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khwaishfan

@khwaishfan

Elite

+ 9

Posted: 13 years ago

#171

Hi Marvee...u finally updtaed dear bt y no pm 😭 ! If no pm will nt know if u updated! Sorry 4 being so irritating abt pms bt love the way u write n ur FF n look forwrad to da updates! Nyways will wait 4 pm bt already read part 10, it was rocking n steamy! Maaneet fighting n den kissing! Geet lies to her mum bt Maan assures her da she should nt feel guilty! Its his fault! Maaneet get closer n Geet does nt realise until Maan stops n ots starts raining! Precap is wonderful! Updtae soon n please pm lol! 😉

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disha

@Conqueror212

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#172

awesome udpate dear
loved it 😃

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KrishnaSourav

@AayaTohModiJi

Achiever

+ 10

Posted: 13 years ago

#173

awesome, brilliant part
loved it
continue soon

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GurruKiDeewani-

@GurruKiDeewani-

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#174

superb update loved it

next 18+ coming or not 😉

continue soon

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zaqxsw

@zaqxsw

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#175

Was one of the sweetest part of the story...
Just loved it sooo much...
I though they would do sumthing else rather than fighting... But then this is Maan and Geet we r talking abt... *wink wink*
Loving the story...
Please update soon...
Love
Sakshi

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Fatima

@desigirl_18

Inactive

+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#176

OMG i loved it!! At last u updated it!! it's my fave fave!!! and omg that kiss haiii😍 loved it Marvee and cant wait to read what they'll be upto in the sleeping bag!! ;)

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reni

@leverne

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#177

Wow they kissed again..lol.. Sleeping bag and two ppl maaneet..plus fighting..they don't know what to do inside a sleeping bag when its all wet outside..lol..anyways hope u get 380 likes soon and we get an update..lol..

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Bloomysunday

@Bloomysunday

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#178

it was a very very very long wait but thats ok if u give us such lovely updates...tc..continue soon😊

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tamannA

@tamanna1391

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#179

long wait but love the update

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Zohamaaneet

@Zohamaaneet

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#180

hey marvee
that was speechless and outstanding update girl
wow maan and geet war between them that too no space in sleeping back hmmm mind is roaming somewhere jess chee no no no babji
got damn continue soon marvee cant wait all