MN FF 'Limpidness Of Heart '..PART 9..PG34...04/12 - Page 6

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Posted: 13 years ago
#51
😉

Originally posted by: -Faria-

Mahaaa
u started a new FF
oye hoye congrats hun
yeee i loved ur concept. mayur were childhood frnd ad they loved each other. mayank was biggest suport of nups when her mom had died. poor nups - her step mom dont lve her.. r amyu bhi use chodke chala gaya..
ye tu kya kar rahe hai- dekh tujhe rtrazedy queen ban neki jarurat nehi hai.-samjhi ???



part 1


This is really very heart wrecthing
Nupur ki step mom tu jalad hai
Aur upper se us k dad bhi us kay sath nhi
Poor Nupur'.this is too much

But shuakr hai Gunjan hai us ki life mein'
Aur hope so us ki agay ki life achi hoo

again fabulous update]
loved it so much hun
plz next time try to update a longer part
take care
lve ya

cascade thank u so much-- u know why... love ya





ya i have atarted a new ff... 😉
thanks u shooo mch janii for likin it... 🤗
mai aur tragedy queen... hmmm...😉😆.. lets see...situation kaha se kaha jati hai...
thanks alot janii for likin it...😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
#52

Originally posted by: vivak

very nice began ⭐️..

cont soon .
thanks for the pm 😛

thanks alot dear...😊

Originally posted by: DhanakZ

Oh Feeling so bad for Nupur

I hate this ratna
Hope Mayank come soon as her savior
thanks for pm
cont soon

thnaks alot dear for likikin it... 😊

Originally posted by: SamiraARTiMAYUR

Beautiful but short dear

hope we got next time big update
thanks for the pm

thnaks alot dear .
m glad u lik eit... 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
#53
thanks a lot dear...😊
thanks alot dear...😊
thanks a lot dear... 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
#54
Thanks a lot people for likin the 1st part...🤗
LIMPIDNESS OH HEART
PART 2:

N: gunji…… merai sath hi aisa q hua? Cried

G: di yeh time hmesha ek sa nai rehta…… ap daikhna ek din ap inn sab se hmesha dur chali jao gi aur buhat khush raho gi…….. aacha dei mai college k liyei late hurahi hu…… bye….

N: bye…

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Gunjan and her family members were busy in breakfast. Whn shilpa aunte ask…..

SA: kiya hua gunjan beta tum sahi se brkfast q nai ker rahi…….?

Gunjan: mom meri di se baat hui thei…….made a sad face

Mayank who were busy in brkfast stop his hands and start listening to gunjan…….

Gunjan: mom di aaj ro rahi thei ……aaj phir se aunte nai scene create kia….. mom mjhse di ki halat daikhi nai jatai……. Abt to cry

SA: bechari bachi…… waisey buhat bura kiya hai kismet nai uss k sath…… choti age mai usski maa ko cheen liya aur phir sooteli maa ko laa bethaya……. Mjhey tu bhai sahib ki samh nai aati…. Apni biwi k samnay unnay sab jhootai hi nazar aatai hai…….aap kch kehtai q nai unai….. she pointed towards mr. Sharma.

AB: mai kia kaho ..buhat bar samjhaya hai but vo samjhtai hi nai…..mai tu bas uss din ka intezar ker raha hu k jab mai loan chuka doo jo humnai mayank ki padhyi k liyei lia tha phir mai sidharth se nupur ka hath mango ga…….

Mayank who was busy in listening their family convo….smile a bit but at the same time worried and headed towards his room…..

M: mai aata hu maa…………

Mayank took out a picture of nupur and start caressing it……

M: mai janta hu nupur tum pai kiya guzar rahi hai….i wish I could be there wid u…..but I promise nupur mai tumhay buhat jald waha se nikal lao ga……….buhat jald………kissed her pic...

AB: mayank chaloo office k liyei late hurahay hai………

M: coming dad………..he immediately place tht pic back to their location and went for the office……

Nupur who is still lost in her maa pic heard a voice…….

Ratna: aaray kia aab pura din ooper hi rehna hai ya neechay aa k kaam bhi kerna hai maharani sahiba nai…..

N: aarahi hi mom……

She came downstairs and ratna instruct her whole day work and left for the shopping……

Nupur after the tiring day laid on bed…… her body is paining badly…….she don't have even a dinner…..her phone rings…..

N: hello….

M: hello nupur……

N: she felt content after listening his voice……..m fi9 mayank ……tum kaisey hu…..?

M: mai bhi theik hu……. Nupur tum aaj uni q nai gayei……?

N: jantai tu hu poch q rahay hu…….?

M: janta hu but tumharay moo se suna chata hu……..

