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Posted: 19 years ago
#91
thats great kimi!! cant wait!!! continue soon
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Posted: 19 years ago
#92
NEXT PART!!!!
SORRY FOR NOT CONTINUING BUT I WAS THINKING OF THE NEXT PART!! 😆

SO IT STARTS WHEN AMRITA IS LAYING DOWN WITH ANGAD AND AJAY IS LAYIND DOWN WITH KRIPA 🤢 🤢

(JUST WANT TO TELL YOU THAT THEY DID NOT DO ANYTHING GROSS LIKE " " YOU KNOW WHAT! JUST LISTEN NEXT!!!

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ANGAD WAKES UP AND SEE'S HIS SELF WITH AMRITA (HE DOESNT KNOW HER)

ANGAD GETS UP QUICK
ANGAD:TUM KAUN HO (ANGRY VOICE)
AMRITA: WELL ANGAD IT IS NOT MY FRAULT THAT I AM LAYING HERE
ANGAD: WHAT DO YOU MEAN MISS. AMRITA(SCARTASTICALLY)
AMRITA: WELL ASK YOUR WIFE
ANGAD: AND WHAT DOES THAT MEAN??
AMRITA: WELL ANGAD YOUR WIFE HAD SENT ME HERE
ANGAD: TUM PAGAL HOGI HO, KRIPA AISA KABHI NAHIN KARTI
AMRITA: WELL SHE DID
ANGAD: WELL WHY WOULD KRIPA DO ANYTHING LIKE THAT???
AMRITA: WELL SHE WANTED TO BE WITH AJAY
ANGAD: KYA?? VOH AJAY KA BAACHA 😡
AMRITA: YES YOU ARE RIGHT! KRIPA WANTED TO BE ALONE WITH AJAY.
ANGAD: THAT IS NOT POSSIBLE KRIPA WOULD NEVER DO THAT TO ME.
AMRITA: YOU WANT PROFF

AMRITA PUTS ON A TV THAT IS CONNECTED WITH THE CAMERA THAT AJAY PUT IN KRIPA'S ROOM 😡
AND DONT WORRY AJAY AND KRIPA DIDNT DO ANYTHING THEY JUST SHOWED THAT AJAY IS KISSING KRIPA'S NECK AND KRIPA THINKS ITS ANGAD SO SHE SAYS "I LOVE YOU" "I LOVE YOU"
AND KRIPA DIDNT KNOW THAT IT WASNT ANGAD SO SHE KISSED AJAY ON THE CHEEK 🤢 AND BY THE WAY THIS IS WHAT HAPPENED AT NIGHT BECAUSE IT GOT RECORDED 😡

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ANGAD SEES THIS AND HE IS SHATTERED 😭 😭 😭
ANGAD: KRIPA AISE HAI. DAM IT I LOVED HER SO MUCH!

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IN KRIPA'S ROOM:

KRIPA WAKES UP AND SEES AJAY
KRIPA: AJAY (SHE SCREAMS)
AJAY: KRIPA KRIPA KRIPA
KRIPA: AJAT TUM YAHAN MERE SAAT I TOLD YOU I HATE YOU
AJAY: KRIPA KRIPA KRIPA, WE DIDNT DO ANYTHING
KRIPA: PHIR TUM ISS ROOM MEIN , MERE SAAT?? KYA KAR RAHE THE , TELL ME??
AJAY: TUM APNI HUSBAND KO PUCHO
KRIPA: KYON
AJAY: KRIPA ANGAD NE MUHE YAHAN ANNNE KE LIYE BHULA YA THA.
KRIPA: KYA?? YEH KAISE HO SAKTA HAI
AJAY: WANT PROFF??

AJAY TURNS ON THE TV WHICH RECORED WHAT AMRITA AND ANGAD DID. BUT IT WASNT ANY THING GROSS THEY JUST SHOWED WHAT HAPPENED LIKE AMIRTA DID 😡

KRIPA: ANGAD AISE HAI???
AJAY: YES HE IS

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NEXT DAY *********

ANGAD SEES AJAY OUTSIDE

ANGAD WALKS TO HIM

ANGAD: TUM PLEASE KAHO MERE BIWI SE KE " I HATE HER"
AJAY: OK I WILL

THEN AJAY PHONE RINGS

AJAY: EXUSE ME

AJAY WALKS TO THE CORNER AND AMRITA IS ON THE PHONE
AJAY: AMRITA DID OUR PLAN WORK ??
AMRITA: YES IT SHOULD HAVE!
AJAY: WELL IT DID FOR ME. ABHI ABHI ANGAD NE MUJHE KAHA KE I HATE KRIPA !! EK NA EK DIN KRIPA MERI HOGAYE GI AUR ANGAD TERA!!

