maaneet ss:Shringaar - Page 10

i just read d last part nd i liked it but to understand d whole story i had to read it from d begining derefore not commenting Long but as for dis Part i totally loved it. Pls continue soon

Part 13-

He had lost

Lost all of him to her

And what had she done brutally killed him

Stabbed his heart every time

The way he had tried to lock her was wrong

But other than that he had made her see a vast horizon

Horizon of dream and happiness which he held the power to hold true

He always told her that he loved her but never expected to love her back

Did she even hold the right to love him back now

She groped him tighter in fear to loose herself and pleaded him

Geet:maan plsss wake up im waiting for you ill be with you always

If not in life then after life

Ill not be without you pleaseee maan

Doctor-mam the latest scan speaks of better condition but there is continuos fluctuation of heart

So we are here to try our last attempts

Geet:I want him back beside me in proper health and condition do anything

Dev-geet chalo let them do their work

She went and planted a soft kiss on his lips and whispered-jaan im waiting

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A month later------------

She held back her pent up emotions all this while but burst out now

Geet rested her head on his chest and cried

Cried her hearts out

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precap-what happens a month later😃

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Too small an update.

ye tune kya kiya chandu .itna chot sa update diya aur phir se cliff hanger par chod diyaaa😭😭
waiting for next update.
let me guess abt preap may be maan got consciousness after a month.

awesome dear

nice part dr, but so short
nd plz plz plz Maan should b wid Geet after a month,
continue soon.

oh no pls maan cant die pls waiting what happens after one month