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Posted: 13 years ago
It was damn hilarious Fizu di...😆
I enjoyed a lot..OMG Mayur fight is just
too cute..loved it so much😳
do cont soon.
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Posted: 13 years ago
niccc update
next time i want a big update
thanks 4 the pm
may god bless u
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Posted: 13 years ago
very very nice. I love mayur fight. in dono mein payar kab hoga?
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Posted: 13 years ago
i ws almost half asleep when i suddenly read my name n my eyes open wid a jerk...lol
thnx alot doc...dats really very sweet of u fiza jee
as usual gr8 update
these totally funter mayur...gosh m soo in love wid dem
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Posted: 13 years ago
Fiza n Valliah i did unres on bage 😉
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Posted: 13 years ago
exceptionally well written naz ( well i really hope i can call u that 😳) u indeed hv a very beautiful name just like ur exceptional capability of penning down emotions...!! hats off to u naz bcos not 4 a sec it seems like this is ur 1st ever attempt...!! tremendous job!!🤗

@fiza- thanks a lot 4 updating it dr...🤗 but i m still hell angry with u coz of GMYH...
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Posted: 13 years ago

Thanks soo much for all good wishes and prayers😊...and sorry for being this late but again i am not the one to be blamed😳...but to compensate here is another update by me again...hope u guys like it the way u liked the previous one...thanks for bearing with the late updates will try to be regular from now on😊...!

@ suja...dear Naz restaurant to nijei chole tomar kache ashe, address neye aar ki kaaj tomar bolo😳...!

@anila...thanks soo much for your continuous good wishes prayers and Dhamkis😊...hope this update satisfy you...enjoy...!

@Palz...thankyou for your lovely comment😊...im overwhelmed...glad you like my name😳...and sure you can call me Naz 😊...!

Enjoy update 😳...!


It was noon Mayank and Nupur were heading to meet the next girl in Mayank's car.

M---waise tumne abhi tak mujhe details nahi diye ke hum kisse milne ja rahe hai.

N--uff itne utawle kyun horahe ho'ja to rahe hai na khud hi pooch lena.

M'arre yaar ajeeb musibat hai ab kuch to pata hona chahiye na'akhir shaadi karni hai..aur yaha mujhe naam tak nahi pata...ab yeh kya baat huyi.

N'oye teeli tum first meeting ke liye ja rahe ho'waha koi mandap nahi saja ke jate hi shaadi karni hai'aur intro bhi I think first meet mein hi hoti hai'to thora sabar rakho'tum to lagta hai ghori pe sawaar ready hi ho'.and giggles.

M'hogaya'..accha atleast naam hi bata do.

N'oho mr dulhe raja ko kitni besabri hai apne hone wali ke naam janne ki'.accha chalo tum bhi kya yaad karoge ke kis dildar dost se pala parha'.naam bata hi deti hun..uska naam Tamanna Rajvansh hai'.Rajvansh industries uske father ki hai..woh apne father ki business sambhalti hai..

M'not bad bhoothnath'and smiles a broad smile.

N'ha tum bhi kya yaad karoge ke kya rishta dhunda hai..lekin tum manner less insaan ek thanks nahi bola jaata.

M'o hello'not bad rishtey ke liye nahi kaha..

N'phir..

M'arre akhir tumhare mun se dost woh bhi dildar dost'yeh news nahi hai kya'.isiliye kaha'.waise Tamanna yeh bhi not bad han'lets see yeh mere dil ki Tamanna hai kya'.aur kya kaha tumne tumhe thanks'madam aap koi free mein nahi karrahi yeh sab okay'pura fees liya woh bhi bina koi discount diye phir thanks kis liye..

N'makes a straight face'accha thik hai ab bak bak kam karo aur jaldi chalo woh tumhare dil ki Tamanna punctuality ki misaal hai'aur jis speed se tum chal rahe ho pata chala jab tak hum pahuchenge usne kisi aur se shaadi karli aur tumhare dil ki Tamanna aansoo mein beh gaye..

M'mun accha na sahi kam se kam baat to acchi kiya karo'bhootni kahi ki'.ab kya gari urha ke leke chaloon..

N'han aur tumhare mun se to jaise phool jharte hai nai'apni shakal dekhi hai kabhi'bacche darr jaye aisa hai.

M'lekin bhoothnath to tum ho..

N---opens her mouth to say something but mayank cuts her off saying'

M'mun bandh karo ander lunch karte waqt kholna'and points her towards the hotel that they reached'.their meeting place'.ab chale bhoothnathhh and giggling comes out of car.

N'tumhe main dekh lungi teeli'jale huye kaale teeli'

M'anytime lekin abhi pait ki jalan meeta le'chale'mujhe sach mein bhookh lagi hai yaar..

N'bhukkar kahin ke'yaha khana khane nahi larki dekhne aaye hai.

M'accha matlab larki dekhne par khana mana hai kya..yeh tradition kabse shuru hua'

N'tum thori der apna mun bandh nahi rakh sakte..

And they proceed towards the table booked for them while fighting and pulling each others leg'.

They approached their table were a girl in her mid twenties wearing formals seemed waiting for them''nupur gestured mayank through her eyes'''..mayank observed her from head to toe and whispered'..

M'nupur pakka na yehi hai.

N'irritated'.mayankkk

M'arre nahi yaar isse dekh kar lagta nahi shaadi ke liye aaye hai'lagta hai kisi business deal ke liye..and smiles a naughty smile..

