Tum Mere Ho (RTMC FF) Part69 on Pg153 - Page 104

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Posted: 13 years ago
Nice part
what's happening with Prithvi 😭
Nandini come back soon
nahi to ye Devil Esha plays her SHATIR DIMAAG 😈
already she convert prithvi's mothers mind on her side n try to marry
ut Prithvi wll not let this happen
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Posted: 13 years ago
Richa is so great a d that freaky Esha deserves a kick
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Posted: 13 years ago

Part 64

Prithvi "what the hell Mom...you know I would never agree with this rubbish idea..."

Renuka "fine...then I won't eat or drink anything unless you say yes"

Prithvi "don't try to force me Mom...you know I hate this..."

Renuka "i don't care now...you will have to listen to what I am saying...i am doing this for your happiness...you just care for yourself...you are not at all bothered about me and your Father"

Prithvi angrily crossed his arms and looked at Renuka... "so you will not eat anything??"

Renuka "no...unless you agree to marry Esha"

Prithvi's eyes were red with anger...he went out her room...

Richa looked at him and asked Angad to come with her...both went to Prithvi...

Prithvi "please Angad …..don't you dare try to convince me"

Angad kept quiet …..

Richa "Prithvi...i understand it is very difficult for you to forget Nandini...but you have to move on..."

Prithvi surprisingly looked at Richa "you are saying this??"

Richa "yes Prithvi...i thought a lot about this and I think Renuka aunty is right...you should marry Esha"

Prithvi "how could you even think about that...its hardly two months since Nandini has left me and everyone is forcing me to marry again...how ridiculous...just leave me alone..."

Richa looked at Prithvi "believe me Prithvi...we are not being mean...this is for your good..."

Prithvi looked carefully at Richa...he knew very well that there was something that Richa was trying to tell him but she somehow hiding it...he didn't ask her again...

_____*******

Next day...

Esha came to Prithvi's room "Prithvi please open the door...Renuka aunty is not responding..."

Prithvi immediately came out and went to his mother's room... she was lying unconscious... he called the doctor...

After few hours...

Doctor "please make sure she eats on time...too much weakness is not good"

Prithvi "yes doctor...i will make sure she eats on time..."

Prithvi went to his mother... "Mom please eat something...i can't see you like this"

Renuka "i will eat only when you agree to marry"

Prithvi "Mom I will do what ever you want...i just can't loose you..." he asked Esha to get something to eat...Renuka was smiling while Prithvi made her eat...

Renuka "Prithvi I am happy now...thank you beta..." she looked at Esha "now get ready to be my daughter in law..."

Esha went out of the room happily...she couldn't believe what she heard...she imagined Prithvi in her dreams but now she will be his wife... she called her mother and informed her about Prithvi's decision...

After some time...

Prithvi "i don't know if its right or wrong but I only said yes to save my Mom...i can't let anything happen to her"

Esha "when are we planning to go back to Delhi"

Prithvi "i don't know...Esha...just remember one thing that I will never be able to love you...i always loved Nandini and I am marrying you just for the sake of my mother...so please don't expect any love form me..." he left the room...

Esha was happy and said to herself "i will make you love me...i am not worried about that..."

_____*********

Richa called Sneha "you know what you have to do...just go with Piyush...don't leave alone"

Sneha "sure...has Prithvi agreed to marry that bitch??"

Richa "yes...and that has made Esha thinking only about her marriage and she will not be bothered about what we are planning to do..."

Sneha "do you think you will reach on time??"

Richa "i will reach on time to expose her in front of everyone...don't worry we have one week and please make sure Prithvi doesn't get any clue" she kept the phone...

____********

Next Week...

Delhi

The mansion was decorated...Rajveer felt bad for his Son...

Rajveer "i am sorry Prithvi...i wasn't able to convince your mother...and"

Prithvi "leave it Dad...i don't want to discuss this anymore...she wants me to get married...fine...let her do what she wants to...i can't get angry on her..."

Rajveer "i am helpless as well..."

guests were coming...it was time for the rituals to be performed... Esha dressed up in her wedding dress...her mother and father were happy...it was their dream that she marry Prithvi...

Angad was looking for Richa...

he called her "where are you???"

Richa "don't worry...i am coming..." she kept the phone and was running towards the car...

Sneha "careful Richa...you shouldn't run so fast"

Richa "we have to run...otherwise we can't reach on time...we have to stop this wedding..."

Sneha helped Richa got into the car... "i will drive..."

Richa felt something painful but she didn't bother and asked Sneha to drive faster...

After some time...

