THE UNKNOWN/last part page 278 - Page 25

Originally posted by: night girl

i will try continue the next part tonight but iam not sure if i will be able to because i have guest comeing over but i will try to continue so u all can figure out who #5 is 😉

TOP 8 OF AHEM LIST U NEED 2 DO OR ANWER....JUST READ IT N REPLY

(COZ I WORKED HARD TYPING IT)

• 1st of alll how long does it ake 2 eat

• 2nd of all in our family we dont hv tht many gals sooo ur going 2 be dead bored w/ out m SOOO CONTINUE DA FAN FIC

• 3rd of alll u better make it a-z-i-k(or ill kill u i no ur mom wont scream coz shez 2 nice)

• 4th of all i figure somethin out abt fazzu coz he told me n ur going 2 scream wen u here it

• 5th of alll MR.PATEL went out w/ ahem(we no her N ITZ SCARY k coz it worse then runiz n amish)

• 6th of all do SOMETHING ABT UR FAN FIC CHATTIN IN LOVE(i mean contunie)

• 7th of alll WEN R U COMING 2 MY HOUSE!!!!!

• 8 of alll i need 2 talk 2 u

u just said number 5 isn't angad or kripa's friends, that doesn't make sense becuz i am sure that #1 is angad and then he said that #5 is his 2nd best friend since his first best friend is a girl


so me confused

luv mira

plz cont. soon...
i just luv ur story...
👏

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Originally posted by: Gotta_luv_KYPH

u just said number 5 isn't angad or kripa's friends, that doesn't make sense becuz i am sure that #1 is angad and then he said that #5 is his 2nd best friend since his first best friend is a girl


so me confused

luv mira

but i havent told u if #1 is angad or not.......#5 is #1s friend not angads

do u get what i am saying😉

Originally posted by: Night Maiden

I KNEW IT I KNEW IT.............#1 IS DEFINITLY ANGAD

SO NOW :

#1) ANGAD FOR SURE
#2) KARAN
#5) JOSH

JUSTT A BIT CONFUSED ABOUT #3 AND #4 BUT WILL FIGURE IT OUT SOOOOOOON...THOUGH IM SURE THAT ONE OF THEM IS PRITHVI...LOL...........LOVE THIS STORY........RUHEE.GIRL U REALLY ROCK...IM MEAN WHERE DO U COME UP WID SUCH AN AMAZING STORY..........U REALLY ROCK...............LOVE U......LOL 😆

LOTS OF LOVE

ALEENA 😉😉😉

i dont know were i get the ideas for my fan fic some times when i wake up in the moring i just have a realy good idea and so i just start the fan fic and some times i cant think of one thing and i just tire my self out thinking and thinking

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sorry to tell u this but the thing is i will never fall in love with josh, so josh can never be #5

because i am madly in love with #5 and the thing is josh he is just 10 years older then me.......lol just to old for me

Originally posted by: ishu124

TOP 8 OF AHEM LIST U NEED 2 DO OR ANWER....JUST READ IT N REPLY

(COZ I WORKED HARD TYPING IT)

• 1st of alll how long does it ake 2 eat

• 2nd of all in our family we dont hv tht many gals sooo ur going 2 be dead bored w/ out m SOOO CONTINUE DA FAN FIC

• 3rd of alll u better make it a-z-i-k(or ill kill u i no ur mom wont scream coz shez 2 nice)

• 4th of all i figure somethin out abt fazzu coz he told me n ur going 2 scream wen u here it

• 5th of alll MR.PATEL went out w/ ahem(we no her N ITZ SCARY k coz it worse then runiz n amish)

• 6th of all do SOMETHING ABT UR FAN FIC CHATTIN IN LOVE(i mean contunie)

• 7th of alll WEN R U COMING 2 MY HOUSE!!!!!

