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Raveena Kaur Lalli

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Posted: 13 years ago

#401

Hay, fab ff!!! Loved shyam gettin Beeten!!! Hope kushi gets better soon!!! ;)

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Writer42

@Writer42

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Posted: 13 years ago

#402

Originally posted by: Smileyface
heyy great partt!!!
you write really well!!
gosh nani is so annoyinggg!
wow so finally shyam is gonna get his dues! he deserves every bit of it..stupid jerk!!

thank u so much for the PM =)

xox
hershi

Hi hershi,

Nice to know you liked part 14. I ended up writing 10 pages in word more than I usually do. Usually I end up writing about 9. So I ended up with an extra page this time. Thank you for your kind words. So do you. You are a great writer and I love reading what you write. You are most welcome for the PM. Thanks for taking the time to leave your thoughts on Part 14.

Take care,

KF

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bmtdluver

@bmtdluver

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Posted: 13 years ago

#403

Great update! I'm glad anjali got over her fear and stood up to shyam. Though the whole update was really well written, i just loved the last part! 😃

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Aishwarya

@malluangel

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#404

LMFAO!!!!!
whoever that dude with the broken teeth is, im sending him flowers! err...well maybe he'll like jalebis? 😛
update soon!

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Writer42

@Writer42

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Posted: 13 years ago

#405

Originally posted by: dumas
love the update so shyman is getting his a## kicked bet arnav is the one who had that guy transferred to his cell love it whats wrong with nani and her old fashioned way don't tell me she was in love with shyman to

Hi Dumas,

Hope you are well. Thanks for your comments on Part 14. Enjoyed reading them. I just had the bad guy appear haven't really thought about who sent him so I was surprised to read that you thought that perhaps Arnav may have sent him. It's a good idea I'll have to give some thought to whether I want to reveal who sent this guy. Great input you're making me think about this. LOL Nani in love with Shyam? Very funny. Well I guess Shyam has an effect on those older women. First Buaji now Nani I guess. LOL.

Take care,

KF

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Writer42

@Writer42

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Posted: 13 years ago

#406

Originally posted by: zafi
Awesome. ⭐️⭐️⭐️I loved this chapter. 👏Stupid Nani, What a twit. She totally doesn't get it.😡I loved the last bit the most where Shyam gets the crap beaten out of him. HEHEHEHe😆Thanks for the PM. 😃Update soon please.😉

Hi zafi,

Oh I'm glad that you like Part 14, I worked hard to make it good it ran longer than usual though. Yeah Shyam did run the gamut of emotion in this part. You are most welcome for the PM. Thanks for taking the time to comment. Your input is valuable to me. :-)

Have a great day,

KF

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Writer42

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Posted: 13 years ago

#407

Originally posted by: aparna5293
Yes shyam going to beaten up by his inmate. He deserve more beating.
Love anji-arnav scenes.
Want some arhi moments plz
brilliant updt

Hi aparna,

Thank you for reading Part 14. I hope you liked it. I appreciate you taking the time to read and leave your kind comments. I appreciate it. I hope you are well.

Take care,

KF