The priest asked Prithvi to sit around the sacred fire...everybody joined together for the ceremony... Prithvi was terribly sad...after a while Priest called the bride... Esha came in with her golden lenhga...people gathered around the place while the marriage was about to perform... Prithvi didn't even once looked at Esha...he felt as if he was dying several times...

he closed his eyes and he could only see his Nandini...

suddenly he heard a voice "thoda sa pyaar huya hai" ...he opened his eyes...it was Nandini's first song that she sang in college...it was her voice...no he said to himself...its just that he's missing her and

"thoda hai baaki" he heard again...he immediately got up...everyone was surprised... Esha looked at Prithvi who was carefully looking around the mansion...there was so many people staring at them...

Renuka "Prithvi what happened beta...???"

Prithvi didn't listen to her...instead he was waiting for the voice...and again he heard... "thoda sa pyaar hua hai...thoda hai baaki..." he looked at the main gate...he couldn't believe his eyes...he saw Nandini...his eyes were moist now...it wasn't a dream...it wasn't any illusion...it was she, standing little far from him with tears in her eyes...

Prithvi rushed towards her...he was standing right in front of her...

"Nandini" he cupped her face in his hands...she looked tired...the circles around her eyes proved she didn't slept for days...he grasped her tightly in his arms...he could hear her heart beat... he carefully looked at her from top to bottom... "are you..."

Nandini cried out "Prithvi..." it was so loud that Prithvi was shocked for a minute...she hugged him tightly...not wanting to leave him...she felt secure...

Prithvi was now worried...he didn't know what to ask her...why she was crying so much...what must have happened... "Nandini...please tell me..."

Nandini was crying continously...

Richa and Sneha were standing behind Nandini...

Prithvi looked at them...he embraced Nandini tightly...he kissed on her forhead...

Renuka and Rajveer were surprised... "beta how come...how did this happen...are you alright?"

Prithvi asked her again...her crying was killing him...he couldn't see tears in her eyes... "Nandini tell me what happened..." he was getting impatient now...

Richa "Prithvi...she will not be able to tell you..."

Prithvi curiously looked at Richa...

Richa "i wanted you to say yes to marry Esha even after I knew Nandini was alive..."

Prithvi annoyingly looked at her "why???? and why didn't you tell me??"

Richa "if I would have then how could I expose Esha"

Prithvi stared at Esha... "why what did she do??"

Richa "well Prithvi...this time Nandini was really strong...i didn't have to do much...she was the one who managed to escape from Esha"

Prithvi was now getting angrily impatient...

Richa "Prithvi you must ask Esha...she can very nicely elaborate the whole incident..." Richa stared at Esha "isn't it..."

Esha was now fuming with anger...she couldn't understand how Nandini came here...

Richa "come on Esha...tell everyone how you managed to fool around"

Prithvi couldn't control his anger and loudly yelled at Esha "tell me or I will kill you"

Esha got scared with his angry words...she glanced around to see her parents and Renuka staring at her...

"i know I did wrong...but I had to...just for you Prithvi...i ….i couldn't think of anything else..." she looked at Prithvi who was still holding Nandini in his arms... "i was jealous of Nandini and wanted her out of your life...so I planned this...the day when Nandini went out for shopping, I met her outside the mall...she was buying some stuff for Richa...and I..."

Flashback...

Esha "hi Nandini...how are you???"

Nandini "hi Esha...nothing just buying some stuff for Richa..."

Esha "why don't you buy something for yourself??"

Nandini "for me??? oh no no I am fine..."

Esha "you should...come I know a good shop here that has designer clothes..."

Esha pulled Nandini's hand and went towards the shop...she selected one dress for Nandini and asked her to change...Nandini went to change...

Esha "wow Nandini...you look gorgeous...now please don't wear this old jewelery with this...just change it with something new..."

Nandini "but this is the traditional jewelery and how can I take it off..."

Esha "oh Nandini...you can wear it later...just keep with you...you must buy some new stuff that will suit your dress"

Nandini "alright...if you really want me to change...you are so nice Esha...thanks for helping me..."

Esha "its my pleasure Nandini..."

Esha asked Nandini to take of her jewelery and clothes...and helped her buy new dress and some jewelery...then she asked Nandini to come along with her...

She took Nandini in an isolated place and locked her...

Manish "but the driver has seen you with Nandini..."

Esha "don't worry that driver will never reach to give any information..."

Esha asked two men to kill the driver and throw him far away...

Manish "now what will you do??"

Esha "don't worry...i have my plan ready..." she looked at her men... "call that girl"

Seema came in...Esha looked at her... "hi Seema...you have worked a lot in my house...i will gift you something..."

