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Posted: 13 years ago
part 66
last part...
Simi u really shocked me stating its the last part...
but liked it as always...
so Maan hasnt got his memory back but is building new ones and enjoying...
OMG Geet is pregnant once again...
All the Best dear Maan...
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Posted: 13 years ago
That was mind blowing simi. Totally loved it. I can't hit like button coz of some problem but surely do that soon.

Awesome -- loved dadima, cookie, dev, NT, yash, arjun, pinky, adi, meera, vicky, teji, nadani, gurwinder, rajji, pari, MJ, armaan, asha, sargam, ranbir, priya, ramesh, and all. Ofcourse, our MANEET too. Oops, i mean our DELHISHARK & NYQUEEN.
That was totally unexpected -- both meeting through online gaming, vicky putting nonsense in Geet's brain, their stupid fights, no actually everyone fighting like stupid, cookie being friend with Maan but barking at vicky, their constant food choaking & drink spitting, Maan trick to annoy her after the truth, Geet payback for this, Geet's crazy ideas, her silly lyrics along with stupid songs, Maan smiling every now & than, adi becoming dadima's jasoos, their revenge mode, vicky ki jawani, manisha's entry, shaha being shut by Geet, your special touch with those funny thoughts, arjun's character, Geet being the "help buddy", dadima being the "hatke" old lady, the Maan Singh Khurana fearing of his dadima (before marriage) and Geet along with her 4 chamche (after marriage), vicky's urgent marriage, Geet being concern about cookie more than anyone, her constant screaming for everything, adi's escape in sand, we having beach in DELHI, Geet running towards Maan coz of a mouse, their silly acts, Maan's gabar & hitler role, bachleors party, MANEET's marriage, Geet's past, their FOUR kids, life after marriage & kids, Maan fainting at every delivery, who actually starts the fight, who acts more like kid, dadima still have "jawani" effect, Maan dealing with EVERYTHING after Geet's little accident, sargam - the carbon copy of Geet, Maan's hubby & father role, the crazy big family, the non-stop yelling, the twist, vicky having nightmare of SEVEN kids, the little gang, the last unexpected news, the capacity, poor Maan. I mean from A to Z. That was totally fab.

Bowdown to you.
Fantastic work.
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: $ara_$hachi

That was mind blowing simi. Totally loved it. I can't hit like button coz of some problem but surely do that soon.

Awesome -- loved dadima, cookie, dev, NT, yash, arjun, pinky, adi, meera, vicky, teji, nadani, gurwinder, rajji, pari, MJ, armaan, asha, sargam, ranbir, priya, ramesh, and all. Ofcourse, our MANEET too. Oops, i mean our DELHISHARK & NYQUEEN.
That was totally unexpected -- both meeting through online gaming, vicky putting nonsense in Geet's brain, their stupid fights, no actually everyone fighting like stupid, cookie being friend with Maan but barking at vicky, their constant food choaking & drink spitting, Maan trick to annoy her after the truth, Geet payback for this, Geet's crazy ideas, her silly lyrics along with stupid songs, Maan smiling every now & than, adi becoming dadima's jasoos, their revenge mode, vicky ki jawani, manisha's entry, shaha being shut by Geet, your special touch with those funny thoughts, arjun's character, Geet being the "help buddy", dadima being the "hatke" old lady, the Maan Singh Khurana fearing of his dadima (before marriage) and Geet along with her 4 chamche (after marriage), vicky's urgent marriage, Geet being concern about cookie more than anyone, her constant screaming for everything, adi's escape in sand, we having beach in DELHI, Geet running towards Maan coz of a mouse, their silly acts, Maan's gabar & hitler role, bachleors party, MANEET's marriage, Geet's past, their FOUR kids, life after marriage & kids, Maan fainting at every delivery, who actually starts the fight, who acts more like kid, dadima still have "jawani" effect, Maan dealing with EVERYTHING after Geet's little accident, sargam - the carbon copy of Geet, Maan's hubby & father role, the crazy big family, the non-stop yelling, the twist, vicky having nightmare of SEVEN kids, the little gang, the last unexpected news, the capacity, poor Maan. I mean from A to Z. That was totally fab.

Bowdown to you.
Fantastic work.


OMG Sara you freaking summed up ALL THE CHAPTERS!!! LOVED IT!!!
I hope you had a good laughing time while reading...I know I was laughing otu loud while writing the parts😆😆😆
Tahnks you for taking your time to read this!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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superb one
will miss this ff
well finally there are 5 babies as geet wanted
is now geet pregnant with twin ????😉
pls post an epilogue pls pls


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Posted: 13 years ago

superb loved it but the ff is end for that sad also but very much like the end thanks for all ur efforts dear

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Posted: 13 years ago
omg finally it was awesome i loved it yaar
so this was the end wat abt the epilogue yaar
and wats was ending its horrified us with a shock maan im pregnant wat ?
simi baby love u
but ur not going away without giving us a epilogue love
so come out pf maan embrace and give the update k
loved it

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Posted: 13 years ago
oh Simi, I am sad that this ff is ending, but it was a lovely ff...😊
geet is pregnant 😲 are waah
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Posted: 13 years ago
during reading this last part i was thinking that u hurried to end this ff coz still maan hasnt got his memory back...but at the end i think its best u ended there...if u were not then dont know how many time geet would become preg...they would really make a cricket team...nywy very very wonderful journey with these delhidevil NYqueen...loved all the parts always...
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Posted: 13 years ago

You closed this ff...but it was so far...anyways its was a wonderfull journey with this ff...Thanks simi

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Posted: 13 years ago
awww...it was such a cute end...i loved it with them getting remarried and all...but poor maan..lolz...i mean...Geet is preggy again...haha...now would have been fun to read...but i think you have ended it well..this story has come a long way since the start and u have done a great job with it..

Thanks for a great read :)

Reya <3

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