N: mayank pls……… pleaded

M: nupur tum janti hu mai tumse kitna piyar kerta hu aur tumhay aisei halat mai nai daikh sakta…….anxiously said

Mai bas uss din ka intezar ker raha hu jab loan pura hu aur mai tumhara hath manganai aao…… karoo gi mjhse shadi……?

N: hmm……. Shying…..

M: wht hmmm……. Mjhey proper ans chayei ……. Playfully said….

N: mayank na tang karoo pls……… blushed ….

M: ohh ho…….. sharam aarahai hai nupur jii ko…… abhi yeh haal hai tu jab samnai aao ga tab tu pata nai kia huga……..lol……..

N: mayank……shut up…….. Lovingly said……..

M: bas tumharay face pai yahi smile daikhna chata tha………… I love u nupur……

N: love u too mayank……….u know if tum na hotai tu shayed mai kab ki maar chuki hoti……meri himmat hu tum mayank……..i'll eagerly waiting for tht day whn we will be together forever….

M: shhh….. aisei nai kehtai ..meray hotai tumhay kch nai husakta……… mai kch ghalat nai honai dooga……..aacha yeh batao shadi k baad socha hai kiya kerna hai ……….?

N: kia kerna hai matlab?

M: matlab yeh k kaha jana hai……… ghar kaisei decorate kerna hai after all meri would be wife architect banai ja rahi hai …… smile…….waisey tum kia samjhii k mera kiya matlab hai……..??? naughtingly asking……..

N: mayank I 'll kill u……

M: lol lol…….. hayei tumhari iss aada pai tu mai maar jawa………………..lol…….

Both were busy in making planning for their bright future …widout knowing wht life will decide… life u know na guyz unpredictable……

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AB: shilpa mai soch raha tha k q na yeh holi hum Mumbai bhai sahib k sath manayei….. khushi ka moka huga aur sahi time daikh k mai unse nupur aur mayank ki shadi ki baat karoo ga….. atleast engagmnet tu husakti hai……..

SA: apnai tu meri dil ki baat kahi hai…… magar loan ka kiya?

AB: loan dewali aanay k pehlay khatam hugayei ga phir dewali k baad shadi……..excitedly said

SA: yeh baat khoob kahi apnai…… bachai tu yeh sun k khushi se pagal hi hujayei gai …… akhar ko 5 yrs baad jarahay hai hum……….

AB: tu phir bas janay ki tiyari karoo……smile….

SA: mai abhi jati hu…….

All Sharma family were busy in having dinner whn mrs Sharma announced……

SA: bacho tum loogoo k liyei ek gud news hai….

G: kiya mom…….? Impatiently said

SA: hum iss bar holi Mumbai mai celebrate karay gai aur mera aur tumharai dad k khayal hai k hum maynak aur nupur k engagmnet ki baat karay aur shadi dewali k baad…….looked at mayank to judge his expressions…..

Gunjan: wow mom…hurriedly standup from her seat and hug her…. Thts gr8 news…….. nupur di hmaray ghr aarahi hai……. Mai abhi ja k yeh news di ko daiti hu……. She ran towards her room and rest of the family were enjoying at her behave…….

M: dad…… yeh sab kch itna jaldi hai…..abhi tu hum nai loan bhi daina hai……..showed his concern

AB: beta sab hujayei ga…… dewali se pehlay loan khatam hujyaei ga….tum bas tiyari rakhoo…..

M: nodded….. as no one knew how mch he happy….. and now more thrilled to meet his love of life nupur………

hope u like it...😊

pardon errors...😉

Edited by drmaha - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#55
Lovely... Cant wait to read more... continue soon
Thank you so much for the pm...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#56
Beautiful update Maha
very sweet and cute
loved Mayur...plz continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
#57
i loved it...😃
nice update...👏👏
i sooo hate dat Ratna...arhhh😡
i jst wish ke sab thik hota...
bt asa toh hoon nhi sakta hain na...😕
Ratna jaisi dayan ke hote huye...😡
bt plzzz MayUr ke sath kuch galat na hone dena plzzz...😕
m super excited for d holi n MayUr re-union😉
waiting eagerly for d next part...😛
plz update soon...😊
love u...🤗🤗🤗
Edited by 18anila1 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#58
hmm loved mayur talks
so wht r u planing...
is this the conept u discused with me
waitng for next
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Posted: 13 years ago
#59
hiii
awesome update
loved it
sooo cute
loved mayur
cant wait 4 more
con soon
thanks 4 da pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
#60
Beautiful update dear
I really Loved mayur bonding
But i hated Nupur Mother
thanks For Pm
cont soon

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