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Posted: 19 years ago
i absolutely loved it! Loads of ppl like ur fan fic including me - don't ever stop writing ur really good!

Plz plz plz plz continue soon it was a gr8 part!!!!!!!!!!! 😃
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Posted: 19 years ago
omg plzzzzzzzz dont deprive us of a long apart jus cuz sum ppl dun hav time...theyre busy ppl sooooooooo plz post ur long part....and that last part waz awesum 👏
luv himani 😃
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Posted: 19 years ago
ok every one next part comeing in a few mins 😃
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Posted: 19 years ago
part 44

dinner time

we see angad dillip and kripa at the table eating when angads phone rings

a-hello

some one-hey its me karan, guess what me prithic and shaun just reached india and are comeing to your house to vist you and kripa

a-ok cool

angad shuts his phone

k-who was it

a-karan,he said he and the rest of the gang reached india and are comeing here

k-oh

after eating angad and kripa were siting in the liveing room talking and waiting for karan,prithiv, and shaun to arrive

a-so kripa hows life been with out me(kind of in a jokeing tone)

k-ok not to bad but wasnt as fun as it was when you were with me

a-realy

angad came close to kripa makeing kripa lean back while angad put one arm around kripas waist

a-(in a whisper joking tone)what type of fun did you like (look strait in to kripas eyes)the time i kissed you or the time when we were friends(smiles realy big)

k-(smiles)both

a-well i gave you friendship now all thats left is the kiss

k-you dont have the guts to kiss me

a-wanna bet

k-ya sure

angad leand in closer to kiss kripa as angads lips were less then one inch away kripa could feel angads warm breath brushing on her face,kripa could feel angads strong arms tightem around her waist. right when angad was about to kiss kripa the door bell rang

angad and kripa part

a-darn

k-told you, you wont have the guts to kiss me

a-oh ya

k-ya

a-dont worrie i will get you later

k-are you challaning me

a-ya i am

k-challange taken

the door bell rings a few more times and angad gose to answer the door.as angad opens the door he sees karan prithiv and shaun at the door way.angad hugs his friends and invites them in the house

in the living room

we see angad kripa prithiv karan and shaun in the living room talking and jokeing around

ka-hey guys remember when we were in high school we did all sorts of crazy things

s-high school was so much fun

k-high school rock collage was boring

a-true

after talking some more kripa gets tired and desides to go to sleep and let the guys talk

k-i am geting tired iam going to bed you guys continue to talk and enjoy

ka,s,p,a,-ok good night

as soon as kripa gose up stairs and closes her bed room dorr karan, shaun,prithiv.and angad become serious.

a-ok every one lets get to work

s-(whispers to prithiv)here we go again

prithiv laughs a little but turns serious when angad looks at prithiv in anger

p-sorry

a-karan whats the crime rate for india

ka-well angad you were right about the killers as soon as the unknwons were gone the killers had no reason to be and also whent out of bussiness but as the unknwons left the crime rate went higher then ever,some people wanted to see the unknwons so they became crimilas hopeing that the unknowns would come and stop them

p-what about the ploice

s-dude have you ever seen indias police, only 10%of the polive want to stop crime the rest just want money and go

a-karan what is the percent in crime

ka-60% of india is crimals and only 40% are good inocent people

a-darn when the unknowns worked there was only 30% crime....guys looks like the unknwons will have to return

ka-then we have a problem

a-whats that

ka-well i know that #1 is angad #2 is me #4 is prithiv and #5 is shaun but none of us know who #3 is, how are we going to find her?

a-darn i never thought about that

s-i got an idea, karan you know how to send a e-mail to every person in india right

ka-ya

s-then send a e-mail to evey one stateing "unknowns returned,#3 come to unknwon house"

ka-thats a great idea

a-ok then, all unknwons be at the house by tommrow moring to get to work, oh prithiv. no flurting with criminals, remember what happend last time

p-ya ya i know

next moring

the next moring when kripa woke up she saw angad in front of her

a-good moring kripa

k-good noring (sits up in bed)so what brings you to my room

a-no reason just wanted to see you

k-oh

right then angads cellphone rings

a-hello....oh man i forgot....ok iam comeing

a-kripa i have to jet

right when angad was about to leave kripa room kripa stoped him.

k-angad

a-ya where do u have to go

a-uummm....meeting

k-but how can you go to a meeting if you dont work?

a-uuuummmm....iam meeting my friends

k-which friends?

a-kripa you question way to much iam going

before kripa could say any thing else angad stormed out of the door

after angad left kripa got dressed and sat on the computer to read her e-mail.as kripa opened her e-mail, kripa saw about 100 e-mails reading unknowns returned all unknowns come to base" kripa didnt understand the e-mail but knew that the unknowns were back. kripa quickly picks up her cellphone and calls shaun

s-hello

k-hello, shaun whats up with the crazy e-mails are the unknowns realy back?

s-yup #5 unknown has returned and so has #1234....well i got to go unknown #1 just arrived got to go

k-oh,ok,well bye and tell all the unknwons that i said hi

s-ok i will tell them

kripa shuts her phone off and quickly runs to dillip's room.as kripa enters dillips room kripa quickly wakes dillip up


hope u like this part
next part comeing soon
next part will be way better
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Posted: 19 years ago
hey tat was fabulous ... i can't wait to know who unknown number three is ---> ne hints? i don't think its kirpa ne more
cause after shaun said "yup #5 unknown has returned and so has #1234" it sounded as if they already contacted number three and shes with him currently...

Nida 😊
Edited by kneeduh2000 - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago

hey tat was fabulous ... i can't wait to know who unknown number three is ---> ne hints? i don't think its kirpa ne more
cause after shaun said "yup #5 unknown has returned and so has #1234" it sounded as if they already contacted number three and shes with him currently...
Nida 😊

Edited by kneeduh2000 - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
Simply amazing ruhee.........i can't wait for the rest of the gang to find out that KRIPA is #3......Continue soooooooonnnnnnnnn

luv u all

Aleena 👏
Edited by Night Maiden - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
😆 😆 😆 greatttttt jobbbbbb
it was awesomeeeeeeeeee
cont sooooon 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
sorry for not commenting till now as I could not find this fanfic
continue soon
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Posted: 19 years ago
hey every one thanks for the great comment i will try and continue because i have to go some where from 9-12:30 then i have to go and get my 4th cellphone after breating 2 of them and giveing away my razor phone to my coz and then after geting a new cellphone i have to go to ishu124s house so i dont know if i will have time to post the next part today but i will try to

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