THEN AJAY HANGS UP AND SOMEONE PUNCHES HIM TO THE FLOOR!!
ANGAD HEARD EVERYTHING

ANGAD: SO TUM NE AUR AMRITA NE YEH KIYA HAI. SO THAT MEANS KRIPA DIDNT DO ANYTHING WITH YOU.
AJAY: NO SHE DID WE DID A LOT
ANGAD: DONT LIE OKAY. MUJHE PATA HAI KE TUM AUR AMRITA NE YEH KIYA HAI!
AJAY: NO
ANGAD: PUNCHES HIM AGAIN . TELL ME
AJAY: (ANGAD HOLDS AJAYS NECK SO AJAY SAYS YES) YES HUM NE YEH KIYA HAI PAR AB TUM KUCH NAHIN KAR SAKTE , KRIPA NE DIVORCE PAPERS SIGN KAR DIYA HAI
ANGAD: I KNEW IT . MERI KRIPA AISA NAHIN KAR SAKTI!!
I KNOW SHE LOVES ME, OKAY!!

AND ANGAD LEAVES!!!
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ANGAD GOES HOME THINKING THAT KRIPA IS THERE!!!!

ANGAD: KRIPA KRIPA KRIPA

ANYWAY IT IS IN THE ROOM, OKAY!!!

KRIPA WALKS OUT

KRIPA: ANGAD MEIN TUMSE KUCH BAAT NAHIN KARNA CHATI SO PLEASE YEH DIVORCE PAPERS SIGN KARDO
ANGAD: NAHIN KRIPA, YEH SAB JHUHT HAI, AMRITA AND AJAY KA PLAN THA. HUM NE KUCH NAHIN KIYA. AMRITA NE BHI MUJHE EK VIDEO DEKIYE THI KE TUM AUR AJAY KI.
KRIPA: KYA ?? ANGAD NOW STOP YOUR NONSENSE
ANGAD: IT IS NOT NONSENSE
KRIPA: SIGN IT RIGHT NOW

ANGAD WANTED TO SEE IF KRIPA REALLY LOVED HIM SO HE WAS GOING TO PRETEND THAT HE WAS GOING TO SIGN WHEN A PHONE CALL CAME TO KRIPA!!!!!

KRIPA: HELLO
KRIPA'S MOM: BETE (SOUNDS SAD)
KRIPA: MAMA KYA HUA , WHY ARE YOU CRYING
KRIPA'S MOM: BETE TUMARE PAPA KO HOSPITAL PE GAYA HAI
KRIPA: KYA AND FALL ON THE BED AND CRIES

ANGAd: KRIPA KRIPA KRIPA KYA HUA

ANGAD PICKS UP THE PHONE
ANGAD: MAMA KYA HUA
KRIPA'S MOM: BETE KRIPA KE PAPA KO HOSPTAL JANA PARA
ANGAD: KYA, KYA HUA UNKO
KRIPA'S MOM: HEART PROBLEM, KOYI ATTACK HUA AUR HEART MEIN DARD HONE LAGA!!
ANGAD: MEIN AUR KRIPA ATE HAIN.

ANGAD WAKES KRIPA FROM BED

ANGAD: KRIPA
KRIPA: DONT TOUCH MR AUR YEH DIVORCE PAPERS MAT SIGN KARNA
ANGAD: KYON
KRIPA: MEIN NAHIN CHATI KE MERE PAPA KO AUR PROBLEM PARE.
ANGAD: OH I THOUGHT YOU LOVED ME AGAIN (AWW 😳 )

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AFTER HOSPITAL (I AM TIRED OF TYPING )


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KRIPA DAD GOES HOME AND IS SLEEPING

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ANGAD AND KRIPA IN ROOM

ANGAD: KRIPA PLEASE MUJHE EK TAPE TUMHE SUNA NE HAI
(ANGAD RECORED WHEN AJAY SAID THIS WAS OUR PLAN!!!!!)

KRIPA: MEIN TERI KOI BAAT NAHIN SUN NA CHATI HOON
ANGAD: PLEASE KRIPA HUMARE BAACE KE LIYE
KRIPA: AB YEH ONLY MERA BAACHA HAI
ANGAD: KYA, YEH MERA BAACA BHI HAI, KRIPA I LOVE YOU AND THE BABAY
KRIPA: A LIE AGAIN
ANGAD: YOU ARE MISUNDERSTANING
KRIPA: NO I AM NOT OKAY
ANGAD: HERE LISTEN TO THIS

ANGAD PLAYS THE TAPE

ON TAPE WHAT EVER AJAY SAID!!!!!!!!!

