Anjaan-AK FF pg.117 10/12, THE END - Page 47

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Anandhini thumbnail
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Posted: 19 years ago
Thanks alottttttt to everyone for writting comments.
I will continue the story soon.

luv all,
sweety 😊
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Posted: 19 years ago

misty and karthik leaves from angads office

ka: angad kithna badhlgaya na misty

m:.......

ka: misty

m:...........

ka: misty kya huva

m: mujhe .... mujhe kuch nahin huva

ka: phir mujhse bath kyun nahin kar rahi ho

m: kyun ya tumhara badhnaseeb hey

ka: kya?........ arey main tho sirf mazak kar raha tha

m: oh really

ka: ofcourse

m: phir kabhi ayise mazak math karna

ka: ok sorry

during dinner

misty and karthik are waiting for angad, akshi and josh

after like 5 minutes they arrive

ak: hi misty aunty, hi karthi uncle

m,ka: hi akshi, how are you

ak: iam great aunty, congrajulations and she hands them a gift box

m: thank you akshi

they order their dinner and talk for a while

ak: mujhe icecrem chahiye

a: akshi no icecream

ak: pleaseeeeeeeeee

ka: arey angad tum bhi na let her have it, chalo akshi hum chaltey hey icecream ke liye

m: mere liye bhi karthik

ka: oh main kaise bhul saktha hun, lekin misty don't you think tum bahuth motti ho gayi ho

she was about hit him but karthik and akshi go for the ice cream

m: angad kripa ka kuch patha chala

a: nahin misty

misty was about to ask something but josh signs not to ask and to change the topic

j: misty ye bathao prithvi kya kar rahan hey ajj kal

m: you gguys wont believe oh kudh ka ek music album kar raha hey

j: wow thats great, atlast he listened to me

a: mathlab

j: patha hey main vuse kab se bhol raha tha ki vuse music field main jana chahiye

m: josh tum kuch badhle nahin

j: arey maine kab kaha ki main badhalgaya hun

and 3 share a laugh

karthik comes back with icecream all of them enjoy

josh stays back at angads place

In london

its kripaand kirans graduation day, kiran is jumping with joy as her boyfriend is coming to visit her

the graduation is done in the morning and party is in the evening

kiran is waiting for her boyfriend, kiran is prising her boyfriend alot in front of kripa

doorbell rings kiran runs fast to open the door and its her boyfriend(bf), she just hugs him tightly

ki: tumhe patha nahin ajj main kithna kush hun

bf: kiran iam sorry

ki: sorry kisliye

bf: maine shaadhi karli kiran, yaha honeymoon keliye aya tha , tho socha tumse ek bar millu

kiran is dead shocked she just closes the door on his face and breaks down

bf rings the bell again

this time kripa opens the door

bf: kiran

k: i don't know what happened but please don't disturb her for a while i will try to talk to her

bf: thanks

k: its ok, bye

bf: bye

thats for today , i will try to continue soon

thanks again for thos e comemnts

luv

sweety

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Posted: 19 years ago
awwwwwwwwwwwww man another sad ending......Anyways plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz make it happy soon.
Awesome part. Excellent Job!! 😃
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Posted: 19 years ago
omg ...that bad for kiran 😆

but hey ..its was a great part....akshi is chooo chweet 😊
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Posted: 19 years ago
tht was a bit random, but otherwise the part was great!!
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Posted: 19 years ago
Awe, I feel so bad for Kiran but awesome job once again!!! 👏
Anandhini thumbnail
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Posted: 19 years ago

HI friends sorry for the delay

Thanks alot for writting comments to everyone

🤗

Luv all

sweety

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Posted: 19 years ago

in london

kripa tries to control kiran alot

k: kiran try to control yourself, may be he is not the right person for you someone else is waiting for you kiran

ki: kripa please leave me alone , please kripa please

kripa leaves kiran alone and goes to library

in Europe

angad gets a phone call

a: hello

na: hello angad beta, kaise ho

a: hi maa, main thik hun vaha sab kaise hey

na: sab thik hey, mujhe tumse ek jarruri bath karni hey

a: (worried) kya bath hey mom, is something wrong

na: nothing is wrong , aaliya europe a rahi hey ajj sham ki flight se tum vuse pick karlena

a: what aaliya a rahi hey , lkein achanak, kya huva vuse

na: jab oh ayeghi na thab tum kudh puchlo , haan aur ek bath josh se math kehna ki aaliya a rahi hey

a: ok, lekin kyun

na: jab aaliya ayeghi thab sab patha chalegha, ok bye beta

and she disconnects the phone

angad thinks all the day , why aaliya is coming and why he shouldn't tell josh about aaliya's arrival

