FF- Business Trip with a Twist? Part 4 on pg 27

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vaishali

@vaishali667

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#81

i really like part 2 it lovely part

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@..-Niru-..

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#82

hey aahana ! beautiful part !

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@ShellJA

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#83

Great job. Love the idea of writing an FF with a partner.

The story is flowing really well. Good dialogues!

-S

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@SK1991

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#84

wowww thatz lovely...
sooo nice...like it...😳

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shaheerdiwani

@shaheerdiwani

Navigator

Posted: 13 years ago

#85

Hey Mya n Aahana ...fab update ..luvd their concern for each other ...gr8 work 👏 update soon pls and thanks for d pm 😃

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dramebaaz.af

@dramebaaz.af

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+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#86

man! great part! love it!

btw, thanx for the PM

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siditi

@siditi

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+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#87

lovey lovelyyy :) i love how they pursue their right ovr each other

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Flame.

@Flame.

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+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#88

Originally posted by: Artemis678
Loved Part 2. Good Job Girls. (:

Thank you !! Glad you liked it 😳

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Posted: 13 years ago

#89

Originally posted by: FebruaryFlower
A fab update ladies!!
I really loved the way Arnav and Khushi were both so concerned for each other.
I'm really looking forward to the next part now...I'm sure it'll be super interesting!
Thanks for the PM Mya!!
😊

Hey thanks a lot !!! We will try to update the next part soon 😳