A-K After Marriage-last part pg.32:( - Page 6

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Posted: 19 years ago
#51
😳 please con. soon with more romantic parts 😆
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Posted: 19 years ago
#52
continue as soon as possible and try to more romance in between angu and krips
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Posted: 19 years ago
#53
o god when r u going to rite the next part
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Posted: 19 years ago
#54
im really sorry for not replying

well here
:
next part
naina: im very sorry beta par deko (and shes points to the door)

A BUNCH OF PEOPLE COME IN:shabbir, anita, anita's mom, maink. and etc. about 30-40.

angad and kripa were very happy and angad said sorry to his mom.

naina intoduces a few people to angad and kripa.

naina: angad kya tum isse se yaad karte ho.
A BEAUTIFUL GIRL COMES THERE.

naina: yeh tumari childhood friend hai , pooja!!

angad:pooja tum kaise ho

pooja:theek hoon

angad:yeh meri patni kripa hai

pooja:of course yeh bhi bhaut bari star hai, well hi kripa bhabi,

kripa:hi so tum angad ki sister jaise ho

pooja:hain yeh mera bhaiya hai

angad:waiter give us drinks i will have just wine , you to kripa

kripa: yeh sure

angad:aur tum kya chati ho pooja

pooja: maybe coke

angad: so 2 wines and 1 coke

......................................................
LATER ON IN THE PARTY

naina: ab main chati hoon ke angad aur kripa sing kare

angad and kripa sing:

aisa koi zindigi mein aye toh zindigi ko zindigi banaye thori khushiya ho thori ansu ho aur zara zara se muskariye
(from dosti)

angad and kripa hug and angad kisses kripa's cheek
and kripa does the same!!

sorry for the delay but this was short because i did it at the top of my head i will cont soon

~kimi~
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Posted: 19 years ago
#55
haha im so glad u pmed me and told me u put me in this fanfic or else i would have never known lol...that was great lol.....wow angad's my brother? lol
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Posted: 19 years ago
#56
next part:

well im giving you the next part and i want to tell you it might be sad because i need to start the story now!!!!

RECAP: party-ak sing aisa koi zindigi mein aye.

.........................................................

A man walks up to kripa.
his name is Ajay.

Ajay:kripa how are you?
kripa:(turns around) hi (confused)
Ajay:kya tum mujhe pechana nahin,
kripa:oh yes ajay now, i remember, after a long time we met.
Ajay:well party's almost to an end why dont we talk
Kripa:sure why not, let me just go to my room for just a minute.
Ajay:ok, jaldi ana.

AJay is following kripa but she does not know
.......................................................
KRIPA IS IN HER ROOM AND IS
COMBING HER HAIR. WHEN
AJAY WALKS
IN!!

AJAY: kripa....
Kripa: ajay tum mera bhar intezar karo mein ati hoon.
Ajay:: actually bhar its too much noise lets sit here.
kripa: as you wish

......................................................

ANGAD WONDERS WHERE KRIPA WENT
AND GOES UP TO CHECK IF
SHE'S THERE..

aJAY: so kripa tum kaise ho
kripa: theek hoon, tum?
ajay:im fine, itne deher bar mille hai so lets hug

KRIPA IS FEELING VERY
UNCOMFORTABLE BUT AJAY FORFULLY
HUGS HER.

KRIPA QUICKLY LEAVES HIM

KRIPA: SO MERA pati angad khanna hai aur tum....(she was about to say something when.................

AJAY kisses her cheek and pushes
her down on the bed

kripa:Ajay, main shadi shuda hoon aur mera aur angad ka bacha is duniya mein ane wala hai so please dont touch me.
......................................................

ANGAD WAS THERE AND SAW WHEN AJAY
PUSHES KRIPA DOWN ON THE BED BUT THEN HE LEFT
TO THE CORNER WHEN KRIPA SAID AJAY MEIN
SHADI SHUDA HOON....

....................................................

KRIPA: AJAY GO OUT
AJAY: im going, im going

ANGAD IS HIDING

AJAY LEAVES...............................

KRIPA WAS ABOUT TO GET UP WHEN ANGAD CAME IN.

.....................................................

ANGAD: KRIPA
KRIPA: angad tum kab aye
a:woh larka kaun tha
k: angad woh mera bachpan ka dost tha, ajay
a: that means ab bachpan ke dost bhi woh karte hai(you know what 😆 )

k:angad tum mujhe misunderstand kare rae ho
a: kya matlab tum aise kar sakti hoon , dam it kripa humara bacha ane wala hai aur tum apne bachpan ka dost kiss karti ho.

K: ANGAD, TUM KYA BAAT KAR RAE HO
A: tum mujhe keh rae ho ke mein kya keh raha hoon , well mien sab kuch dekliya tha , so why did you bring him to our room then?

k: let me tell you what happened
a: NO , let me tell you, tumne usse room mein bhula kar phele hug kiya phir kiss kiya phir... phir you pushed each other on the bed , never expected this from you

k: ANGAD NO , you are misunderstaning , humare bheech kuch nahin hua mere baat kyon nahin samajte ho.

a: enough is enough

then he pushes her to the bed but not hardly because he knows shes expecting.

k: angad

a:kripa humara bacha ana wala hai , i love you kripa tum meri sab kuch ho aur tumne aisa kiya ... kyon kripa...kuon , i didnt know you would do this......

THE END

THIS ONE IS LONGER 😆 😆

~KIMI~


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Posted: 19 years ago
#57
no one liked it 😭 😭 😭
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Posted: 19 years ago
#58
no i liked it....but plz plz plz conitnue soon!!
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Posted: 19 years ago
#59
Wow, what a twist! i liked the part!!! CAnt wait for the next one!
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Posted: 19 years ago
#60
hey thats was nice i liked it but angad should know the truth poor kripa

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