in the evening at the airport angad and akshi goes to recieve aaliya

ak: hi bua

aa: hi akshi how are you my sweet heart

ak: more then perfect, aur app

aa: great , angad kaha hey

ak: gadi park karne gaye hey

just then anagad comes and shocked to see aaliya in a salwar rather than in a jeans

aa: hi angad, how are you ? and why are you so shocked

a: hi aaliya, tum ne ye kya pehna hey , you look like a girl

aa: angadddddddddddddd

a: sorry sorry , you are looking beautifull

aa: thank you bhaya

a: pehle tum ye bholo ki ye achanak visit ki kya reason hey

aa: (making a puppy face) kya mujhe tum yehi pe sare bathey puchoghey ghar nahin anedhogey kya?

ak: chodiye na papa let relax for a while phir bath karenghey , turning towatds aaliya cheliye bua hum chaltey hey

a: as you wish my princess

they all head towards the car

while driving angad gets a call from josh

a: haan josh bholo

j: arey yaar tum log kaha ho , main tumhare ghar ghaya tha, lekin tum log nahin tey, aur office main bhi nahin I need to talk to you and its urgent

a: cool down , oh actually main aur akshi ....... aliya signs him not to tell

j: thu aur akshi kya.....

a: gumne aye hey , aur oh kuan si urgent bath hey

j: ok ok, oh ek naya deal aya hey vuskey bare main bath karni hey mujeh, ek kam kartey main rathko ko tumhe milungha ok bye

a: ok

both disconnects the phone

they reach home

a: now tell whats this sudden visit aur ye josh ka kya chakar hey

aa: mujhe apko dekhna tha issiliye ayi, josh k aur mera chota sa jegada(fight) hogaya tha issliye

a: dal main kuch kala hey

aa: kal subha app ko patha chelegha

a: ok ok abhi tum aram karo, main tum dhono ke liye dinner banaoungha, main aur josh bahar kalenghey

aa: ok

angad and josh meet at a restuarnt for dinner and they discuss about new deal

next day morning

aa: bhaya kaha ho tum

a: coming downstairs, kya bath hey alliya

aa: pehle yaha avo tho sahi

a: haan abb bholo

aa: ana hath aghey karo

a: why

aa: just do it

a: ok

he forwards his hand and aaliya ties the rakhi, its raksha bandhan

aa: abb samjh main aya main kyun ayi

a:(with tears in his eyes), main tho bhul hi ghaya tha , he gives a big hug 🤗to aaliya, Iam sorry aaliya

aa: arey angad chote bachey ki tarah ro rahey ho aur mujhe bhi rularahey ho

a: Iam very lucky aaliya, to have you

aa: abb ye sab bandh karo aur mera gift kaha hey

a: kya chahiye

aa: jo manghunghi kya oh denghey

a: mangh key tho dekhlo

aa: please move on, in your life bhaya

a: abb main tho vohi kar raha hun na

aa: mera mathlab oh nahin tha, app shaadhi kyun nahin karletey

a: meri shaadhi ho chuki hey aaliya

aaliya is shocked

a: jis dhin maine kripa ko propose kiya tha vusi dhin hum dhono ek ho chukeytey

aa: atleast app ek bar ghar tho ayiyena

a: abb main ghar main hi tho hun

aa: angad this is not fair

just then door bell rings and aaliya goes to open the door before angad can say something

aaliya opens the door and shocked to see josh in front of her and even josh is shocked to see aaliya

j: aaliya tum?

aa: nahin ye mera bhooth hey

j: oh.......kya?

aa: andhar avighey ya door bandh karu

josh enters and aaliya goes upstairs and josh back of her

j: aaliya mere bath tho suno

aa: nahin mujhe kuch nahin sunna hey

a: hi josh

j: aaliya please try to listen yaar

aa: tum yahi bhologhey na ki thoda busy hoghaya tha, nahin tho kya kahoghey simmi tumhari sirf ek achi dosth hey aur kuch nahin

j: haan main tho vohi bholna chahtha hun

aa: mujhe tumse bath nahin karni , she enters her room and closes the door before josh can enter

angad who is watching all this is confused

thats for today

hope everyone likes this part

please do write comments

luv

sweety

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Posted: 19 years ago
heyy!!!..tht was was brilliant!!...glad u continued 😃 !!..cont soon as possible!!
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Posted: 19 years ago
omg i finiali finished readin the fan fic to date...taken ages!!! lol ...but it is reali gudd....plz let angad n kripa meet...cant c them away from each other for too long!!! 😭 ....this is a great fan fic lov it!!!! plz continue tho!!!!! 👏 👏

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