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Rmuk thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
Pls update soon and I really liked ur ff very much. Pls add me in your pm list.
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Posted: 13 years ago
u changd the username? When? N y u never pm me for ur updates? I missed many updates! Plz pm me next time
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Posted: 13 years ago
hey when will u update...??????
waiting waiting...
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Posted: 13 years ago
i will update soon
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: arunsunita_gm

hey frnd plss update fast i am new to this forum but i hav read all yur chappies in one day they r superb fantastic but i dont like last chapie in whch abhay do this kind of thing wth piya plsss update fast and make everything okay btw them i will be waiting for yur ff plsss add me in yur pm list and dont forget to pm me cotinue soon gn tc ks hsd 😊

OMG SO MANY WORDS !!! 😳THANKU SO MUCH DEAR FIRST OF ALL I WILL TRY TO UPDATE SOON.YAA BY THE TIME WHEN THE STORY CONTINUES YOU WILL SURELY GONE LIKE ABHAY AGAIN .I WILL SURELY GOING TO ADD YOU IN MY PM LIST AND WILL UPDATE ...THANKU THANKU SO MUCH
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Rmuk

Pls update soon and I really liked ur ff very much. Pls add me in your pm list.

I WILL SURELY GOING TO ADD YOU IN MY PM LIST AND WILL PM YOU NEXT TIME
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: peehu24

u changd the username? When? N y u never pm me for ur updates? I missed many updates! Plz pm me next time

SOME friends of mine said you should change your username that is why !!!actually i did not pm any of my friend i only pm those who are strangers ..to me ...😆...tabhi toh meine aapna ff loose their control fanfiction column mein start kiya !!!!😆coz ff ki bedh se lag gayi hai pyar ki yeh ek kahani forum mein ...😆
Edited by vampireking - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: abc123ca

hey when will u update...??????
waiting waiting...

i will update soon dear,😳
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Posted: 13 years ago
HELLO GUYS I AM BACK WITH MY UPDATE GUYS THANKU SO MUCH TO LIKE MY FF SO MUCH IT IS JUST LIKE A DREAM THAT MY FF IS RUNNING SUCCESSFULLY
PART 9 (CAUGHT RED HANDED)
(next day in morning)



(in piya "s house )
piya awake with headache piya "ohh my god this headache going to kill me ".when she get out from her blanket she realized that she is in a black shirt .she runs to the washroom and wash her face tried to remember what happened last night .but she cant remember it properly she only remember that a muscular,handsome ,perfect body shaped is upon her .he is kissing him hardly ,passionetly etc.she broke the mirror if she sleep with other men then how she reached in the her house then .piya "stop stop dont think these things ''you are going to be ,mad soon omg !!after some time she bath and she realized that there are some love bytes on her neck ,shoulders etc.she started crying again .and sleep in her blanket .
(in the raichand office )
abhay is on a offical meeting in hongkong .when he complete all his work on his meeting .he reached on his office again just to seen pia condition .when he reached to the office .he secretly looked at her cabin and he seen that piya is not here ..she murmured some of piya 's friends ..piya condition is not good and dont know why she is not attending any call .abhay feels like killing herself for the piya 's condition .then after some time abhay leave the office .
(in the car )
abhay is thinking he should go to piya 's house or not .if she will be angry she will going to broke his head but it will be good may be piya 's anger will be reduced .maybe she remembered everything that how he drop piya on her bed ...damad !!she reached to piya 's house abhay knocked door so many times but no one opened .then after 10 -15 minutes .he thinks that if he go from the window then piya will be scared ..so he cant do that .suddenly piya opened the door and banged the door also .abhay stoped piya to close the door .abhay plz plz allow me to enter plz plz .piya is feeling like she is dreaming' mr attitude "is saying sorry to me for nothing amazed .piya :ok you can !!abhay is shocked by piya 's room all the tissue papers are around in piya "s room and the mirror is broken .abhay (in mind ):may be she is cry alot !!i should entertain her .but mein kiya karu ??
(in the piya 's kitchen )
piya is making coffee for abhay .abhay comes from the behind and carry piya in his arms .and take her to the car .piya :leave leave me alone you !!they sat in the car . and abhay takes piya to the long drive we should eat icecream .then they reached to the icecream parlour and abhay orderd butterscotch for piya ...piya :why dont you eat somethings ?abhay :i dont have any mood .to eat ...piya ;yup ...when the waitress came and said "sir aap toh roz hi aate hai phir aap nahi ladki ke sath "abhay :aaggaa mein kab aaya muje nahi pata sach mein .piya :ohh really may be may be not !!abhay :alright we should leave and you can eat your icecream in the car .like a small child .abhay :next time !!!i will take two icecreams piya :why so ???abhay :one for your clothes also .look at you !abhay ;i think you are hungry i should bring some snacks for you alright !abhay drive to the mc donald aand take one meal (mc veg burger ,french fries ,one coke )
when piya is on the door .in the hand she is playing with the keys ..abhay realized that she want a kiss but abhay thinks that it is not appropriate time to give it ..piya (in mind )it is real i cant belive it abhay is so good with me today !it is just sympathy or love or something else .
abhay reads her mind and asked piyaa do you want to seen how real i am ??piya ..aaa...abhay put his cold lips on her rozy lips and slowly slowly they were taking taste of each tongue .piya put her hand on abhays shoulder and abhay 's hand is moving under piyas shirt .
after some time ,they leaved each piya cant even meet her gaze to abhay .she is shying and blushing .suddenly piya rembered that what happen with her last night !!piya runned to her house while weaping and crying ...filling with the unhappiness .
PRECAP :BREAKING NEWS : A GIRL TRAPPED MR ABHAY RAICHAND ...ALL THE NEWS CHANNEL,RADIO ...NEWSPAPER .
DAD !!!DAD !!MOM!!MOM!!CATCH ME IF YOU CAN ...
HOPE YOU ALL WILL LIKE THIS UPDATE AND PLEASE DO COMMENTS I LIKE THEM ALOT .


Edited by vampireking - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
great update oh so now they r going to marry

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