MN FF 'Limpidness Of Heart '..PART 9..PG34...04/12 - Page 3

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Posted: 13 years ago
#21
hmm brilliant concept with a tinge of suspense...i m loving it though...something is mysterious 4 sure..but it better not b nything bad u knw...looking forward to the story...continue soon :)
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Posted: 13 years ago
#22
Congorats dear for the new ff seems intresting n verry beautiful n the PROLOGUE was amazing eagerly waiting ur updates plzz update soon thanks for the pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
#23
very nice dear .thanks for the pm.😛
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Posted: 13 years ago
#24
congos 4 ur new ff maha!🥳
interestin start!!!
cont soon!
thnx 4 d pm!🤗
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Posted: 13 years ago
#25

Thanks a lot guyz for the appciation...i didnt expect such a warm welcome and beautiful comments...🤗🤗

here is the nxt part hope u guyz will like it...
LIMPIDNESS OH HEART
PART 1
How unpredictable life is. It gives which u doesn't expect and takes away from u which u never thought. Sumtimes it acts dejected although life is being ruthless wid u but people make it more vulnerable for u. I don't understand y people interfere in ur life y? Are they jealous of u or they dont want to see u happy…..
Ah….thank god during all these tough times I wasn't alone and still not…….m soo blessed by god tht she made me special in tht phase of life…but wht life has done to me is just unbelievable and I heartly thanks to God for making my life so beautiful although people show sympathy to me but for me it is blessing for me……
Nupur is standing on a window and remembering her previous life since childhood..all the moments, were just moving like a film in front of her eyes…..
FLASHBACK: 5 YRS BACK
Nupur was busy in making assignment whn she heard some aggressive voices. She immediately came downstairs……

N: kiya hua maa? Y u r crying?

Dad: nupur I didn't expect this from u. don't u have manners……..angry

N: but dad wht am I done?

Ratna: yeh daikho kitni masoom banti hai…….. koi kehsakta hai k yeh aisa ker sakti hai……. She started crying more.

Dad: nupur tumnai apni maa se yeh kaise kaha k vo iss ghar mai nai rehsakti…..??

Nupur was dam shocked at her speech……..

N: no dad. I didn't say this…….. Don't u trust me……..

Ratna: daikha maina kehti thei yeh mjhey jhoota sabat karay gii……..aaray mai tu kehti hu yeh bilkul apni maa pai gayei hai ussi ki tarah shatar hai…….

N: mom pls…… shout on top of her voice……. Don't u dare to talk abt my mom like this again….. I won't tolerate this……..

Dad: nupur……!!! He slaps her……. Sharam nai ati apni mom se iss se tarah baat kertai hui…….. kiya hua agar ussnai tumhari maa ki tasveer nikal dei hai room se……. aur waisey bhi jab vo rahi nai tu us ski yaadoo ko bhi sambhalnai ka kiya faida………. Aaj tum uni nai jao gi……. Go to ur room…….

Nupur ran from there…….. his dad went for the office and her mom smile evilly…..ratna never left any chance to offend her. She hates her to the core.

Ratna: abhi tu yeh kch bhi nai hai nupur aagay daikh maine teri life jahanum na banadei tu mera naam bhi ratna nai……..

Nupur was constantly looking at the pic of her mother and tears were rolling down from her eyes as her tears were wordlessly complaining to her…..tht y she left her alone in this callous world.

N: maa ap q chali gayei mjhse chor k? mai buhat keli hugayei hu…….. I m missing u maa….. pls wapes aajao pls………

Phone rings

N: hello

G: hello di…… kaisei hu ap?

N: mai theik hu gunjii tum kaisey hu?

G: di aap phir roo rahi hu……? Kiya phir aunte nai kch kaha hai ……?

N: nai gunjii bas aisey hi aaj maa ki buhat yaad aarahi hai……controlling her sobs

G: di pls jhoot nai bolo……mai apko aachay se janti hu……. I am sure subah subah aunte nai phir koi drama kiya huga aur uncle nai ap ko data ahuga……..

N: gunji…… merai sath hi aisa q hua? Crying……

G: di yeh time hmesha ek sa nai rehta…… ap daikhna ek din ap inn sab se hmesha dur chali jao gi aur buhat khush raho gi…….. aacha dei mai college k liyei late hurahi hu…… bye….

N: bye…

I know its a short update but will update longer one nxt time...
hope u like it...
pardon errors...😉
Edited by drmaha - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#26
hehehe...😳😳😳
kya karu API...
pehle to bachpan mein Scool mein 1st hua karti thi bt clg jane ke baad se woh chance hi nhi milta...😒
toh socha 1st hone ka shokh yehi kyun na puri karlu...
waise main hi har ff mein sabse jyada 1st ayi hoon han!!!😆😉😆

now abt d update...
arhhh uss Ratna dayan ko to mein!!!!!!!!😡
uski itni himmat!!!!😡
aur Nupur ke bauji...hmph!!!😡
i hate both of dem...😡😡
hw dare he slapped my Nupur!!!!!!😡😲😡
mera Mayank kaha hain????????😔
m feeling bad for my Nupur!!!!!!😒
ok!!!next time longgg update yaad rakhna api...😉
waiting eagerly for d next update...😳
plzzz continue asap!!!😊
love U...🤗🤗🤗
Edited by 18anila1 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#27
hi dear...
u always took first place na... 😉😉
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Posted: 13 years ago
#28
It was short but nice 😳
Thank you so much for the pm and please try to update the next part soon... 😊
Take care!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
#29
@Maha
yaar very beautiful update but was short...
try to write long part and please continue soon
loved the update
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Posted: 13 years ago
#30
well written chapter..but the situation is unreasonable..everyone's behaviour towards nupur is simply pathetic.. 😔lets hope our mayank comes in rescue of nupur b4 anyone tries to harm her..

continue soon..

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