Y is life so UNFAIR??!! Thrd 2 (link thrd 3 pg 1) - Page 17

Originally posted by: spvd

part 20
wow nice part...
i never thought ki Vicky aisa feel karega...
Vicky dear Geet is not for u and i dont wanna see u hurt...
i can never see Vicky hurt...
Geet now shes done for...
Maan usse chodega nahi...
cont soon dear...

Lol Vicky didn't do anything wrong.. He doesn't hv any control over his feelings but he knows that they can never b together

Originally posted by: muraad

awesome dear its lovely

thanks so much

Originally posted by: ninand

<font color="#333333">I cannot even think of comparing Geet and Vicky with Maan in the same breath...</font>

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<font color="#333333">I hate Maan with passion.. Hes hardly human, a devil, - a mean vicious heartless monster who can fall to any level.. there can be no justification on excuse that can be used for him... Geet and Vicky have made human mistakes and can be easily forgiven.. not maan.</font>

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<font color="#333333">Damn in the whole SR sequence, I was holding my breath so hard... I cant believe how relieved I was once she hit him ... Seriously jazz, he deserves nothing.</font>

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<font color="#333333">Please as soon as we come to the present, dont let him hurt her or blackmail her like that.. I know he will, but please can we have Geet fight him out.. he needs to be punched in his face and brought down to his knees crying and begging for mercy that animal!</font>

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<font color="#333333">COntinue soon!</font>

hey thankyou so much

you really do hate maan with passion 😆 now I'm feeling so guilty for making you hate him so much. I'm really sorry but that was the need of the story...

Originally posted by: LuvScooby

<font color="#FF00FF">This has turned into fatal attraction in the worst way...Maan is pure evil with no remorse, consciousness at all...

I'm so proud of what Geet did, she took Maan to hospital despite the fact that he was pretty much going to rape her...I loved her determination to fight back.

Now, I'm curious to find out how in Present did Maan find her? What gave it away, I can't wait to read more about it

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Thankyou so much
I know sometimes geet has been a bitch with people but her act of taking maan to hospital shows that she's not evil..

Her plan to escape was foolproof!!! But how he find her, you'll know in the next update

Originally posted by: piya-

Amazing update dear really enjoyed reading it

u were right both the characters maan n geet r strong and i really felt that u did complete justice with their characters

hmm... how far is maan wrong pata nahi but is he really that bad as u r portraying him to be donno why but still i feel that there has to b a different aspect as well

okay so geet is in london i m sure maan will find her very soon but i m waiting for that day when both of them will actually fall for each other

continue soon

love-Piya

Thankyou so much
I was scared of not doing enough justice to their characters.. Thanks so much for telling me...
Don't worry they will fall in love eventually but it's gonna take some time...

hi i am a new reader...
i read all the parts...
its a nice concept yaar...
its really a good work...
waiting for next part

Originally posted by: simm28

🤗hi <font color="#999900">jazz first so much🤗& welcome back</font>

<font color="#999900">so happy when i see this update😊so surprised</font>

<font color="#999900">with this . this is the best & long update ever.👏</font>

<font color="#999900">this is the best escape plan ever. really geet</font>

<font color="#999900">done a great work.so happy.just want to</font>

<font color="#999900">maan done so wrong he deserve this .now so excited</font>

<font color="#999900">4 ur next update. jaaz u r the best that why love u so much😆</font>

<font color="#999900">always waiting 4 ur update.😉so now please update others</font>

<font color="#999900">too.lol & so much hugs 4 u🤗</font>

Thankyou so much
if it wasn't for you guys, I wouldn't have been able to update it 😊
i'm sorry for delaying other ffs. Sorry my brain works in just one direction and right now I got so engrossed in this story that couldn't think of anything else.. But I'll try to update them very soon

Originally posted by: zahra15

this was awesome...i just loved it...the convo between maan and geet at the beginning was amazing...n then geet finally made a escape...i also liked the part of vicky and geet...but i felt that vicky was wrong in not telling geet about him being married...at least geeet might have not fallen for him...n geet...i just hope that maan doesnt find her so soon else he gonna make her life a living hell...continue soon n thnxxx for the pm...

thankyou very much
I personally liked maan n geet scene too. N even I felt Vicky was wrong smwhere in not telling geet abt his marriage but geet falling for him was inevitable as geet fell for him in the initial days only when for Vicky, she was just a friend at that time.

Even I don't want maan to find her so soon... But think like this: the more time it takes for him to find her, the more harsh he's gonna be on geet

Originally posted by: Shalve

interesting...loved it

thanks a lot

Originally posted by: soni4eva

<font size="3" face="'Comic Sans MS', Times, serif">fanx 4 da amazin update</font>

<font size="3" face="'Comic Sans MS', Times, serif">wow jus luvd it awsome fabulous mindblowin</font>

<font size="3" face="'Comic Sans MS', Times, serif">maan iz sooo evil</font>

<font size="3" face="'Comic Sans MS', Times, serif">poor geet buh finally she escaped</font>

<font size="3" face="'Comic Sans MS', Times, serif">maan wont leave geet nw</font>

<font size="3" face="'Comic Sans MS', Times, serif">eagerly w8in 4 da nxt update plzz cont soon x</font>

U r welcome honey!!!
And thanks so much... It feels awesome when u guys like it 😊
yes geet was able to escape him