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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Mr.TalentScout

Hi KF/Armin,

I sure hope you don't mind me using your real name on here, Armin.

Just want to get some feedback to you on Khushi is Kidnapped.

The more you write this story, the more gripping it gets. It has touches of emotion, hate, love, anger and retribution and well as my favorite, a swirling mistrust brewing in the midst of all the chaos, which you have so painstakingly authored.

Great stuff, you are by far the best female author here, and I like the fact that without introducing even one element of sexuality, you have the readers hooked.

Its like you don't even need that element to get your readership, your sense of mystery is powerful, it lures the reader in, and makes them part of the story.

Tomorrow, I'm having your writing get a look-over by my business partner. He'll be bowled over. He is also a great admirer of India and the Indian culture, so he will be more than eager to read your writing.

I also like what you've done by adding different characters that you have invented on your own, they give the story grit, power. Awesomely put together. The Inmate is especially powerful, and a wild uncontrollable energy, equal only to Shyam's state of mind.

Also, the fact that each Part that you add, is so long, shows that writing comes naturally to you and that you have a hunger for it...the true mark of a great author.

Wow, Armin. Really good work, and I must say I am impressed. Keep at it.

I'll be tuning in behind the scenes.

Cheers,

Josh



Hi Josh,

My apologies for the late reply though I did send you an email. Hopefully you got it?

No I don't mind at all. Armin is fine:)

Thank you for your kind words. Yes I do try to make it as exciting as I can. I think of all the words you used the word "chaos" applies most to this story as there is no point at which things are as they should be.


Yeah, I just write what I feel is relevant to the story and is something that moves the story forward. There are writers on this forum who write romance fiction and they do it really well. Mystery and suspense is what I do best and so that is what is in the stories and novels I write.
Mystery is what I write and really there is no room for sexually explicit scenes in the stories I write.

I can move the plot without getting explicit but if it was needed to move the story or plot line then I would use it but I usually have found that sexually explicit scenes are really not needed or required at least in my writing. But I will admit my writing is sometimes violent and scary to some. But that's just the nature of the genre. It's not like the horror genre. No zombies here:)

I don't usually write about Indian culture and try to make the story as unrestricted as possible in terms of culture and ethnicity. As they say write only what you know. Because the characters are from an Indian serial there is some Indian culture in them but I hope that if someone who is not Indian reads the story they will still be able to connect with the characters.

Yeah, I do play with different characters to add something new to the story to make it more original. Even the characters from the show have been changed to add more authenticity to the story. I try to make the characters in the show and my characters as different as possible though they are similar in some ways but also different in others.
The only reason I am writing this story is because I love mystery fiction. I'm a voracious reader of mystery fiction and love writing it. Which is why I always end up writing more in each part than I should.

Thank you so much for all the encouragement.
My novel just went through the first edit and is now on the final and last edit. So I plan to see it published sometime in January and will send you copies for your use. Do let me know what you think. And yes scriptwriting is something I plan on focusing on when the novel is published. I want to turn the novel into a script which shouldn't be that hard as you say it isn't that big of a jump.

I hope you had a wonderful Christmas with your family Josh.

Take care,

Armin
Edited by KaushalyaFan - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Hi Armin,

You explain it well, that's why your writing style is so much more refined.

I like how you play with the characters, seems like it comes effortlessly to you.

My assistants are keeping an eye on what you write...

I admire the fact that you don't waste time on sexually explicit writing, it seems like you don't need to go that route: your talent doesn't need that kind of help to bring the readers in.

They will come and read your writing anyway, you needn't lower your style level.

Thanks for offering to send copies of your novel to me. I need three. I will email you the address, as I'm in the US.

Talk to you soon, Armin.

Cheers,

P.S. You've inspired my assistants to also take up creative writing classes! Hey, you're pretty good!
Edited by Mr.TalentScout - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Hey nice... I think shyam should die in jail tht way there is no one nani has to get out of jail.. 😉Plz om me when u update... Just caught up with this. . .
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Smileyface

hey hun!

sorry for taking forever to comment...i havent been feeling well so couldnt keep up! but finally am doing better so caught up =)

the parts were great!! i love how shyam is suffering for his sins! I just hope nani realizes soon that what she is doing is wrong!

You really have a way with words...i love the way you are portraying all the emotions and relationships...great job =)

xox
hershi



Hi hershi,

I am glad you are feeling better now. Thanks for your kind comments and reading. I appreciate you taking the time to get caught up it's a lot to read:)

Take care,

KF
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Water.

Completely different FF track.

Loved it
This nani is seriously delusional. With her age and there upbringing...she is completely brainwashed.
Poor Khushi...my heart goes out to her.
I hope she is able to open up to Arnav, eat with him, share her night mares with him, hug him..a.nd get healed.
Pleaes do not let her be away from other members...she herself felt it...she said others are scared of her..
please don let that be...



Hi Water,

Thanks so much for your kind words of encouragement for this story and my writing. So glad you liked Part 17. Thanks for reading and taking the time to comment. Really appreciate your input.

Regards,

KF
Edited by KaushalyaFan - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
i just love your all 17 parts do something i hate nanii and shayam she is helpinggg tht ba*** shayam scape from jail nahii is hurtinggg Arvan and Anjali
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Mr.TalentScout

Hi Armin,

You explain it well, that's why your writing style is so much more refined.

I like how you play with the characters, seems like it comes effortlessly to you.

My assistants are keeping an eye on what you write...

I admire the fact that you don't waste time on sexually explicit writing, it seems like you don't need to go that route: your talent doesn't need that kind of help to bring the readers in.

They will come and read your writing anyway, you needn't lower your style level.

Thanks for offering to send copies of your novel to me. I need three. I will email you the address, as I'm in the US.

Talk to you soon, Armin.

Cheers,

P.S. You've inspired my assistants to also take up creative writing classes! Hey, you're pretty good!



Hi Josh,

Thanks for your kind comments. It spurs me on to write more. You may be right because I enjoy writing in this genre it comes easily to me. Writing on this forum is just fun. What I write outside of the forum is more important to my writing career. This is more of a hobby more than anything else and I really enjoy it.

You are most welcome for the copies. I really appreciate your interest and advice. I am also in the US so you will receive the copies of the novel quickly in the mail. Glad to know I've inspired your assistants to take up writing. Thanks for your kind comments once again. Appreciate it. And Happy New Year to you. My kindest regards to your family and your staff.

Take care,

Armin
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Devilways

Hey nice... I think shyam should die in jail tht way there is no one nani has to get out of jail.. 😉Plz om me when u update... Just caught up with this. . .



Hi Devilways,

Thank you for taking the time to write down your thoughts on Part 17. I hope you liked it. Yes I will PM you when I next update. I plan to begin to write the next part today. Thanks for your interest in this story. BTW Happy New Year!

Take Care,

KF
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Shafoo

i just love your all 17 parts do something i hate nanii and shayam she is helpinggg tht ba*** shayam scape from jail nahii is hurtinggg Arvan and Anjali



Hi Shafoo,

Thanks for your kind words for my writing. Glad you like this story. Thanks for reading Part 17 and taking the time to post your thoughts on the story. Appreciate it greatly.


Take care,

KF
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Posted: 13 years ago

KHUSHI IS KIDNAPPED PART 18


Edited by KaushalyaFan - 13 years ago

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