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Posted: 13 years ago
so cute and lovely update.
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Posted: 13 years ago
OMG!!!...mayank and super...
do tell me where do u guys get such ideas...haha...fiza and valliyah...awesome girls...
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Posted: 13 years ago
wow that was so hilarious
loved it
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesum...its hilarious😆😆😆😆😆😆
loved it
may god bless u
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Posted: 13 years ago
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rajnikanth, prabhudeva, raone!🤣
oh gosh.. such an hillarious update!
luvd it totally!
cont soon!
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Posted: 13 years ago
must admit this mayur is adorable...! loved every bit of the chapter...fiza and valio u both r undoubtedly wonderful writers...😊 loved it to bits...!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
haha rajni kant...Kya example leke aaye...
seriuosly shakal hai par aakal nahi...i ws rofling throughout the whole part...
amazing..
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Posted: 13 years ago
it was killer update u r awesome writer plz adme in ur list loved ur all ff which are on going except gmyh its really painful right now
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Posted: 13 years ago
edit my comments on pg 28d
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Posted: 13 years ago

Hello guys..

As per promise we are again late…n thts so terribly…mein ny kuch nhi kiya..valio ko pakro…she is recovering….aur yeah PROMO jasa UPADTE us ny hi diya hai….lol…im dead now…

Ok abt the laast update …thnku soo much for liking..

I am extremely sorry if choosing a south Indian background hurted sum1, it was nevr a reason, neither I want to make fun of nay one, but surly wil take care of this in futrue….

Enjoy this part..

Its by VLAIYAH NAZ…

AND HAPPY BIRTHDAY UMI….MAY U HAVE LOADS N LOADS OF MORE…WITH ALL HAPPINESS AND BLESSINGS OF ALMIGHTY…

Both mothers in chorus, inka kuch nahi hosakta…..sighs…….!

NM----chalo dinner serve karte hai tab tak yeh khud hi patch up kar lenge.

MM---han chalo inke bech mein padhna bekar hai, lekin aise chor diya to nahi maloom kab tak muh suja ke baithe rahenge to phir hogaya dinner.

NM---abhi rehne do dinner table par dekhte hai, and moved towards kitchen to serve dinner.

By the time nupur arrives after changing in her casuals, so her mom ask her to call mayank as he was in terrace, she makes a face as if she has been given the most weird task which earn her a glare from her mother.

N----uff jarahi hun baba ab aise mat dekho mujhe tum meri kam aur mayank ki mom jyada lagti ho, accha ek baat batayenge aap log kahin aap logo ne bachpan mein adla badli to nahi ki thi na, aunty jis tarah se meri side leti hai aur mama aap mayank ki, mujhe hai na kabhi kabhi doubt hota hai.

NM----bas yehi sunna baaki reh gaya tha, clients ko doubt karna kam tha ke apne maa par bhi doubt karrahi hai, yeh ladki bhi na, pata nahi iska kya hoga.

MM----giggles and proceeding near announce, fiker mat karo humari beti lakhon mein ek hai iske liye sab special hoga, and takes her in her embrace.

NM----ise tumne hi bigaar kar rakha hai.

MM---han jaise tumne uss sadu ko.

Nupur starts giggling and MM joins her leaving NM more annoyed.

NM—accha ab baatein hi karti rahogi ya usey bulane bhi jaogi, jaldi karo khana thanda horaha hai.

N---jati hun baba, and leaves giggling all the way, she reaches terrace and find him standing at a corner staring blankly at sky, she shakes her head moving in close standing beside him says, itne gaur ke kya dekh rahe ho, tare gin rahe ho, and suppresses her smile.

M---han.

N---kya, tum sach mein…..

M----kaha na han.

N---u have totally lost it, and its official now.

M---tumhe nahi lagta tumse baat karun isse accha hai main tare hi gin loon, I guess yeh jyada asaan hai, kya kehti ho, and finishes with a smirk.

N---tum na tumse to baat karna hi bekaar hai.

M---aur yeh aaj tak tumne kitni baar kaha hoga.

N---mera dimaag kharab tha jo main maa ke kehne par tumhe yaha bulane aayi,

M—nupur tum kabhi kabhi patey ki baat bhi kar leti ho.

N—kya matlab…suno yeh code mein baat mat kiya karo samjhe..jo bolna hai seedhe bolo.

M—tumhe seedha kuch samajh aaye to bolu na.

N—ab bataoge warna main ja rahi hun.

M—arre baba mera matlab that um kabhi kabhi bilkul sahi baat karti ho..but mind it kabhi kabhi hi…

N—accha…to kaunsi baat sahi lagi janab ko..with a fake smile..

M---yehi jo abhi tumne kaha tha.

N—aur abhi maine kya kaha tha.

M—nupur tum ghazini dekh kar aarahi ho kya.

N—mayankkk

M---okay baba…suno abhi tumne jo kaha na ke "tumhara dimag kharab hai" yeh bilkul sahi kaha and laughs out loud..

N—mayankk ke bacche…main tumhara murder kar dungi..and start hitting him…mayank runs for his life…and comes downstairs where both of their mothers were busy setting table for dinner.

M—mom bachao dekho yeh bhootni peeche parhi hai.

N---ruk tu teeli…aaj nahi bachoge..

Both of them starts running around the table while cursing each other and mayank giggling in between.

NM and SA can't help but stare with wide eyes and starts laughing seeing their kiddish behaviour…

Accha ab bohat hogaya ab ruko tum dono….itne bade hogaye ho ab tak bachpana nahi gaya…

N—maa isse kaho isne hi shuru kiya tha…maine nahi..

M—han han aur jaise tum dudh ki dhuli ho…kyun?

Both mothers…..basss bohat hogaya…baki ki larayi baad mein kar lena…abhi khana thanda horaha hai baitho pehle khana khao..and they quietly settles on eyeing each other with a look we see u later….!

Mayank was all set to appreciate NM cooking skill while enjoying his meal, SA too seconded him, when out of blue Mayank asked NM…..

Mayank---waise aunty iss bhoothnath ne kuch seekha bhi hai ke abhi tak kitchen mein bartan se larti hai..

Nupur….face hung open on his comment…while she glared him as if she is gonna have Mayu curry in dinner.

Mayank—aise kya dekh rahi ho….dinner mein mujhe khana hai kya.

Nupur….tumhe pata hai kabhi kabhi tum bhi 'sahi' baat kar lete ho.

Mayank—ha ha nakalchi bander….oppsss sorry actually bandariya.

Nupur---tumhe to main..

But both mothers cuts them off …..ufff chup karo tum log aur araam se khana khao..baccho se bhi zyada larte ho…..both made faces and quietly started eating when SA spoke….accha Nupur aaj ke meeting to fail huyi ab aage kya…

Nupur---ji aunty lekin yeh meeting thi bari mazedaar…mayank ka chehra dekhne layek tha…and laughs out loud…han aur kal ek aur larki se milna hai…business sambhalti hai apne dad ka….kal lunch time ka appointment hai….

Edited by drfizaahmed - 13 years ago

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