A-K After Marriage-last part pg.32:( - Page 8

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Posted: 19 years ago
#71
Kimi...plz conitnue soon...ur such a good writer plz!!
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Posted: 19 years ago
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next part:

well here it goes
and remember its on the top of my head ok

IT starts when angad finds the letter.
a: that means kripa aur woh larka ek doosere se nahin pyar karte. Aur maine kripa ko kya kuch nahin kaha. OH GOD.
ab main karoon.

then he gets flashback of when he was yelling at kripa.😭
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angad now runs to his car and goes fast to the hospital.

Now he quickly goes to her room where he meets the doctor outside.

angad:doctor, kya voh theek hai

doctor: well first Mr.khanna have you brought those papers

angad: yes

doctor: (angad gives papers) well thank you
as you know kripa ne kuch nahin kaya (eat)
and Mr.khanna this could hurt the babay. So i will advise you to take of her.

angad: ok doctor, kya main usko mile sakta hoon

doctor: of course, why not, you can go

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angad goes in and see's kripa on the bed in the hospital.

angad goes closer to her and kripa almost opens her eyes
.

angad: kaise ho kripa

kripa: i am feeling better.

angad: ok main tumhe sleep karne doga.

angad turn and is about to leave.

kripa: angad kya tumne mera letter read kiya.

angad slowly turns around. and nods his head.
says yes and goes back to kripa.

angad: kripa im....im..im sorry

kripa and angad get tears in there eyes.
and angad leans on kripa and they hug.
😳 😳

doctor comes in.
doctor:oh ab pati patni hospital main bhi
😆 😆

angad gets off: doctor kripa home kis din pe jayegi

doctor: well maybe tommorow

angad: can i stay with her

kripa: its okay go home

angad: ok kripa bye

angad goes home...............
and is stil gulity what will happen while he drives

next part: what will happen

sorry short part but i have to go somewhere

~kimi~
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Posted: 19 years ago
#73
g8 loved it plz continue 😃 😃 😃
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Posted: 19 years ago
#74
omg omg omg continue soon...fantastic part!!
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Posted: 19 years ago
#75
hey kimmi as i said i meant no offence newayz i mayb did not notice wen u rote that ajay nd kripa were childhood friendz 😊
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Posted: 19 years ago
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guys i am not feeling well and i am sick and i am not lying ok . i will write soon but i went to the doctor and they said i have some problem in my stomach 😭
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Posted: 19 years ago
#77
Amazing!!



cont wen u feel better!
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Posted: 19 years ago
#78
HI EVERYONE HOW YA FEELIN' I AM FEELING MUCH BETTER!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

WELL SORRY FOR NOT CONTUING SOON!!
I AM A LATE PERSON 😆 😆 😆

and evryone these stars underneath means place change or scene change
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next part her it goes and it will be very sad 😭 :

recap:angad hugs kripa!!!!
angad drives home *****what will happen in the car

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starts when angad is driving

angad is thinking in his mind: "maine aisa kyon kiya. oh god kripa still looks upset. she muct be thinking , angad mujhe trust nahin karta. oh god humare bacha ko kuch hogaya toh.
stupid me"
angad then gets flash backs and doesnt concentrate on his driving when he CRASHES on a tree 😭 😭 😭

then a bunch of people surround his car and one of the person says: THIS IS ANGAD KHANNA OH GOD!!!!!
and they call the ambulance!!

ambulance comes and takes angad to the hospital!!

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angad arrives at the hospital and is on the bed in the hospital. his eyes open and notices that it is the same hospital as the one kripa is in!!

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AT NIGHT!!!!

kripa is on her bed and hears the doctor talking to his nurse.

nurse: Angad Khanna has met with an accident

doctor: WHAT? we must not tell MRS.KHANNA
woh parishan (worried 😆 ) hoyjayi gi.

doctor: what room is he in?

nurse: room 15


kripa hears this and waits for the doctor to leave to their offices by pretending to sleep!! (clever kripa)

kripa then gets off her bed and goes quickly to angad's room.

kripa thinking in her head: Room 15, yeh angad ka hai!!

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KRIPA ENTERS AND SEE'S ANGAD ON THE BED. 😭
kripa cries

kripa: angad, angad yeh kya hua tumse? kya tum parishan ho . mere liye??

angad slowly opens his eyes because he heard kripa's voice.

