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illa

@illa8

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#571

it was a great part buddy...i hope Armaan comes to know what Anjali said her...continue super soon buddy...can i plz get another update this week cuz im on spring break and the story is going awesome? =)

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amaniM

@amaniM

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#572

Ladoo i'm going to kill you
jaldi update karo
i love this FF

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arsh_for_ever1

@arsh_for_ever1

Explorer

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#573

Hey !! Great part :)

Do continue soon! And lz arsh ke beech mein sab thik kardo :)

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Ameena

@Roxxy47

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#574

Awesome part as always 😃...

Shilpa karne kuch jati hai ho kuch jata hai 🤔...

Armaan bhi theek keh raha tha...

ArSh ke bheech mein itni problems kyun ati hain 😒...

Upar se jab Armaan Shilpa ko drop karne aya he tha toh Sumit ne entry mar li , ab aur problems create hongi...

Precap se bhi yehi lag raha hai...

Plz continue soon...

N thanks for the pm 😊.

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anusha

@Laddoo.Phaddoo

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#575

Originally posted by: risingsea101
Hayye such mein tum laddoo ho! Your so sweet <3
I loved this part
I can't wait for the next, precap has me jumping up and down
lol, continue soon <3

Thankyou hai ji😆
lol jumping up and down😉will update the part soon thankyouu😳

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anusha

@Laddoo.Phaddoo

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#576

Originally posted by: sameera_12
Nice update yaar!!! Maza aya parh ke... 👏
Anjali being Anjali just will not tolerate much but Shilpa he bhi to hadd kardi thi...
I loved the scene where he comforted her, u really wrote it down superbly!! 😊

Hmmm now he is in a mood to shut everyone off from his married life!!!! Good! Khud he handle kare apne tareeke she and I hope shilpa madam apne dimagh ka zyaada istimaal na karte hue kuch ulta seedha na sochne lag jeye ab...

Summit playing his own games... beta Armaan ka dimagh ghoom gaya to ache shilpa ka swath dena sikha dega ...

aaj ke baad mere saath aisi waahiyat baatein karne ki sochna bhi mat I know he said this in anger but I enjoyed this line the most in this whole update...

Overall the update was good, I loved it!!!
Continue soon
Love,
Sameera 😊

Hayeee apki comment ki to mainf an ho gayii Sam Jii😳😉Lol on a serious note thankyouuu sooo much Iam glad that you loved this part and yupppy moreee interesting turns and twists to come now😳and that line is my personal fav too😆

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anusha

@Laddoo.Phaddoo

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#577

Originally posted by: GurpreetKaSh16
I feel bad for Armaan ..Shilpa make him more angry
How can she say like this to him

Summit i want to kill him but i know armaan will take care of it ...lol

Why can't shilpa understand anything she have to accept armaan with love

Heeheh she will understand!Actually her role in this fic is very dull u see like a chota bachcha her brain doesnt work in such matters😉but she will soon get to knw the real things thora aur wait karlo😳

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anusha

@Laddoo.Phaddoo

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#578

anuuu awesssomeee update anuuu awesssomeee update

i never thought u will update this tht too itni jaldi it was quite surprising hehe

upar se u never informed me abt the update anyway i am happy to read it

shilpa trying to become a gd wife nt bad bt anjali she was too rude

n sumittt kameena 😡i hate it armaan is over protective towrds shilpa can't blame him poor guy is nt even getting attention from his wife u better sort of their differences n get them together i dont want any kabab mein haddis everyone in their life koi na koi villan aajatha hai

i loved this part simple bt awesome very well written keep it up n after reading the precap i cant wait to read next part u better update soon

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😲Pooiaaa Icant tell you iam sooo glad to have you back in my fanfics😳😆awww yesss I will update soon like always :P and woh story heee kya jismein villain na ho :P Lol he will get more protective dekhti jao😉
muahh thankyou babyyy😃

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anusha

@Laddoo.Phaddoo

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#579

Originally posted by: MannatSKaShian
My God :*
I am in love wid this
its sooo much of my kind FF :p
I love each and evrything abt this FF
all the characters, story ... alll :D

plzzz laddoo jaldi se update kr :*
n plzzz jaldi jaldi acha acha likha
u know what i mean by acha acha... means all things going positive in der relation :D <3 ya

n ya mujhe apni PM list m shamil karo :)

Mannuu babyy🤗first of all welcoe to my lazy fanfic ka pitara😆really:P chaloa cha hai I got one more reader then😉haan positive things likhne ke liye kuch negative bhi dikhana hoga so they r cmng for sure wait karlo😃and yesss I will add you and pm :D thankyou babyy muahh😛

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anusha

@Laddoo.Phaddoo

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#580

Originally posted by: illa8
it was a great part buddy...i hope Armaan comes to know what Anjali said her...continue super soon buddy...can i plz get another update this week cuz im on spring break and the story is going awesome? =)

Hey thankyouu😳and iam trying my best lets see hopefully I can come up with a part as a surprise😉 glad that you r loving it😛