MAANEET SS: THIS IS NOT THE END#2Pt.31&Epi. Pg 117 - Page 7

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Update mile to jaado cha gaaya...
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Maine Pyar kiya tumhare update se
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Mera Juta hai japani...
Lekin teri update hindustani..
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I know u r updating darling...but m off to bed..have to wake up early

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Talk to u soon Abinash...🤗
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Wow... u updating. thank God m on tym. waiting dear

Nd by d way Congo on ur new thread😉
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Hw much more tym Dear?????????
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Hi to all my Loely Lovely Readers. m back wid another update to Torcher u all. but before i do dat i just need to Thanx to all of u for ur overwhelming Support so far. i truly Appreciate ur Comments/criticism nd suggestions. dey actually motivates me. keep supporting me like dis only Guys. Ok without making u all wait further m going to update d next part. here's d Part 21 of my SS. here u go

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By the way does any one of u knw hw to create Siggies? i need siggie for my SS. if anyone of u knw den kindly make it for me. i shall be grateful to u.

PART 21:

Geet looked at Maan who was trying his best to control d car. She could sense dat he didn't care for his own life but for only hers. She silently prayed dat everything turned to be fine nd dey both get safe nd if not she den he gets safe from dis Accident

Geet: Pls Babaji! Dnt let happen anything to Maan. Take my Life instead but pls Maan ko kuch mat hone dijiyega.

She silently prayed nd opens her eyes to look once again at Maan nd suddenly Maan turned his car sideways nd last she hears d sound of CRREEEKKK!!!!! Wid her eyes closed not sure dat dey were still alive or has reached to heaven.

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Yash: Unbelievable Dadimaa. It was all ur plan. I mean sending dem alone nd all dat

Savitri Devi: ofcourse. Agar aap logo ke bharose rehte to Geet waapas US bhi chali jati aur in dono ki story wahi ki wahi reh jati.

Meera: But Dadimaa, hw u came to know dat d Site dat dey both had decided has sum legal issues in it or it was just d part of ur plan

Savitri Devi: No Meera it was not d part of my plan. Dat Land really had some Legal issues, Maan has told me about dat land nd I dnt knw y but I got sum negative wibes from it so I decided myself to know about it nd has came to know from one of my sources about dis legal problem. Nd I was about to tell it to Maan wen I thought of dis plan of sending dem alone nd rest u knw

Yash: Wow Dadimaa, u r d best (he said while hugging her sideways)

Meera: yes Dadimaa. U r Coolest Dadimaa ever.

Savitri Devi: Well thank u both of u for d compliment

Yash: but Dadimaa ye to theek hai ki aapne un dono ko akele bhej diya but u think dat dey'll able to sort out dere difference in dis trip.

Savitri Devi: Yash I dnt make plans without thinking d consequences. Dere's lot more to cum in dere ways nd m sure dat dis Trip is going to change dere Lives forever.

Meera: Hope so Dadimaa. I just wanted to see both of dem together nd happy.

Savitri Devi: Me too

Yash: Me three

He said nd all laugh in unison praying dat dere plan gets successful

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Geet was still having her eyes closed due to fear. She just heard d sound of CRREEEKKK!!!!! She was scared to open her eyes as she dnt want to see d sight which would be in front of her. Though she's not sure whether dey r still alive or not but still she can't see Maan's body pooled in Blood. She had felt dat Car stops wid a jerk suddenly causing her head to hit d dashboard hard but was not sure whether it's due to break or it has collided it wid sumthing. Though being in all dis confusion also she only prays for Maan to be safe nd nothing else.