ANGAD: kripa tum yahan
KRIPA: kya hua tumko?
ANGAD: kripa go back to your room
KRIPA: nahin angad kis baat se parishan ho . kya tumhe lagta hai ke main tumhe maf nahin kiya??
ANGAD: kripa actully i was guilty
KRIPA: guilty for what , tumne kya kiya?
ANGAD: i was scared, kripa that you didnt belive me.
KRIPA: angad what nonsense , of course i love you!!!
ANGAD: finally tumne mujhe maf kiya!!

THEY HUG 😳AND DOCTOR COMES IN AGAIN 😆

doctor: MRS.khanna, tum apne room mein jaho

KRIPA LEAVES

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morning!!

naina and dilip & karthick come to take them.

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ONE WEEK LATER!!!!!

ANGAD AND KRIPA SLEEPING!!!
😳
IN EACH OTHER'S ARMS!!!!!!

DILIP WALIKS IN

DILIP: angad, kripa , bete

they wake up

ANGAD:dad tum yahan
DILIP: remember aaj naina , i mean tumare mom ki birthday hai
ANGAD: oh yes
DILIP: maina ek plan banaya hai
KRIPA: kaisa plan??


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THEY OUTSIDE IN THE LIVING ROOM!!
\DILIP TELLS ANGAD TO DECORATE AND KRIPA TO MAKE THE CAKE!!

ANGAD: nahin kripa you relax
KRIPA: nahin main kuch karna chati hoon
ANGAD: are you sure my jaan?
KRIPA: yes i am sure my angu

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CLOSE TO LUCH!!(SKIPPED BREAKFAST 😆 😆 )

people invited!!!
naina comes out!!!!(she sure sleeps long!!)

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IN THE PARTY!!!!

AJAY IS THERE AGAIN(OH ON)

ANGAD GOES TO DRINK WITH SOME FRIENDS(SHABBIR AND OTHERS)

KRIPA IS SITTING IN HER ROOM AGAIN (DUMB HER)

AJAY WALKS IN

AJAY: so kripa kya angad gusha hai
KRIPA: ajay tum yahan se jaho. I HATE YOU OKAY I HATE YOU!! AND WHO INVITES YOU HERE??? BOLO???

AJAY: dont worry i will leave

KRIPA: YOU GO!!!!!

AJAY LEAVES!!!
KRIPA GOES OUT !!!

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AJAY GOES TO THE DRINK TABLE AND TELLS THE WAITER TO GIVE KRIPA THIS JUICE

WAITER: OKAY

AJAY HAD MIXED SOMETHING IN IT AND WAITER GIVES IT TO KRIPA!!

WAITER: JUICE

KRIPA: SURE ( TAKES JUICE)

KRIPA GETS DIZZY AND GOES BACK TO HER ROOM (SMART AND BAD)

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AJAY HAS A FRIEND NAMES AMRITA.

AJAY: AMRITA GO DO THE SAME TO ANGAD . YOU LIKE HIM, DONT YOU!!

AMRITA: YES FOR SURE!!! (EVIL LAUGH)
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AMRITA GOES TO THE WAITER AND DOES THE SAME AS AJAY DID TO KRIPA.(OH GOD)

ANGAD SOON GETS DIZZY AND STIL HAS SOME SENSE TO THINK THAT KRIPA WILL GET WORRIED SO HE WALKS OUT OF HOME AND GOES IN OUTHOUSE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
(NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO)

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SOON AJAY SEE'S KRIPA SLEEPING IN HER ROOM AND GOES THERE AND GOES THERE AND LAYS BESIDE HER WHILE HE PUTS A CAMERA THERE 🤢

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AMRITA GOES TO ANGAD IN THE OUTHOUSE AND SEE'S HIM SLEEPING THERE TOO. SHE LAYS THERE WITH HIM AND PUTS A CAMERA THERE
🤢 🤢
🤢
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THE END!!!!

I DONT EVEN WANT TO WRITE THE NEXT ONE BEACUSE IT SOUNDS QUITE GROSS

BUT I HAVE TO MAKE SOME KIND OF TWIST WHICH SHOULD LAST LONG(NOOOOOOOOO)

BYE
Edited by kyph great fan - 19 years ago
Kimzzz thumbnail
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Posted: 19 years ago
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i will continue when most people have read it!!! just kiddin 😆 😆
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Posted: 19 years ago
#80
no way u hav 2 b kiddin me plz tell me nooooooooooo......plz cont. fast i luv the twist....this is just veiwer shock 😆 ...cont sooooooon

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