KRIPA HEARS THIS AND ............................


the end

HAHA I TOLD YOU THAT IT WILL BE SAD FOR LONG, MAYBE YES MAYBE NO


~KIMI~
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Posted: 19 years ago
#93
WOW!!! AWSOME prt plz cont soon 😊 .....YAY im first!!! 😛......Ihate that ajay dood 😡 ...he tried 2 seperate a-k 😡
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Great part!!!! Good job, Cont. soon!
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Posted: 19 years ago
#95
awesome part
cont soon
urghhh ajay and amrita
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Posted: 19 years ago
#96
awesome part plezzzz continue soon 😃
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Posted: 19 years ago
#97
hey that was sooo sad yaar...but very good writing...continue soon!!! ur a brilliant writer 😛
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Posted: 19 years ago
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hi everyone!!
please read this and answer it by pm me and say :

should AK after marraige be happy or sad for the next episode??????

so pm me by saying yes it should be sad or no!!!

i know your answer all ready 😆 😆

~kimi~
Edited by kyph great fan - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
#99
Next episode!!!
sorry i was not writing the next part because only 2 people replied to my question (which was above) so i was waiting for more replies!!
well one person said-happy
one person said-sad
so it was a tie!!!!!
then i flicked a penny in the air and said "tails means happy" and "heads means sad"
then it went to tails so its happy today!!!!!!!!!!!!

ReCaP: kripa hears the tape recorder!!

kripa starts to cry 😭
kripa: iss ka matlab hai ke tum aur amrita ne kuch nahin kiya?
angad:hain hum dono ne kuch nahin kiya
then they hug 😳
(awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww)
kripa: mujhe mata tha ke tum aisa nahin kar sakte!!!
i knew it
angad:im sooo happy kripa
kripa: angad main sab kuch ki liye sorry kena chati hoon!!
angad: kripa its okay
kripa: angad i love you!!
angad: i love you too, iss khushi ke naal lets celebrate
kripa: angad??
angad: lets go out for dinner
kripa: okay, i love you
angad: me too 😳
kripa: main change karke aati hoon
angad: okay, jaldi karna
angad: and kripa wear red please
kripa: kyon
angad: i dont know just wear it
kripa:okay!!

kripa wears a red suit:


kripa comes out
angad: kripa you look amazing!!
kripa: angad can you wear your black suit
angad: sure!!!!

angad wears a black suit:


they both then leave
!!

angad and kripa get there!!!
they sit on there table!!
angad:what will you eat kripa?
kripa: ummmmmmmmmmm tum kya eat kar rahe ho?
angad:lets eat chicken
kripa:ok
they both eat chicken:

and wine:


after they ate their food angad got up and said
angad:ladies and gentle men me and my wife are not getting engaged right now but i just want to give her this to tell her i love you

everyone clapped

angad gave kripa a ring:


kripa: iss ki kya doororat thi??
angad: i love you!!

then angad gave her a pink rose!!


angad:(outloud) i love you kripa!!
kripa blushed!! 😳 😳 😳

then angad kissed kripa ❤️
and everyone clapped!!

man:i never saw a better couple than you two!!
angad and kripa: thanks!!!

then they danced on huimko tumse pyar hai
Lyrics - Humko Tumse Pyar Hain


(tumko chaha tha tumko chahenge

waade jo kiye woh nibhaayenge) - 2

aye sanam har janam ka yeh ikraar hain

humko tumse pyar hain - 2

Chorus : humko tumse pyar hain - 2

tumko chaha tha tumko chahenge

waade jo kiye woh nibhaayenge



ho wada hain mera ab dil yeh tera

kabhi zindagi mein na maayus hoga

ho meri wafaye tere liye hain

meri jaan tujhko yeh mehsoos hoga

bas tere liye mera dil bekaraar hain

humko tumse pyar hain - 2

tumko chaha tha tumko chahenge

waade jo kiye woh nibhaayenge



meri tamanna khushi ban gayi hain

koi aa gaya hain meri zindagi mein

ho mohabbat ne meri bulaya hain mujhko

uda jaa raha hu main bekhudi mein

aa bhi ja -2 mujhe tera intezaar hain

humko tumse pyar hain - 2

tumko chaha tha tumko chahenge

waade jo kiye woh nibhaayenge

aye sanam har janam ka yeh ikraar hain

humko tumse pyar hain - 4

Chorus : humko tumse pyar hain - 2

then they went home!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

at night angad comes to kripa in a naughty way!!!
wearing this:


kripa: angad??

'THE END~

HAHAHA
I STOPED IT HEAR SO YOU CAN WONDER WHAT ANGAD AND KRIPA WILLL DO NEXT 😉

~KIMI~




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Posted: 19 years ago
sorry but it was short and boring!!
but it was romantic😉😳



Edited by kyph great fan - 19 years ago

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