Maan take a drastic turn to avoid it from colliding it wid d Truck which makes him lose d control of car nd it was getting difficult for him to control it but wen he saw Geet's scared face he dnt knw from where but he got d energy to turned everything to be safe nd last he knows dat he turned his car sideways nd stops it wid d sudden break to avoid it colliding it wid d Tree due to which she gets her head hit hard on d Dashboard even he too got hit in his head but his wound matters nothing to him in front of her injury. He saw dat her eyes were still closed nd he knows dat she was scared to open her eyes as she can't bear d sight of Accident nd dis fear was within her since d tym she lost her father in an Accident dat too in front of her eyes nd he knows about it. Datsy she always says everyone to concentrate while driving. He slowly puts his hand on her shoulders to make her calm

D moment Geet felt his hand on her shoulders she was sure dat dey r safe, dat he's safe; dere's nothing to worry about. She slowly opened her eyes nd turned to look at him only to find himself looking at her wid great concern. Maan notices d tears nd concern in her eyes for him nd before he can say anything Geet hugged him tight, initially he was dumbstruck but later he too hugs her tight.

D moment Geet saw him in front of her safe nd sound she felt like happiest person in dis world which can be easily seen in her eyes nd without any second thought she hugged him tight like he'll vanish in any minute to make sure dat it was not dream nd he's safe sitting in front of her. Only she knows hw much she has gone thru in dese few mins, just by d thought of seeing him in pool of Blood. Her hold gets tighter on him as she thought of seeing him heart. she haven't noticed dat wen tears has started flowing from her eyes; neither she knows dat dese tears were due to Happiness dat Maan is safe in front of her or of fear dat she might lose him forever.

Maan could feel her body shaking wid fear derefore he held her more close to him to calm her down, but who's going to calm him wen he himself was scared at dat moment, Just by d thought of Geet getting hurt, just by d thought dat he's going to lose her forever. It took him couple of mins to realize dat she is safe in his Arms. He could feel his shirt getting wet due to her tears. he tries to free her from his embrace so dat he can calm her down but she hold him more tight not letting him to leave her.

Maan: Geet...

Geet (saying while continuing sobbing): Stupid... Duffer... I told u Na... Concentrate on Driving but no... u didn't... u didn't listened to me... y u never listen to me SHONA? ("SHONA" OMG she called him SHONA after so many years. Haye so dreamy😍😳) bolo... y u never listen to me... Do u know hw much... How much scared I was... Wat if Sumthing would happen to u... just d thought has made me die 100 deaths... y u always do dis SHONA... y cant u take my words seriously?

(OMG once again SHONA. Ok m going to faint nw.😲)


Geet had no idea wat she was saying but she was saying wat was in her heart. Yes, she was hell scared at dat tym just by the thought dat Maan's lyf is in danger. Maan heard her voice shaking wid fear nd wait did she called him SHONA or was he dreaming. She always use to call him wid dis name wen she has to show her rights on him or wen dey use to have their Lovey-dovey talks at nite 5 yrs back or wen dey both needs each other emotionally; Maan more because he was never able to understand wen Geet needs him nd wen not 5 years back nd today once again she has called him wid dis name not one but twice clearly indicating dat she had immense Love for him in her heart. hw can he even think dat she's in Love wid sumone else wen he can only find him in her heart nd eyes. Even in dis situation also she just thought of his safety without even thinking about her once. She too was in danger, sumthing would have happen to her also but she didn't think of herself twice nd was only scared for him.

"O God! Hw can she still Love him so much. Will he ever be able to payback fir dis immense Love" he thought

Geet frees herself from his embrace to look at him to make sure dat he didn't had any severe injuries.

Geet: u fine Na... tumhe kuch hua to nahi... Zyada chot to nahi aayi Na... (she said while touching all over her face nd shoulders getting anxious)

Maan: Geet..Geet Listen to me (he said while holding her shoulders but she was nowhere to stop finally he hold her tight nd shakes her) GEET LISTEN TO ME!!!

She instantly Stopped nd looked at him. He cupped her face nd wipes away her tears dat were continuously flowing from her eyes.

Maan: Geet I m fine. See m safe here in front of u. nothing has happened to me and nothing would ever happen to me until u r wid me. Hw can anything would happen to me wen my Angel is wid me to save me from every difficulty.

Music...

