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Posted: 13 years ago
#61

Originally posted by: sezo

yeh bit confused was it really a dream and when did he go to the office, i thought he was at home, with dog. so confused.

after that he went to office and then sat at his desk and dreamed of his fathers reaction
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Scene371 Arjun request Karan to call him bhaiya

Arjun starts sobbing uncontrollably. All life people and society has beat him , misbehaved, humiliated, treated him like outcast, tortured him worst than animals because he was RPS son and went to jail 5 times. And here his Karan his own brother was saying he did not care for his criminal background although he did not know Arjun is his own brother.

Karan hugs him: You started crying again. How do I switch off your eye tap haan? Stop crying now like a baby. My Gunjan also does not cry like this. Smile now OK. Chutki used to tell you never cry even in extreme pain. For past one week you are only crying in my presence.

Karan rubs his back to console Arjun and allows him to calm down.

Karan wipes his tears: I convinced mom not to proceed with any marriage proposals for me for a few more years. That I am not interested in marriage now. Smile now. Life is too small. God has given this life for us to be happy. I like your dimples when you smile and pulls Arjun's cheeks

Arjun smiles.

Arjun is very happy. If Karan accepts him that means atleast one member of family will always be with him never leave him. How does he explain to Karan his gratitude for accepting him his criminal past? Arjun is on cloud nine his brother accepted him with his past.
Arjun holds Karan's hand out of gratitude: Thank you thank you so much and kisses his palms

Karan: No thank you and sorry with friends buddy(Arjun hears bhaiya)

Arjun smiles: can you call me once more please

Karan: What?
Arjun: What you called me last?

Karan: Last sentence friends buddy?

Arjun: No bha (bhaiya he wants to say but comes back to reality)

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Posted: 13 years ago
#63
wow!! karan deserves a good salute..
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Scene372 Arjun's version of bhaiya

Karan: Bha?

Arjun sadly: nothing

Karan laughs: Buddy buddy buddy buddy buddy is that enough

Arjun smiles hearing: Bhaiya bhaiya bhaiya bhaiya bhaiya

Arjun thinks: Yes Karan I am your bhaiya I am only your bhaiya and you are my baby brother

From that day Arjun assumes buddy word means bhaiya from Karan's mouth

Arjun takes his hand and kisses it again: Thanks

Karan: For what buddy?
Arjun shakes his head and smiles: Nothing (thinking-for being the greatest brother and son in this world to your elder brother)
Karan: Come come now I am very hungry. I did not eat from yesterday afternoon. My stomach is growling.

Arjun shocked: You also did not eat dinner and breakfast

Karan: No, I did not

Arjun: Why?

Karan: I did not feel like

Arjun looks at him lovingly thinking: My brother did not have dinner and breakfast because he left me alone in garden yesterday night. He cares for me so much. Yeah we have a soul connection may be. I go hungry he goes hungry. After all he is my baby brother no not even brother he is my son.

Karan pulls his hand and takes him to the canteen and orders so many dishes like a royal feast.

Arjun: So many plates

Karan: I never realized. It's a bit more, but its OK. We both are there no.

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Scene373 Sushmaji blasts Ahluwaliah's for lying

Meanwhile at Ahluwaliah's

Gauri: Bhabhi, Sushmaji called and told she is coming to our house.

Amrit: Oh God how did she sound?

Gauri: She just said my mom to take her to our houseee

Amrit: Must be happy newsss Goddd

Amrit prepares all nice sweet dishes for Sushmajiii

Sushmaji comes after 30 minutes

Gauri: Namaste Sushma aunty?

Sushmaji angry just stares at her

Amrit: Welcome welcome

Sushmajiii goes in but does not sittt

Amrit: Sit Sushmajii, please have something sweets here

Sushma: I do not want to have water also from this house

Amrit: Why?

Sushmaji: Why? Why? Because of you Mahraniji got wild at me.

Gauri: Means

Amrit: Means you hid the fact from me that Arohi is already married

Gauri: That that

Amrit: Buttt

Sushma: If you had told do you think I am fool to send your daughter's proposal to Yuvrajjji.

Amrit: Buttt

Sushma: Because of you people Maharaiji cut all relation with our family which was going on from centuries. I will never forgive you people

Gauri: Aunty thattt

Sushma: Living in such big house but doing such cheap things, shame on you people. Thank God Mahraniji did not know you else you never know what she would have done to you folks. Yuvrajjj only son why will she not be angry? She cannot be blamed its my fault I trusted you folks.

Sushmaji walks out of house in huff

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Posted: 13 years ago
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hey prem good updats.
i have one confusion.karan cold yahodara,yashu mom?why
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Posted: 13 years ago
#67

Originally posted by: florine_20

hey prem good updats.
i have one confusion.karan cold yahodara,yashu mom?why

very good observation
i thought no one may observe
you will get to know why after sme more time
when does a person call a mother by name to identify? 😈
Edited by myviewprem - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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good one prem - pls continue
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: myviewprem

very good observation
i thought no one may observe
you will get to know why after sme more time
when does a person call a mother by name to identify? 😈



when he has another person to be referred as mom.. he knows about Arjun's mom? 😲
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Scene374 Arjun enquires if his parents were told his past

Arjun hesitant: Did you tell your dad and mom about my past?

Karan: No. They may not accept easily that you came from criminal background and hid that fact for so long from them. So, I will not tell them right now. I have to look for correct opportunity and time so that they do not take it badly.

Arjun looks shocked at Karan. He thought Karan will go and tell his parents but here Karan is protecting his image in eyes of his family. He truly has the greatest brother in this world.

Arjun: Thanks Karan. Thanks a lot.

Karan: eat buddyyy. Forget everything. Here take 2 puri's I will have 1 puri

Arjun: No you have 2 I will have 1

Karan: You do not want your friend to be healthy or what?

Arjun: Means

Karan: Making me eat double oily food very clever. You are married, but I have to impress girls in future na take these 2 puri's. And that day you only scolded me not to have burger/pizza and all no and now you are making me eat oily stuff very bad very bad(gives sad look)

Arjun laughs: You are really a sweet heart Karan

Karan smiles: How is your hand now? You did not change bandage yettt. And hits on his hand. You are very careless about your health. What is Arohi bhabhi doing in her parents house? She must be here taking care of you.

Arjun tries to deflect question: You are there no to take care of me.

Karan: Oh forgot.. what about the trip?
Arjun: You tell me where to go?

Karan: some nature place please away from crowd. You tell, I have come first time to India. If its US, Canada, UK and South Africa I can become your guide not in India

Arjun: OK, let me think and tell

Arjun: By the way, you went to all these countries?

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