Plan Mein Twist (ArSh FF) Part 5 on Page 15

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Ritu

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Posted: 13 years ago

#21

Hey!
Nice story n concept!
Please do continue soon :-)

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Suhasini

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Posted: 13 years ago

#22

Love to read more...intro was good...pls send me pm me when u update...

haaa pls dnt forget to send pm ...

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desikalakaar

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Posted: 13 years ago

#23

Hey darling!

Wow! Loved the prologue!!!

Continue soon and PM me for sure!

Love,

Kriya <33

P.S. You don't have Shilpa in the Character Sketch yet. She's coming later I suppose?

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Sammy

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Posted: 13 years ago

#24

great starts dear

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madhuri

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Posted: 13 years ago

#25

superb intro...

and loved the CS so much...

wow anaother ARSH story...

waitng eagerly for shilpa's entry...

continue soon plzz and do add me...😃

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sheethal

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Posted: 13 years ago

#26

intetersing
add me in ur buddy list
continue soon
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AwesomeHoonMain

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Posted: 13 years ago

#27

Thanks for so much response. I appreciated the people who read it, commented on and liked it. Thank you so much!!!!!!

Armaan walked towards Dr. Keerti's cabin to talk about the new interns and the new senior doctor coming tomorrow. When he entered the cabin, he saw Dr.Gupta, Dr. Modi and Dr. Siddhant. "Okay now Dr.Mallik is here, we can finally start the meeting." Dr.Gupta started, "as you all know we have new interns coming tomorrow, I would like to hand the intern responsibility to Dr.Armaan." Everyone, except Dr.Keerti, looked at Dr.Gupta shocked. Armaan opened his mouth to say thanks but Riddhima cut him off. "Pa...I mean Dr.Gupta, I think that Armaan is too busy to handle the interns. I think that me and Si'" Armaan glared at her and in a curt voice, he intervened, "Dr.Modi, Thank you for your concern but you don't know my schedule so please don't interfere in MY business." Riddhima blushed and ducked her head but didn't say anything. Armaan continued "Thank you Dr.Modi. I would like to thank you Dr.Gupta for this wonderful opportunity." Dr.Gupta smiled at him and said "as I was saying Dr.Armaan, you will monitor the interns with the help of'.."

*Beep Beep*

Dr.Gupta checked his pager and left the room. Dr.Keerti looked at the doctors and said in a strict voice "All of you may disperse." With that everyone left the room angrily. Riddhima stalked off because she didn't get the responsibility of the interns. Sid left because he was angry at Riddhima for being selfish and doubting Armaan's abilities. And finally Armaan walked off because he has to share his work with a person and he doesn't even know the name. Soon they all became busy in work and went home wondering about tomorrow.

*Next day*

Armaan woke up with the sound of the screechy alarm. "A bad start to a bad day" Armaan thought pessimistically. Lazily, he got ready for his morning jog praying he doesn't meet Riddhima. He jogged to the basketball court thinking about the interns and how he was going to torture them by being strict. When he reached there, he saw little kids dancing to bollywood music. He was angry. Very angry. This was HIS special basketball court to play and feel sorry for myself NOT a place to dance. He walked in to break the dancing party/class. He walked past the little kids to talk to the tall but also short lady. He tapped her back and...

Character Sketch

Dr.Siddhant Modi

He is Abhi's little brother and Riddhima's husband. He loves her but hates that she is an attention freak. He respects Armaan like his idol. He also knows nothing about Armaan and Riddhima's past and wonders why Armaan hates her. Sid knows how to have fun but doesn't have a partner to have fun with. He believes that Riddhima is his life.

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<3 Shona

Edited by riddhimarmaan - 13 years ago