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Posted: 13 years ago
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Simmi went through her locker for the millionth time.Where was nil's gift?he had said that he would give her the most awesome gift & simmi was curious to know what it was.But where was it. She was searching the locker when someone whispered"curiosity kills the cat" she turned around to find nil standing at the door. simmi:where is my gift nil? nilesh:do you really think that i'll keep the gift in your locker? simmi:then where is it? nil:already delivered at your home. simmi :what is it? nil:that you yourself will have to find out. Just then sarah walked into the locker room and found them talking. sarah:nil i was searching for you,we need to talk. nil:ok sweety,i'll meet you in the parking lot. sarah:come fast,i'm waiting.
and then sarah went away.
simmi:so i gues you will have to hurry as ur girlfriend is waiting for you.
nil:i better leave but let me know whether you liked the gift or not...
simmi:sure
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In the parking lot sarah was waiting for nil.
Nil:what is it that is troubling you?
SArah:ur friend simmi.I don't like her and when she's around you she acts like she is your girlfriend.So nil i want you to choose between me and her.
Nil:are you out of your mind.Simmi never acts like she is my girlfriend.You don't like her thats ur problem.Sry i can't give the answer t ur question.
Sarah:i want you to make a choice nil.You can't have both of us.
Nil:you are so eager to know my decision ,then fine.i choose simmi,because i've known her since years and i can't just break our friendship just becoz u are jealous.
sarah:nil u r making the worst mistake of ur life.
Nil:sry u are wrong.You were my worst mistake.It"s over sarah,i've had enough of this.
HE just turned and left ,leaving sarah expressionless.
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When simmi reached home she found a neatly wrapped golden box,a basket which was covered with a scarf and a bag.
She opened the box first.it was the red roberto cavalli dress she'd asked nil to get for her.She had never thought that he would actually get it for her.
next she went for the basket.The basket had a small white puppy.How did he know that she wanted a pup?She picked the puppy and hugged it.
the bag contained a few chocolate and an old photograph.simmi was wearing a red polka dotted frock and nil stood behind her grinning.he was hopnding het ponytails right in the air.The photograph brought a huge smile on her face.
Behind the photograph nil had written something.
"i'm sorry that i didn't tell you this earlier,but i was the one who had eaten your piece of cake at rey's 8th b'day party.I'm sorry i couldn't help it,the cake was too delicious."
This surely were the best gifts she could get.
NIl was satanding at the door happy that she liked the gifts.
Nil:so sunshine did you like the gifts?
Simmi ran and hugged him.
Simmi:liked?are you mad?i loved them.But wait a minute,what are you doing here at this time,don't you have ur date wid sarah?
Nil:sarah is history now.WE broke up.
Simmi:why ?what happened?
Nil:she asked me to choose between her and my friends,and you know i can neverchoose anybody over my friends.so thats it we broke up.
Nil had lied,but he couldn't tell simmi that he choose her over sarah.
Nil:Guess i'm single again.
Simmi:you can find a lot more girls better than her,just think that she didn't deserve you.
Nil:Simmi i'm not at all sad so you don't need to give this speech.You know what sim you are the most optimistic person in our group.
Simmi:i know that.LIfe throws challenges at you and you can't sit and cry about them,so i guess we all need to be optimistic.
Nil:you are right.But we can't win tomorrows basketball match if we don't practice and then being optimistic won't help.I'm already late for the practice and rey is going to kill me.
Simmi:then you better hurry.BYE nil and thanx for the gifts.
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Posted: 13 years ago
#72
nice chapter ketaki...!!!!
finally...so happy sarah is out...!!!! and the gifts were sooo cute...!!!!
udpate soon...plz!!!!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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next update:

simmi hasn't told her freinds yet that she is moving to new york.She tells them just a day before she leaves.will nil stop her from going???to know more stay tuned for the next update.😉
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Okay ... first of all .. Khuda ne humari sun li 😆 That chudayl Sarah is gone đŸ„ł ...

And secondly .. that Birthday confession about eating her cake ... damn that was the CUTEST thing EVER 😳 These two are just tooo adorable đŸ€— Hayyye cant wait for the day when Nil actually pulls a Swayam and tells her how much she means to him .. â˜ș And Kameeni ... khushiya aayi nahi ke tu unn ke hare bhare sansar ko ujaaadne chali hai 😡 😆 Why does Simmi have to leave ?!?! WHY WHY WHY ?!?! *Ekta Kapoor style 3 times repition with dhaa dhaa dhaaa sound in the background * .. I hope Nil can run to the aiport and stop her in tym 😳.
Amazing update Ketaki đŸ€—. This is one of my favourite fanfics right now !!
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Posted: 13 years ago
#75
ahhh...ketaki...luved it man...
n thanks for the pm...
awww...nil is so sweet...he chose simmi over Ms kabab mein haddi...n thanks for making this kabab haddi free again...just hope she doesnt go into revenge mode lyk the typical ekat villians and do sumthing stupid...lyk a car accident or murder attempt ( totlly hopes that happen)
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Posted: 13 years ago
#76
You know I'm super evil,so i won't let nil stop simmi from going away.main nil ko bohot tadpane wali hu,uski luv story ko itni aaasani se mein happy ending nahi dene wali.(i know rafi ur gonna kill me after reading this.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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tadap tadap ke iss dil se aah nikalte hain...hum lutgaye...hain lootgaye...u'll make nil into dis condition wont u..;)...cant wait for it...

ps : forgive me cause my hindi is not good...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#78
YAAYY!! STRIKE 2!! Another Kabaab mein haddi gone!!😆 Aww Nil's gifts were so sweet & awesome!!❀ Loved the part!! Great work Ketaki!!😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: ketaki123

You know I'm super evil,so i won't let nil stop simmi from going away.main nil ko bohot tadpane wali hu,uski luv story ko itni aaasani se mein happy ending nahi dene wali.(i know rafi ur gonna kill me after reading this.


Not fair Ketaki!! U're sooo evil!!😡
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Just completed readiing all the parts..
Just want to say your an Awsomee writer!..
Reaaly!.. the way you write, present and the storyline's are just Amazzing.. 👏
and the fact that you wrote it on a different couple and that too one of my most fav's is Fabulous!!
Pleasee upload the next part soon, Can't waait!.. 😃

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