NaUmer Ki Sima Ho NaJnam Ka Ho Bndhan/Part 10 pg17 - Page 3

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: geetsweet

No...nahi... Don't do tast plz i loved ur concept...

Its such a great concept...u know its very interguing...

Plz don't discard...

I love to know their meeting...

Do update soon...



thanx dear but If somebody gives u response ...only then good things happen
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: zahra15

this sounds amazing...plzz add me to ur pm list...continue sooon...



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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hey friends I know few parts r boring but these r important for intro..bear these I promise to giv my best n u ll enjoy ..n this also...ur response is much needed


Stage was set for Rohakshins to attack Humans not face to face but in other way.Geet did same what Jinta planned ...Using Astronaut's body …She was in space shuttle…which was going back to earth…As shuttle reached earth's environment …Geet left that body on rent n shuttle also …n changed herself completely in energy

Note : Rohakshins r those beings..that can use any other living being other then their specie known as body snatchers …n when ever they need they can transfer themselves to jst energy .

A new planet. new environment ….Her father arranged everything for her...how to reach earth…But here …She had to take every decision by herself …..

She had much advanced race..But ..for her this action….this was not an easy task…

She moved towards that place where She could find Dr Khuraana …

Time 10 :00 pm …

Khuraana Mension

A streak of light came down ….on terrace …where usually no one came at nite ..That was Geet …..in her real appearance …She climbed down to second floor…..Where She heard some one talking ..window was open so every thing was visible to her


A beautiful girl was talking to some one…But that person's back was towards Geet

She was none other then Sam but unknown to Geet ..n that man having back towards Geet was one n only Dr Khuraana

But Geet was amazed to see a girl: How beautiful She is kya Dharti ki all females r really such beautiful

How She overheard their talk again

Sam : Babut raat ho gayi aab mujhe ghar janna chahey

Maan : Sam 10 baj chukkay hai …tum aaj yahin reh jayo

Sam : Ji reh to jayon..Daddi Maa say pucha apnay

Maan : Kyon agar na pucha to woh tumko dhakkay maar kar nikal deygi ..(He had lil smile on his lips)

Sam : Dr Sahab Daddi Maa mujhe kuch nahi kehti…bahut achin hai..per abhi hamari shaddi nahi hue..is liye baddon ka lihaaj karma chahea .

Maan : Oh to tumhara matlaab hai ..Hum apni Daddi ki parwah nahi kartay ( he was showing lil anger …but that was jst nautanki )

Sam : Main janti hu aap bahut sanskaari hai….per fir bhi(She taunted)

Maan : ok ok Sam agay aur kuch maat kaho..Hum tum se nahi jeet saktay..challo Daddi ko batta datey hai..k u r gonna stay here

They left room….Geet was not able to look at Maan .So She had to wait …no other option was there for her

Maan came back in his room after half n hour ….telling Daddi about Sam

Removed his shirt just in vast ..He was too tired due to this project

Sleeping Maan's one jhalak was enough for Geet to forget ..what was her mission…How she can kill this person who made her to forget every thing

Suddenly She got signal from her father ...n ...She cam to reality ..why She was here..?..

Karon : Geet u have reached ….there ?

Geet : ji Pitaji .

Karon : To aab agay kya karna hai soch liya ?

Geet : Ha maine soch liya kya karna hai….Dr Khuraana ki lagta hai koi khas dost hai..aur uski body kaffi hai mere liye to do my work

Karon : theek hai ..jo karna soch samjh kar karna

Geet : Ji pitaji ..main bhi pritvi per binna kisi insaani shreer k raat ko nahi reh sakti kyonki din k ujaalay main roshni say mujhe shakti mil jayegi ..per raat ko nahi..apna kaam karne k liye mujhe rasta mil gaya hai

N She moved searching room... where Sam was... n She got her….Sam was also sleeping n it was not much harder to control her body n mind ..Sam was no more Sam …She was Rohakshi Naytiri

In the morning …

there was no need of body for Geet …But She decided to hold Sam ….this was the only way to be with Maan

But how humans behave n react that was a much harder task for her….So She was still in her room…when Maan came there

Maan : Sam hum to tayar bhi ho gaye aap abhi tak aise hi baithe hai .

Geet: woh main …..

Maan : woh main …woh main…..kya Sam tum bhi ..lagta hai jayda work load ne tumhare dimaag per asar kar diya hai…aur agar yeh soch rahi ho k kay pehnu fresh ho kar…I hav solution ….Hum jab last week US gaye thy I bought gifts for Daddi..Dev n U ….wait ..hum tumhare liye jo dress laye thay who latay hai….Kaam k chakkar main bhool hi gaye

n Maan left the room…But Geet was jst gazing n gazing ….at him…How beautiful he was…n of great nature too

in few minutes …Maan came back with black dress…which was Sam's favorite color

Maan : Chalo aab fresh ho jayo jaldi ..( n he pushed her to wash room)

few minutes after Geet was ready

Maan : Humari choice burri nahi hai…u r really looking beautiful..(He smiled …n kissed her on forehead his big broad eyes were saying every thing how much he was in lov with Sam …)

