont soon dear...
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Posted: 13 years ago




Awesome...i thought geet will not say about dia...but she said in first meet..maan loves dia...how will he manofy geet now..
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Posted: 13 years ago

ohhh so that veer is dev's kid...i see

parlour...way to go Dia for bringing Maaneet together...(RES from previous part of comment) Nice siggy btw...Cute-honey...I was sooo busy...that I better not talk about it, my head aches at the thought...that's why I was late in replying
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome update
maan deserves this
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Posted: 13 years ago
res will read and comment...
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Posted: 13 years ago
oh gosh innocent geet, now maan is repenting what is use 😭
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Posted: 13 years ago
Hey dear... now i'm back wid my annoying comments to bore u... sorry i ws busy wid my exams thts y ws in active.😭 Read the missed out parts today😃... Great job!!!👏 u made my day😃...U are just awesome..👏
Thanks fr d p.m😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
okay..i am going..tomorrow morning I'll come okay? btw I already updated LOL...
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Posted: 13 years ago

..Guys stop...Don't throw jhutis on me...please...

Okay enough of my drama...I was supposed to update yesterday but kya karoon..My bros had cum to meet me and v had a gala tym 2gether...

Here's the nxt part and do read the note at the end..thnks..

PART 15-MY DIA,MY PRINCESS-II

Geet felt her whole world tumble before her.

She looked at Dia who was crying now.

She couldn't say anything.

What would she say?

"Dia-that's ur papa?" or would she say,"Ur papa is no one?"

Geet felt her vision blur as she heard the voice,"I'll sign it!"and she turned back to see Maan coming towards them!

~*~

Maan felt his heart break!!

Four years his baby girl and his love had suffered..

He could see his own childhood flash before his eyes.

He knew the pain of being fatherless.

But he really had no father.But what about Dia?

She was living in an illusion of not having a father despite a father who was before her eyes!!

He had always feared onething in life-being called a bas**d child.That was the reason he wanted Sam to keep his baby alive!!

Gathering courage he heard himself say,"I'll sign it!"

~*~

Dia looked at Maan who was coming towards her.

She grabbed the paper from Geet's hand and rushed towards Maan .

She stood in front of him and Maan knelt down.

"kya aap sach mein iss letter ko sign karoge?"she asked him with her eyes twinkling with joy and excitement.

Maan looked at Dia and said,"yes sweety,I'll sign it" and took the paper from her hand and signed it.

~*~

Geet felt suffocated.She knew it was right..

He was Dia's father and Dia definitely had the right to know Maan as her father.

But why was she feeling insecure??

Is it the reason that she didn't want to be hurt again??

Or is it that she wanted to be with Maan??

She was confused and exhausted she called "Dia,baby..It's getting late!"and went to take Dia away from him.

~*~

Geet came and stood beside Dia and said,"chalo..I'll get u an icecream"

Dia squealed in delight but then became serious.

~*~

She looked at geet and then at maan and went into deep thoughts.

"Socho dia..Mamma is offering u an ice cream all by herself!!Just imagine!!U can go..but I want to stay with this man who signed my paper.

"What will I do..mamma ki babaji!!please apni devotee ki beti ki madad keejiye na..please"

~*~

Without waiting for Dia's answer Geet pulled Dia from there and they were halfaway reaching their way out.

She was scared that her daughter may be heartbroken by Maan the same way she was..

She can never make Dia suffer..Never..

Suddenly she felt Dia wriggle out of her grip and startled she turned back..

~*~

Maan hung his head low..

He deserved it..

Geet was right.He was not a perfect man.

But when he saw his daughter and life walk away from him,he felt his whole world shatter.

Sighing heavily he got up from his knees and was about to go back inside when he felt a tug on his pant.

He looked down and saw his daughter standing in front of him!!

~*~

"What do I do??I can't think straight..Never mind when did u ever think straight!"Dia giggled to herself.

Somewhere she thought Maan was her papa..the papa whom babaji had sent down to sign her letter..

She was thinking about Maan's kindness when she remembered she hadn't thanked him!

She looked up at Geet who was serious thinking about something and instantly jerked her hand off and ran towards Maan!!

~*~

Dia gestured Maan to kneel down for which Maan did the same.

She cupped his face with her little palms and looked at him with innocent eyes.

Maan looked at Dia holding his face and slowly took her palm in his and kissed it gently.

Dia smiled and placed a kiss on his cheek and said,"I don't know who u are but all I know is thank you for signing that letter..I love you!"and ran away to geet.

Maan placed his palm at the place where she kissed him.

No,he can't let Geet and Dia walk away from his life once again.

He had already committed a mistake of letting her go..

This time he would never.

"Rukho Geet!"he called out to her as Geet froze.

To be cont...

Guys,thnk u all for the love and support u r giving me fr dis SS..If u want 2 know who's Dia,pls check the pic below..

And don't 4get 2 leave ur comments on my other SS-The princess diaries..

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/2554295/the-princess-diaries-a-mg-ss-finale-pg-28-20-05

Guys do support my frnd Frankie's (music_girl)SS-She is back...

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/2574174/mg-ss-she-is-back-completed

And hello I'll be waitin 4 all ur comments on Language of Love..Okay???

Edited by SallyAmanda - 13 years ago

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