• 8 of alll i need 2 talk 2 u

for your 1st question-i am not even eating right now

for your 2nd question-i dont need a friend that is from my family i can make friends on my own

for your 3rd question-i changed the person and it is not tb or a-z-i-k ok!

for your 4th question-i dont care about mr.bear

for your 5th question-i dont care who mr.p is going out with i dont care about him or what he dose

for your 6th question-rav is going to continue the next part and when she dose then i will

for your 7th question-i am going to come to your house when i get time

for your 8th question-u dont need to talk to me u just want to talk to me.....u know i have a cellphone just call me duh

hope that answers your question

ok every one i am completly free so next part comeing in a few mins 😃

part 12

we see the unknown helping kripa up her window...as soon as kripa comes up her window she says good bye to the unknown

k-bye

#1-bye

the unknown rides on his motercycle and zooms away. as soon as the unknown is out of sight kripas door opens and her mom comes in

g-kripa i have been calling your name of so long why havent u answered

k-oh i was day dreaming

g-well stop day dreaming and clean up your room were haveing guest come over to r house

k-whos comeing

g-your coz

k-which coz

g-u know the one u hate so much

k-WHAT!!!!!NO NOT HIM!!!!!!!!!!!

g-look i know that u hate him and all but cant u forget what happend a move on

k-NO!!!!!!!

g-well u like it or not he is comeing here ok

k-gurr

g-dont u dare use that tone on me miss.kripa

k-sorry mom.....i will start to clean up my room happy

g-good your coz will be here in 30 mins so wear something better it seems as if you were in the dirt and mud from what your wearing.......kripa what have u been doing up here u have been in your room sence school time then were did all this mud come from

kripa grins

k-i dont know

g-kripa(in a angry tone)

k-its from the suprise iam makeing for u

g-well make sure its not to mess because in the end u will have to clean it up

k-ok mom

kripas mom leaves the room and kripa cleans up the room and then takes a shower and wears white jeans with a blue shirt and a blue jacket over the blue shirt

right when kripa puts on her jacket the door bell rings

k-(to her self)great the duffer coz is here

kripa gose down stairs and opens the door to see angad there

k-angad what r u doing here

a-i was geting bored....so i thought to come see u

k-angad my duffer coz is comeing and u r here

a-wait r u talking about your coz that u hated so much

k-ya

a-finily i get to meet him

k-angad trust me u will hate me

a-u still havent goten over the fact of him breaking your doll

k-so i still hate him

a-i want to meet your coz u always tell me how much u hate him and all i want to see how bad he is

right then the door bell rings again kripa opens the door

the carma scans the guy body that was at the door first we see black dress shoes then black dress pants then a black transparnt shirt and finily we see the guys face and it is (Ail Zafar Iqbla Khan....for those of you who dont know who he is he is a pakstan singer.....he will play the role of kripas coz by the name of shaun)

shaun=s

s-sup coz

he hugs kripa in a friend way

k-hi(saying in a rude tone)

s-so who is he

shaun points to angad

k-he is my friend....angad meet my coz shaun.....shaun meet my friend angad

s-nice to meet u

a-nice to meet u to

right then kripa mom and kripas dad come at the door way

sulben=su

su-shaun y r u standing out side please come in

shaun comes inside the house

g-come every one lets go have dinner

every one walks to the dinner table

every one is talking and enjoying dinner excet kripa

su-so shaun your parents said that u r going to be going to the same school as kripa

s-yup

shaun was siting right beside kripa and kripa was siting beside angad

s-(wispers in kripas ear)this way i can bug u more

kripa rolls her eyes

k-shaun can u pass me the rice(in a angry but trying to hide her anger voice)

s-sure

as shaun reaches for the rice bowl kripa notices a deep cut on shauns hand.....kripa drops her spoon and kripa stares at shauns cut with her mouth wide open in shock



hope u like this part 😊
next part comeing soon

OMG...is shaun #5...
i think he is...
anywayz gr8 part...
plz cont. soon... 👏 👏 👏

or is it
#1 angad
2- karan
3- prithvi
4- josh
5- shaun