This soft touch was not for Sam but Geet was able to feel this ..Sam was jst a way

Geet was thinking whether... She was at fault …as She took decision for Maan's assassination…But She had to follow that what Her father said to her


Hai buddies I hop u will lik ...plz forgiv me for any mistake...I ll pm my friend after few hours


till then if u go through this comment n hit lik

jass

Edited by Jass.KN - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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thanx to b first ...😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Wow Awasome update
Plz continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
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loved it 😳
thanks 4 the pm
please continue soon 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hey Buddies after boaring parts here is real one hop u will enjoy ..Plz give me response ...comments..ur response is my way

Note : Buddies keep in Mind Alien Geet was in Sam's body...She had controled Sam's mind also ...Maan was taking her as Sam ...But internally She is Geet


Daddi Maa was waiting for them on breakfast

She also loved Sam very much coz... She was a nice girl n above all... Her grandson was in lov with her

Daddi : Sam aap bahut beautiful lagti hai black dress main.

Geet was amazed ...who She was n Daddi's beautiful shari that attracted her much

Maan : Daddi Maa Sam k chakkar main aap yeh bhool gai hai... k apka grand son bhi yahi hai

Daddi : Nahi beta apko kyon bhulay gay ..aap to hamari zindgi hai ...hamare jinne ki wajah (She took Maan's face in her hands n kissed his forehead)

Geet(self talk ): To yeh hai Daddi …kitna pyar karti hai Dr Khuraana say ..aur woh apni Daddi say…meri to na Maa hai aur na he koi Daddi

Maan : Sam kya soch rahi ho ?

Sam : kuch nahi Daddi apse kitna pyar karti hai…meri to Maa hi nahi hai ?

Daddi Maa n Maan were amazed coz... Sam had both father n mother ..n they r in UK

Daddi : Beta yeh aap kya keh rahi hai…apki Maa nahi hai..apki Maa to UK main hai..haa yeh baat alag hai k aap unse dur yahan rehti hai

Geet suddenly realized what She was saying …Sam had mother …but She didn't hav

Sam : Nahi Daddi Maa who main keh rahi thi..yahan nahi hai na…

Daddi : to aap unko miss kar rahi hai…per hum hai na….aur shaddi k baad to aap humare pass he rehangi

Geet was in thoughts now what is Shaddi…But she kept silence …coz her one action could b harmful

She was following what they were doing ..How they were having their breakfast …..

On the other hand Dr Khuraana's attraction..n Daddi's lov were making her to forget her target .What was lov She never realized ... coz…She was very young when her mother n father separated due to some conflicts .Her mother took her younger sister with her…n She was with her father…so what lov was She never came to know..never felt…She was lik any other soldier ..in His father's force…which had only one mission ..fight n win….As she was going thorugh each n every thing on earth…She was feeling ..what is life….what is lov….Bur her commitment to her father…that would never let her to b part of this ..

Maan : Sam aaj patta nahi tumko kya ho gaya hai….khoi khoi se ho…..Chalo aab humko late ho raha hai

Geet came out of thoughts when Dr Khuraana asked her to go with him

Sam: Kahan ?

Maan: lagta hai jayada kaam say tum apna mantle state kho baithe ho ..kahan ka kya matlab lab janna hai aur kahan ? Aisa karo tum aaram karro hum jatay hai…

But this was the opportunity for Geet to know Maan's plains so she denied to stay back

Sam : Nahi Maan mai theek hu…

Maan : are y sure ?

Sam: ya…lets go

N they left ….

Maan was a scientist..But not that convention type having odd dressing sense…..of much age….n out of world…He had proved every thing wrong…….He went back to India after their parents death jst to do things which went wrong ...When His father married to her mother

He was jst fourteen when they lost their parents…This was the biggest shock which changed every thing their lives .Maan Shingh Khuraan was a super intelligent child….But his parents neglected their growing up kids..n He turned to b a spoiled brat one….Maan's parents always wished to see Maan as a scientist….as years back Maan's grand paa….wished his father to b great business tycoon ….But his father denied..his grand paa… same he was doing…But things were changed..After his parents' death….His grand paa..n Daddi Maa came to US…keeping every thing apart…..coz His grand paa's anger with his father was jst outer..

Maan realized some where he was also wrong ..He came to know his grand father's pain ..which his father gave …n now teenage Maan had decided to fulfil all dreams of her grand parenta n his parents ..means Khuraana empire plus his parents wish

( rest of back ground according to flow)….

When Maan stopped the car they were in front of Khuraana construction..from where Maan ran his business n also he had established his lab ….under ground


I hop u will lik plz do comment n hit lik 😃

Edited by Jass.KN - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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wonderful update continue soon
thnks 4 pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
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this was wonderful...geet being lost in maan...this was nice...i wonder what will she do...continue soon n thnxxx...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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interesting update 😊
thanks 4 the pm
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