FF- Business Trip with a Twist? Part 4 on pg 27 - Page 17

Originally posted by: areeba123hina

fabulous! biwi shaadi, kamra! lol! poor Khushi! doesn't she know how much possessive her rakhshas is of her!

Thanx for the PM though!

Originally posted by: shybabe

loved it so much...please continue

Originally posted by: FebruaryFlower

Big hugs Mya and Aahana!!

🤗🤗

Fab update.

My god...Arnav is so incredibly hot when he's possessive like that!! Loved it!!

Khushi's reaction was cute. I love the way she understood his expression and went quiet!!

Looking forward to the next part girlies!!!

Thanks for the PM!!

😊

Originally posted by: niya2121

Yeah Awesome Update !!!! Arhi all the way baby 😊

Originally posted by: YPNHK_kiFANno.1

Commenting on First Part:

Ahahah! 🤣 The Titanic and Sallu Bhai references were brilliant! You girls have got such a great skill combining just the right amount of comedy with romance! I was giggling the whole way through, especially when she doesn't care and digs her fingers deeper and deeper into his arm! 😆

Originally posted by: YPNHK_kiFANno.1

Part 2 Comment:

What a classic part! 😉

"This felt good she decided. It felt very good and they stayed that way for what seemed like a minute for her. She did not want to let go, this was nice!"

Love her innocence in this part! She's decided it feels nice and so she feels she can and wants to remain like this forever! 😆

Thanks a lot ! 😛 Glad you liked it. Khushi indeed is really innocent and thats wat makes her adorable 😳

"...she stumbled almost falling on her face, grabbing him before her face become as round as a chappati. "

Simply 🤣 What a picture!? Your description is hilarious! You girls balance the romance with the comedy superbly! 👏

Hahaha thanks a lot. 😆

"Oh great! ab mein gaya, he thought to himself, turning around to face the lady who had a happy grin on her face like a child does when they find a lollipop."

Aw! What has Arnu Baba got himself stuck in! 😆 I can just imagine the comedic moments this storyline is going to give us!

LOL Poor arnav babu has to pretend to be her hubby even though he doesn't believe in marriage. Hey devi maiyya 😆

Originally posted by: littlemoi

awesome update!!!!

hahahah loved the very possessive arnav!!

thank you soo much for the pm!!

wasnt bored at all!! loved reading the update!!

Originally posted by: zee10

hey love the update... The way u have pen down it, it's superb.. Like it

Originally posted by: anita_21492

Loved it sooo much

khushi is right arnav does look good in a stuble

the end cracked me up

i can't wait til the next update

Originally posted by: desigirl_18

Awesome Mya and Aahana my awesome duo!! Great work!! loved how Khushi admitted she liked his stubble!!😆and oo la la the "hubby-wife" in the king size room!!🤣hmm kya kya hoga agay?! 😉