Seema "but why did you call me here...??"

Esha "i want you to clean this house..."

Seema "alright" as she was starting to clean... Esha "wait first wear these clothes and jewelery...

Seema was happy to see the ornaments...she went to change...

Esha "now take her to the road near to the shopping mall...make sure you crush her face...so that no one can recognize her...they all should think it was Nandini...and here take Nandini's purse"

Manish "but why don't you kill Nandini instead??"

Esha "i want Nandini to suffer every minute...by killing her like this i won't be so happy..."

Manish "wow...you are so clever..."

Esha "i know...now do this fast..."

They took Seema with them...they killed her with a sharp piece of glass before and placed her body in the middle of the road crushed it under the truck... they took the body that was completely unrecognizable, and threw it outside the shopping mall...

They gave some money to one old lady who informed the police that a lady was hit by a fast moving truck...

Flashback over...

Esha "and in this way we fooled the police and everyone else...but Richa wasn't convinced..."

Richa "your plan was very good...i must say you have a clever mind...but I was in a doubt the moment I saw that road and when Prithvi told me you were in Chicago...so I followed you...i traced the nos on your phone and gave them to Sneha who fooled your men by calling them...this way we got to know about the location...but we still weren't sure...thanks to you again Esha...remember day before yesterday when you went to see Nandini...we followed you...that was your biggest blunder..."

Prithvi was stunned …. "Richa why didn't you informed me them???"

Richa "you were already suffering from your emotions and I wanted to expose Esha in front of everyone...don't think I was alone Prithvi...i had Mr Suresh's help..."

Suresh "that's right Prithvi...the moment Richa informed me that she is suspicious of Esha...i personally was ready to help her...there were two police officers with her when she went to rescue Nandini..."

Prithvi couldn't believe what Esha did with him...Richa helped Nandini and took her inside...

Prithvi was furiously staring at Esha …..he couldn't control his anger and slapped her tightly... everybody was shocked...

Suresh came in between "Prithvi please control yourself...Esha has committed a crime and she will surely get punished for that..."

Esha's mother started crying... her Father just left the place and went off from there... Renuka came towards Esha and slapped her on her face "how could you go this cheap...don't you show me your face again" Rajveer took Renuka inside...

Prithvi was still angry and he came forward...with both his hands he tried to strangle her neck... Suresh asked Prithvi to look after Nandini and he will arrest Esha.

_____**********



After some time...

Nandini was lying on her bed when she saw Prithvi coming near her...he looked at her ankles... and touched her soft skin...

then he took out both her anklets...

Nandini "how did you get the other one...i lost it way back and"

Prithvi smiled at her "i picked it up long time back when we were in college...it was outside the gymnasium."

Nandini gazed at him as if she was completely lost in his deep eyes... he came forward and kissed her on the lips... "now you have both the anklets...and I have you..." he kissed her lips longingly...while she touched his strong shoulder that was crushing inside her...

_____************

Precap...

That was the most romantic night between them...



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Posted: 13 years ago
Finally Esha out and they r both together loved to see them each other
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Posted: 13 years ago
love u
lovedi

i just love for this

nandini came back...
amazing.
i m so happy.
i really missed her.
so much...
man!.
they are back...
and back wid a bang...

awesome...

love for this...

yeh! ma strong gal nandini escape by her own...

i cud hav really killed dat esha if dat marriage was done...
u saved her...forget her,,,,,
i don't want to listen her name again...
never ever...

precap is so...😳☺️
i shud stop here...
next part is urs...
make it really romantic...

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Posted: 13 years ago
hey dear, sorry i havnt commented for last two uds🥱
but both were fab, i m very much impressed with richa👍🏼
and love u dhanvi for todays ud ...❤️
superb ud...
i m feeling very happy...u made my day😊
thank god tat bit*h had caught red handed...deserves her😡
but richa man... she proved that she is a superwomen...😉
waiting for the next one...☺️
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Posted: 13 years ago
Fabulous update..👏
good to c nandini back...😊
tempting promo..😉
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Posted: 13 years ago
very very Nice part 😛
Richa is tru best friend 😊 that she get back Nandini to Prithvi
Finaly Prithvi n Nandini met 😛
Loved it😳
Edited by SonaliDhone - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesome update
Thank God n offcourse u that Nandini is back safe n sound
Hats off 2 Richa. She's a true friend.
Oh how much I wished prithvi would himself strangle that moronic Esha
update soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
amazing update !!!!!!!!!!!!! 👏

finally they are back together😃

the precap is awesome 😳 😉

update soon ...😊

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