N'mayank woh abhi shaadi nahi karne aayi hai..bas milne aayi hai'.aur seedhe office se aayi hai isiliye'..waise tumhe larki pasand karni hai..uske kapre nahi'and glares'ab chalo'.

M and N----hello'

Girl'.gives a stern look and says...hi hello ka time khatam'.aap log pure 5 mins 30 secs late hai'so can we come up to the exact point as i don't want to beat around the bush..

M'face hungs open and gives a look to nupur as kya cheez hai yeh..

N---sure why not'.and she introduces both..

N---mayank yeh hai Tamanna aur Tamanna yeh hai Mayank..

T---its Tam only Tam'

N---right'.and whispers mayank'ab tumhare dil ke tamanna ka kya hoga'yeh to dil ki Tam nikli and suppresses her smile'.

M'gives a look tumhe mein baad mein dekhta hoon..and smiles to Tam..

T---so kya ab hum interview shuru kare'

M and N'interview'.

Tam---han jo bhi formalities hai jaldi pura karo mujhe doosre meeting attend karni hai.

M---formalities?

T'yeh kya laga rakkha hai'mera echo sound karna bandh karo aur shoot.

M---to nupur yaar yeh larki hai ya AK-47.

N'glares and continues to Tam'.waise tum kyun nahi shuru karti'yeh thora sharmila hai u see'

M'gives her a look as its gonna be her last day on earth'

T---I don't mind infact I love to be in first place'always'.and starts shooting mayank like AK-47 ( mayank's pov).

T'kya karte ho'kitna kama lete ho'ghar mein kaun kaun hai'yeh sab mujhe janne mein interest nahi'.kyun ke tum jo bhi karo mujhe koi farq nahi parta'shaadi ke baad ghar ka charge lena hai'. Kitna kama lete ho yeh bhi zaroori nahi kyun ke jitna main kamati hun aur hai woh 7 pusht baith kar khaye to khatam nahi hoga isiliye farq nahi parhta'.ghar mein kaun hai yeh bhi zaroori nahi kyun ke shaadi ke baad mere ghar mein rehna hai'.ghar damaad ban kar'.jo zaroori hai who yeh ke'shaadi ke baad badal na tumhe hai mujhe nahi'.ghar badal na'life style badal na kyun ke I don't like ur dressing sense'.and makes a face'..tumhare ghar mein jo bhi hai tum unhe mere ghar mein la sakte ho'.han mujhe apne life mein koi interference nahi chahiye bas'.waise ghar ka kaam dekh lete ho na'.agar nahi to abhi se shuru kar do time hai seekh jaoge'.aur yeh sab isiliye keh rahi hoon kyun ke I approve u'shaadi material types ho chal jaoge'.waise bhi kisi na kisi gadhe ko approve karna hai kyun ke dad peeche hi parh gaye hai'so why not u'..not bad'..atleast tumhe bardasht karna thora kam muskil hoga I think'.okay aaj se infact abhi se kaam shuru karo khud par'.aage main inform karwa dungi'wait for further instructions'.ab mujhe jaana hai'.tum log late aaye lekin mujhe meetings mein late hona hargiz pasand nahi'.see u byeee'.

And with this she flies away like a jet'.leaving Mayank and Nupur in daze'

Edited by valliyah - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
edited.

Valli, m sorry, amin thik se comment nahi kar sakti ... mujhe na bht hasi aa rahi hai 🤣

mujhe pata nahi main kaha se suru karu 😕 ... hey dont dare to say k suru se suru karo 😡 ... mujhe pata hai ye 😉 🤣

through it was a promo type update, but it was so strong ...

very funny update ... loved it.

start from mayur cute nokh-jhok

awww...mayank was waiting for uske dil ki tamanna 😍... par ye to dil ki tam nikli 🤣

ye tam to ak47 k sath sath stop-watch bhi hai 🤣

interview fomalities n shoot 🤣 ... kya combination hai by god 🤣

she was really AK47 ... par ye chalti hia machine-gun ki tarah 🤣

kya ladki hai ... mayank k muh per hi gadha bol diya 🤣 ... n wait for further instruction 😲 🤣 ye mayank iska husband honewala hai ya secretary 🤣 ... sorry, shayad house-keeper bane wala hai 🤣

by god ... pata nahi aise unique item ko nupur kaha se pakar lati hai 🤣

bechara mayank ka shadi ka sapna shayad sapna hi reh jaye 🤣 ... sayad wo butter jaise hath usse breakfast me khane ko na mile 🤣

awesome update dear.😃

continue soon ...😃


Edited by SujaLuvsMayur - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
RES
WAH WRITER SE PEHLY READER RES,..WAH SUJA
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Posted: 13 years ago
edittt


pehle mujhe hasne do
yaar what is teeli ??
hehehehehe ye nups bhi na kaha kaha se naam dhubdk lati hai- BY GOD

OMG ye TAM insaan hai ya tape recorder...and uski demand..lol lol ye NUps na abhi maynk se daat khayegi.lol lol
poor maynk tam ki wasaise uski bolti bandh hogaya...

btw i hope maynk kisi aur se shaadi karne ki chahat chod de n nups ki bare main soche
we all know they r best

fabulous update valey but it was too sort
next time we all want a longgg part frm u
plsssjara dhyan rakhna
take care



Edited by -Faria- - 13 years ago

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