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sweet scorpio

@sweet scorpio

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Posted: 13 years ago

#431

loved it!

precap is a but scary!

continue soon!

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Aatiya

@PaintedSky

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+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#432

I was scared of water until I learn how to swim. I can understand Geet's state.

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disha

@Conqueror212

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+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#433

amazing update... loved it😃

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sweet cherry

@sweet cherry

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Posted: 13 years ago

#434

loved it

do continue

it was amazing

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Sneha

@sneha.juneja

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#435

I just luvd it Marvee..

Thanks alot for thsi lovely update

& Thanks a ton for the PM..

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-memorable-

@-memorable-

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Posted: 13 years ago

#436

wonderful update

if instructor is like maan guess everyone would like to learn swim 😉

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Dilsay

@Dilsay

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#437

Thanks for the PM and a lovely update ...

I hope the the dad scene is adream ?????

swimming lesson was very well written ...

I love to see the intense emotions erupted b/w Maneet ...

would love to read more of Maneet scenes...

continue soon

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Zohamaaneet

@Zohamaaneet

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#438

superb update marvee
omg does her father know that she out there with maan
and why he has come there for geet cant he wait until she return
hm and wat was maan planning to do with geet with his emotion marvee
and geet also feeling same thing and only thing is coming between them that is he father
continue soon
loved it
thanx for pm