maaneet ss:Shringaar - Page 12

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Posted: 13 years ago
Chandu it was a fabulous upd. Thank u thank u 4 this part.
Loved ur both the poems. It were so deeply written. Oh i just loved it.
Pls pls i beg u , give next upd soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
It was one of best parts written by u
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome ... superb ...

thnx 4 d pm ...

continue soon ...
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Posted: 13 years ago

Nice one

Do continue

loved it

Thanks for the pm

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Posted: 13 years ago
Now its Maan's turn to get his share of love!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome part...

continue soon...

thnx for PM...
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Posted: 13 years ago
Hey i got to read ur ff in one go its awesome...me loved it...

Add me in...
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Posted: 13 years ago
heyyy lovwly update dear...
very nicely written...i liked ur writting skill a lot
continue soon'
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Posted: 13 years ago
2day xam will get ovr so updating soon...
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Posted: 13 years ago

last part-

kaisa yeh anjaan rishta tha

jiski aahat bhi thi…………..parchai bhi thi

magar ,kaise unhe mai pukaroon

she had felt complete………..it was now that she understood what completeness meant when she found him to be a part of her

nature was so kind to her

no it was not him who was blessed with a second life but her

pure bliss when she found herslf in his arms the next morning………….and looking at her condition she could do nothing but blush

yehi to thi uska sapna…………uska dosti………..unki thi vo ………….

He slowly whispered in her ears………………"jaan good morning"

She looked at him and closed her eyes feeling him"maan good morning"

As the newly wed couple decended down the stairs

Badle raste ……….

Badle barkha ki rim jhim

Badlenge ritue ada

par mai rahungi sada

usi tarah teri bahon me bahen daal ke

kaise mujhko mili tum

kuch aisi hi dhun thi ek doosre ke dil me

dad-jite raho beta

naintara-geet hame yakeen nahi ho raha hai

dev-haan jisko aaj tak beti ki tarah dekha hai vo aaj hamari ghar ki bahu hai

maan-dev bro kuch rishte sirf mahsoos kiya jata hai…………………

geet -rishta kitna anmol hota hai yeh mujhe kal pata chala

dev-kal …………………….acha kal kya hua???

Maan-kuch aisa jis ke vajah se naintara bhabhi abhi fir se 6 months ki pregnant hai

Dev-umm. Vo mai

Naintara-and im so happy for that

After 6 years----------------

Pyar ye jaane kaisa hai

Kya kare ye kuch aisa hai

Kabhi dard ye deta hai

Kabhi chain ye deta hai

Kabhi gam deta hai

Kabhi khushi deta hai

Yes they had understood the depth of their relationship……………………….

The four faced everything together……….

Jr. dev to jr.maan

Jr.dev-bhai lets go ……………….we have to have our breakfast

Jr.maan-no I wont………………first let me complete my puzzle set

As maan and dev watched the sight they giggled

Dev-our family

Naintara helped geet to decend the stairs since maan ki raham se she was expecting her jr. geet , and both the ladies joined their love

Maan hugged geet and said

Hamari bachpan………….hamara pyaar……………..hamari kahani

Geet yeh hum aur hamari zindagi hai

Caressing her stomach slightly

HAAN USKA PYAAR HI TO THA USKI SHRINGAAR

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Ill like to thank all my readers who inspired me to write this ss…………..yes I know many wanted me to continue and stretch it but seriously I dd not have anything left in the storyline

You see every good thing comes to an end

Tinu dii-my biggest strength and supporter

Sekhonpuneet-"nindak rakhe niyare"this line is from rhim's doha……………..you have pointed out my weak points and helped me inprove …………….thnxxx

Muraad-thnxxx 4 loving me………….well my gratest fan………….bt wher r u missing

Anshraa dii-someones ryting I look upto……….BY D WAY DII NEED UR HELP BADLY AGN………RELATD TO BLOG

Rrs and perfectyarav-for messging me prsnly and interacting………..cntinue being wid me

PreethiA-Active readr who hs always discussd ,helpd and hum apke karzdaar hai

So bye for now……….i have a lot of emotions attachd to dis ss

Continue showering love on

Ff:naina tore And Ss:Australian roomies

Till then wrking on my next 2 ventures

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