MN FF 'Limpidness Of Heart '..PART 9..PG34...04/12 - Page 9

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: gopi06

lovely updt
cont soon
thanks for the pm

hey dear thanks alot...😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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thanks a lot dear...
m glad u liked it...😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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PART 3
AB: beta sab hujayei ga'' dewali se pehlay loan khatam hujyaei ga'.tum bas tiyari rakhoo'..

M: nodded'.. as no one knew how mch he happy'.. and now more thrilled to meet his love of life nupur'''

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Gunjan: wow mom'hurriedly standup from her seat and hug her'. Thts gr8 news''.. nupur di hmaray ghr aarahi hai''. Mai abhi ja k yeh news di ko daiti hu''. She ran towards her room and rest of the family were enjoying at her behave''.

M: dad'' yeh sab kch itna jaldi hai'..abhi tu hum nai loan bhi daina hai''..showed his concern

AB: beta sab hujayei ga'' dewali se pehlay loan khatam hujyaei ga'.tum bas tiyari rakhoo'..

M: nodded'.. as no one knew how mch he happy'.. and now more thrilled to meet his love of life nupur'''

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Nupur wasn't believing tht her prayers would soon be fulfilled'her face was blushing more and more thinking abt mayank and those moments which she'll soon be going to spend with her love of life''..

Meanwhile her phone rings''after seeing the flashing name maynak on the screen her face goes pink'''

She hesitantly pick up the phone''..

N: hello'

M: hayei maar gaya''..😆'.

N: kiya hua maynak ''.sab theik hai'..? with bit concerned tone

M: sab kaisey theik rehsakta hai tumharai hotai hui''.. Grin

N: matlab?

M: tum agar itnai piyar se aur itna Sharma k hello kaho gi tu sochoo nupur mera kiya huga aur jab samnay aao gi tu bas mjhey tu lag raha hi k kahi ''' ahem ahem'''lol

N: mayank''. Sharam karoo''.goes beyond red'..

M: aab sharam ka zamana gaya my love of life''. Aab tu bas besharmi k din hai'''😉

Both burst out louder'''

M: nupur''..

N: hmmm''

M: tum khush hona''.???

N: mai buhat khush hu mayank''' I can't even express my feelings tht how mch m happy'''.

M: nupur mai tumhay hmesh aiss tarah khush daikhna chahat hu'' I promise mai hmesha tumhari sath raho ga issi tarah'''.smiled

N: I know mayank'.. I trust u more than myself'''.

M: aab bas ready rahoo nupur here mayank Sharma is coming to her would be wife''..smile''

These days nupur were feeling on top of the world.s he used to spend more time at home just to make sure tht everythg should be perfect, neat and clean specially mayank room. Her mother was quite surprised at her behave as she was trying to figure out the actual reason but unfortunately failed.

Finally the day came whn Anand family was coming. Mr. sidhart and his wife was unaware of their arrival. Nupur dreesed in a pink churiddar with half open hairs looking simple and adorable.

Ratna: yeh aaj koi khas din hai kiya?

ND: q?

Ratna: nupur subah se hi buhat khush nazr aarahi ha. Ghar k saray kaam kiyei khud se. aur aab aisei tiyar hu k bethi hai k jaise us ko daikhnai ladjai walai aarahay hai''.frown

Nupur who is silently listening their conversation suddenly felt sumthg strange inside her. Her face has been covered with blushing.it was lookin like she knew whts will going to happen whn his mayank came''winked''.

SUddenly they heard a noise'.all of thm just turned around to see whn mr sAnand entered in the hall'..

MD: hello brother''.with open arms

ND: aaray bhai sahib aap'''? He was happy to see his elder brother''both hug eachother. Apnai apnai aanay ka bataya hi nai''. Mai khud apko receive kernai aata''..smiled

MD: aaray nai hum apko surprise daina chatai thei'.. nupur beti ko malom th ahumnai unnai ap loogoo batani ko manah kia tha''.

After heard this ratna face expression were change.

Ratna: aacha tu yeh baat thei jab hi maharani sahaba itni khush thei'''. envious

SA: aaray ratna kaisey hu'.mayank mom greet with her at the same time gunjan was dam happy to see her di after like ages''

G: di ap tu buhat change hugayei hu''..aur itni piyari bhi''..she huged her'..

At the same time mayank was welcoming by his uncle whn he heard gunjan statement start looking at her with the corner of his eyes. Nupur was feeling his intense gaze which made her blushd more. Eventually both looked at eachother at the same time . mayank passed her a flying kiss and praised her with his eyes'' nupur was equally done the same which made mayank go crazy for her more''.

After the long ended dinner every one was so tired tht they went to their respective rooms. Gunjan came to nupur ''''

G: Kia ker rah hu di?

N: bas sonai ki tayari'''

G: but ap tu nai sosakti''. Smile

N: y? Confusingly loking at her''.

