NaUmer Ki Sima Ho NaJnam Ka Ho Bndhan/Part 10 pg17

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Hey Guys after huge response to my SS Mere Papa Maan ...I have made my mind to write some thing new..So I gonna bring a SS...''A science Fiction ...Na Umer Ki Seema Ho Na Janam Ka Ho Bandhan "

Concept : SS is based on two beings on Human n One alien ...Earth's top n successful scientist ..n Heiress to the throne of other planet ...How destiny brings them face to face n how they fall in lov...n overcome every situation ...Lets see ..Give me some time

If u lov the concept ..plz hit lik n comment

Ur suggestions will really help to handle this tough but emotional topic



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Introductory -Page 1





Hey Buddies I hav decided to updated this hop u ll lik ..giv ur comments n hit lik plz .I u hav any idea giv it to me

Lov

Jass
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Posted: 13 years ago
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hey interesting concept
continue soon n dont forget to pm me😊
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Hey Buddies here is my first science fiction plz enjoy ..n let me know ur opinion...ur opinion ..n encouragement is my way



CAST N SET UPS

Dr.Maan Singh Khuraana

30 years old 'US born'. Most Renowned Space Scientist'He has done doctorate degree in Astronomy n Astrophysics from Columbia University'Youngest pass out in university history

Background: His roots belongs to Punjab '.India 'But His father 'Dr Ram Swaroop Singh Khuraana came to US for higher education '.n'in few years... He became a space scientist too. Here He fell in lov with his classmate'an US born Indian girl 'Dr. Naina Khanna '.Dr. Ram's father '.Mr Ranjit Singh Khuraana was against this relation so... He cut out all ties with His son'after getting news that they has done marriage secretly'Now they had been settled there 'n had two sons Maan n Dev '.

Lik Dr Ram's aristocratic Background...Dr Naina also belonged to same'.n ...She was the only heiress to his father's wealth'so for them there were no financial crises'.. But due to their busy schedule..they cared less '.for their kids ..only money was the way to overcome this 'This was the reason over sensitive Maan had been turned into a spoiled Brat'.Dev's nature was serious 'so he always loved to focus on his studies n friends .

Maan was jst fourteen when His parents died during a research program 'in Australia.

Next part of Background will b disclosed according to flow of story

Other Major Set up

Star: Laland: more then 16 light years away from our sun'This star has ten planets 'having life on six

Main planet : Rohaksh( Ro-ha-ksh)

Ruling race ' Rohakshins'but they 'are'.one lakh years 'ahead than humans

A body snatcher aliens..they can use other beings moving inside them lik soul n ...they can command that typical living beings as they want controlling their minds

Ruler 'Rohakshak Kiron

He has only one daughter heiress to his throne Rohakshi Neytiri ( means Geet in our language )

Kiron had ambition of taking over this universe'..He had won many systems n many planets..n now its turn of solar system '.But this was not a easy task'Due to that invention which Dr Khuraana had been invented 'For this task 'He chose His daughter to assassinate Dr Khuraana

This is a science fiction so lots of fictitious 'names'. Places'things if u have any problem plz let me know'u want to add some thing or u have any idea to make this more enjoyable ...plz give me ur feedback ...


comment n hit lik plz...



plz forgive me coz I hav broken many language rules for the smooth flow of story .csome where I hav to stay in present n some where in past ..so plz enjoy

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wow..amazing.
cant wait to read more.
continue soon.
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Originally posted by: shah10

wow..amazing.

cant wait to read more.
continue soon.


personally thanx buddy ...for first response towards my story 😃
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Originally posted by: anupm04

nice intro

continue soon




thanx dear😊

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Hey wat a concept...

Alian&human really different concept... Intersting...

Looking 4r fourth coming parts...

Do continue soon...
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Amazing concept waiting for update
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awesome dear loved it so maan is human and geet is an alien continue soon
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Set Up Khuraana Mension : New Delhi ..India

Time 7:00 o'clock in the Morning

Dr Khuraana was moving out in hurry

" Maan Betay aap itni subha subha kahan ja rahay hai.?...woh bhi bina breakfast kiye" a female voice stopped him…..He gave a big smile …while looking at Her

" Oh Daddi Maa..hum kitna bhi chup chup kar jaaney ki koshish karry... Aap humko pakad hi latti hai " He said

" Apki Daadi he nahi ...Maa bhi hai…aur agar baccha bina kuch khaye bahar jaa raha ho to Maa ko kaise chain aayea…." Daddi said …She was worried…how much her face was showing that" Maan humne aap ko phone per baat kartay sun liya tha ...kaal raat…k aap aaj jaldi kissi meeting main jaa rahay hai "

Maan : Ji Daddi Maa …I hav to go ….I hav given time to Sameera ….

Daddi Maa : to yeh baat hai apko Sam k liye jaana hai jaldi

Maan : Daddi Maa humko Sam k liye nahi …Sam ko sath lay k janna hai….Dr Martin …k sath humari meeting hai..n he is leaving for US …around 11 …unho nay humse request ki thi milnay ko…..

Daddi Maa: Maan ….that's fine but ….hav ur breakfast first…every thing is ready..

Maan was not surprised that how Daddi arranged all things so fast …coz this was Daddi's habit from many years …Daddi knew what her boys want..when ever want ...She was everything to Maan n Dev .on the other side Maan n Dev were not that after years ... what they were 16 years back ..one major incident of their lives had been changed every thing

Maan took breakfast in hurry..He had given time to Sameera ..His junior …four years back …Sam came .a long way to India from England….She was a research scolar doing her work on " Gravitational force of different planets n their effect on earth "


For her it was much easy to do her Phd program in US... but She chose to come here …..jst to do her work under Dr Khuraana ...Coz …Dr. Khuraana was top scientist on this earth…who himself had denied to work for NASA n other such big names…He wanted to correct that mistake which his father did……He proved himself rite while staying here…in India….But to work under Maan ….that was not Sam's cup of tea….He never became a guide to any other …For Sam this was not a easy task….


Patta nahi kitnay kitney ghantay Sam ..Dr Khuraana ki wait karti ….outside his cabin….so that She could convince him to b her guide…..But Dr Khuraana was a moody person…one day same Dr Khuraana ..gav green signal to Sam..till now who was avoiding Sam ..In next two years... She was jst his student n ..then they became friends n then lovers they didn't know ….Daddi was happy …for his grandson…who was living a lonely life from years….jst work work n work was his target

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