Khushi is Kidnapped Updated Part 19 Page 82 - Page 55

very well written update. I think that trying to explain anything to nani will be pointless. Merry Christmas!

Hi KF/Armin,

I sure hope you don't mind me using your real name on here, Armin.

Just want to get some feedback to you on Khushi is Kidnapped.

The more you write this story, the more gripping it gets. It has touches of emotion, hate, love, anger and retribution and well as my favorite, a swirling mistrust brewing in the midst of all the chaos, which you have so painstakingly authored.

Great stuff, you are by far the best female author here, and I like the fact that without introducing even one element of sexuality, you have the readers hooked.

Its like you don't even need that element to get your readership, your sense of mystery is powerful, it lures the reader in, and makes them part of the story.

Tomorrow, I'm having your writing get a look-over by my business partner. He'll be bowled over. He is also a great admirer of India and the Indian culture, so he will be more than eager to read your writing.

I also like what you've done by adding different characters that you have invented on your own, they give the story grit, power. Awesomely put together. The Inmate is especially powerful, and a wild uncontrollable energy, equal only to Shyam's state of mind.

Also, the fact that each Part that you add, is so long, shows that writing comes naturally to you and that you have a hunger for it...the true mark of a great author.

Wow, Armin. Really good work, and I must say I am impressed. Keep at it.

I'll be tuning in behind the scenes.

Cheers,

Josh

Originally posted by: vikaluvsmish

Thank you KF for the PM.. and me seriously disliking Nani right now.. but aah the Gupta's are one strong family... the sister bonding btw Payal and Khushi was done amazingly and the brother-sister btw Arnav and Anjali is so wonderful... Now How I wish that the inmate in the jail would just kill shyam.. urghhh (I know letting my inner anger out ha ha)

All in all. very well done... Now lets get out Arnav back into ASR mode...

Hi Vika,

You are most welcome for the PM and thank you for yours:) Thanks for your great comments on Part 17, glad you liked reading it. I hope you and your family had a great Merry Christmas. Happy Holidays!

Best Wishes,

KF

Originally posted by: sushi-la

oh gawd!! I never thought that i would be capable of hating, no loathing a nani more that I loathe naniji right now, but you know what??

that just proves what an awesomely compelling writer you are!! so...hats off to you!! awesome writing and awesome updates. I have been busy with exams and then getting ready for the next quarter, so I haven't been reading or writing for like 3 weeks. so...sorry for the late reply..thanks for the PM!!

Hi sushi-la,

Thank you for your kind comments on my writing appreciate it greatly. Yes the Nani in my story is nothing like the sweet Nani in the show. Here she is completely different. You will notice almost all the characters are different than they are on the show. I sure you aced your exams:) No no please don't apologize I'm just elated that you read it. You are most welcome for the PM and thank you for your interest in this story and part 17. Hope you had an enjoyable Christmas:)

Best wishes,

KF

Originally posted by: pyaar_kya_karna

This is sooo interesting it's almost real!!! PLEASE update soon and PM me when u do!!!!!!! :) :)

Hi pyaar_kya_karna,

Thank you for your kind comments on the story. Glad you liked part 17. Yes, I try to update as soon as I can and yes I will PM you when I post the next part. Thanks for your interest in this story. Appreciate it.

Regards,

KF

Originally posted by: ..-Sanzz-..

Merry Xmas To You Too 🤗

Thanks,


KF

Originally posted by: bmtdluver

very well written update. I think that trying to explain anything to nani will be pointless. Merry Christmas!

Hi bmtdluver,

Thank you for your kind feedback on part 17. Glad you liked it. Thanks for commenting. I hope you had a Merry Christmas!

Best Wishes,

KF

Completely different FF track.