G: she came closer to her and whisper'.. koi apka intezar ker raha hia''. Winked.

N: intezar''. Matlab? She puzzled'..

G: uff ho dei kabhi tu samjh jaya karaoo'.. bhai apka terrace pai wait ker rahay hai''.

Nupur made face go red her heart beat started get higher to the top''

G: hm''.. koi Sharma raha hai'' giggle''

N: shut up gunjii.. I can't go''. Koi daikh lai ga'.scared

G: don't worry sab sogayei hai''.. I already investigated''. Aur mai huna''. Aap bas jao '.. she push her outside the room''.

Nupur hesitantly move toards the terrace. Her heart was pumping hard and was trying to coming out'' the more she was covering the distance the more her face blushing 'she composed herself and finally reached to terrace'' but she found no one there'' she was looking here and there whn she felt sum ones warm touch on her waist'. Mayank hold her waist and placed her chin on her shoulder''..

M: mjhey dhond rahi thei''?? Kissed her

N: Nai . vo . mai'. shuffled'..

Mayank made her turn towards himself''.

M:nupur'speak softly ''

Nupur open her eyes and respond''.

N: hmm''.both having an eye lock''.

Mayank proceeds towards their cheeks and was abt to kiss whn nupur huged her''

N: I missed u so mch mayank''..her eyes got teary'''

M: I missed u too''. Both huged eachother for long time''..then broke apart''.

M: nupur u becomes more beautiful''.. alleged with a kiss on her for head''

N: tum bhi tu handsome hugayei hu'..winked

M: I know sab ladkiyaa yahi kehti hai. Tell me somethg new which I don't know'''..winked

N: mayank '.. She smack on his shoulder. And both burst into laugh'''.

Tht night was beautiful as both have met after 5 yrs. They shared lots of memories, moments of those past 5 yrs''..

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Holi preparations were started.every one was excited abt it'all were in preparations'mr Anand and mr sidhart was seeing happy as they both decided to eradicate all the misunderstandings between thm. This makes mayank relieved.

Nupur was headed for kitchen whn she dragged by sum 1 in the room. She was abt to shout whn mayank placed his hand over her mouth''

M: ssshh'. Chilana nai mai hu''

Nupur was surprised by his attitude and pointing him to remove his hands.he move his hand'

N: mayank yeh kia harkat hai? Agar kisi nai daikh liya tu'.? Let me go'' buhat kaam hai ''

M: chup''.!!! Kitna bolti hu''. He takes out a pendant and placed it on nupur hand'..

N: wht is this mayank'?/ shocked

M: pls mana maat kerna ''yeh meri taraf se holi ka gift hai ' closed her fist and kissed on it'.

Nupur accept it with a smile and left ''..

Nxt day everyone was enjoying holi and was playing with the colours'..nupur also enjoying this holi as she wants this holi to be the most memorable one of her life'''she was busy playing with gunjan whn she felt sumone warm breath on her face she turned around and amazed to see mayank'.. mayank put a red color on her face'.

M: hmaray piyar ki pehli holi Mubarak hu nupur'.. with tht he left as he don't want any 1 to witness this.

Nupur blush hard whn gunjan tease her''

G: hmm'.. kisi ko buhat sharam aarahi hai''.lol''

N: gunjii'' chup ker''. Both huged eacother'''.

G: m soo happy for both of u di'''.

N: me too gunji''.. smiled'.

hopeu like it gyyz...😉

Edited by drmaha - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#84
yeee res
firsttt
dhin ta na na na dhin ta na na na

edittt



i just adour the way mayank was so excited to meet her...
his blushes n flutter were so cute...
awww...nupur was too so excited...i hate her mom...n actually fear from her...
i hope she do not make any problem between them..i know mayank will guard her...
the terrace scene was so amazing...so cute...n thn the way he put the color on her..lovely...
gr8 update cont soon









Edited by -Faria- - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#85
awesome update...
loved it lodsss...
awww...
Mayank is so cute na!!!!
i was also happy for Nupur...
d terrace scene was sooo adorable...
i loved it...
n d holi part was also nice...
bt m now afraid of wht gonna happen...
is it necessary to make us sad!!!!!😒
u know mujhe har update parhne se pehle ye dar lagta hain ke pata nhi kya bura ho...hehehe😆
waiting eagerly for d next part...
love u...🤗🤗🤗
Edited by 18anila1 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#86
Loved it dear...
Thank you 🤗
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Posted: 13 years ago
#87
amazing
really happy for nupur but hope nothing goes bad
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Posted: 13 years ago
#88
waoo tht is an amzing update
with so much of blosming love and affection in it..
loved there moments..so cute..
update soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
#89
i only hope n pray k unke pyar ko kisi ki b nazar na lage esp her mom
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Posted: 13 years ago
#90
Lovely update dear
Hope they will remain happy ever
thanks for pm

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