Teri meri, meri teri prem kahani hai mushkil
Do lafzon mein yeh bayaan na ho paaye
Ik ladka ik ladki ki yeh kahani hai nayi
Do lafzon mein yeh bayan na ho paaye

Geet just looked at his eyes deep. At dat moment nothing matter to her anymore; her anger, her decision nothing. All wat matter to her is Maan, his words. Maan notices d injury on her forehead which was oozing Blood nw.

Maan: Geet tumhe chot lagi Hui hai. Wait main abhi dawa lagata hoon

He said nd searches for his First aid Kit which he always keeps in his car. He tooks out nd was about to clean her wound wid Cotton wen Geet Stops him. He looked at her confusingly not knowing y she is stopping him. Does she dnt want him to touch her?

Geet: Tumhe bhi to chot lagi hai na

Teri meri, meri teri prem kahani hai mushkil
Do lafzon mein yeh bayaan na ho paaye
Ik dooje se hue juda Jab ik dooje ke liye bane

Teri meri, meri teri prem kahani hai mushkil
Do lafzon mein yeh bayaan na ho paaye

She said while looking at his wound nd takes d cotton from him nd cleans d wound. Though it was small in front of Geet's wound nd not much Blood was oozing from it but yet it was enough for Geet to make her shiver. Maan can only smile at her concern, at her care, at her unconditional Love. She still thinks of him before her. He just wanted tym to stood still at dat moment. She was doing his dressing while he was just watching her without blinking his eyes like she'll be vanish if he blinks his eyes.

Music...

"Nd she says dat she don't love me anymore, don't care for me anymore" He thought while smiling.She finished off wid his dressing nd was about to keep back d Box wen he hold her hand to stop her.

Teri meri baaton ka har lamha sabse anjaana,
do lafzon mein yeh bayaan na ho paaye

Har ehsaas mein tu hai har ik yaad mein tera afsaana
Do lafzon mein yeh bayaan na ho paaye
Ik dooje se hue judaa, jab ik dooje ke liye bane


She didn't asked anything but just looked at him. He takes out d cotton nd wipes away d Blood slowly Blowing at d wound, den he applied d tincture but she didn't winced in pain once as she was too lost in his eyes nd his actions. He was treating her like she was a soft feather. She just smiles slightly looking at his concern. He put d bandage on her wound nd looked at her eyes where he saw numerous expressions.

Teri meri, meri Teri prem kahani hai mushkil
Do lafzon mein yeh bayaan na ho paaye
Ik ladka ik ladki ki yeh kahani hai nayi
Do lafzon mein yeh bayan na ho paaye

Music...


He keeps d Box at a side nd slowly cupped her face nd wipes away d tear dat is forming at d corner of her eyes. He looked deep into her eyes while rubbing his thumb on her cheeks nd slowly kissed on her forehead to which she didn't protest once. She too needed it at dat tym. She closed her eyes to feel his touch.

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Maan looked at her closed eyes but before he do anything further he needs to have d answer of his questions from her.

Maan: Geet

She opens her eyes nd looked at him

Maan: Geet, u said dat u dnt love me anymore, dat u dnt care for me anymore den wat is dis dat m seeing in Ur eyes today? Dat I always see in Ur eyes? If u dnt love me anymore den y its aching u seeing me in pain? Y were u crying at dat tym? Y u didn't cared for urself? Y were u scared at dat tym just by d thought dat sumthing wrong will happen to me? Bolo Geet kyun? Jab tum mujhse pyaar hi nahi karti to kyun meri itni parwah karti ho, kyun mujhe Dard me nahi dekh sakti? Y r u stopping urself Geet?

She casted her eyes down not able to look at dose eyes, not able to answer any of his questions. Wat will she answer him dat she's scared to love him again, to trust him again, dat her fear always overcomes her Love for him. No she can't tell him, he'll get hurt nd dis is d last thing she wanted. He raises her face up thru her chin so dat she can look into his eyes

Maan: Bolo Geet, kyun?

She was about to say sumthing wen Maan's cellphone ring bringing both of dem in reality. He cursed d tyming of d caller at dat tym. He closed his eyes in frustration nd looks at d phone. He can't ignore d call also as It was from his Dadimaa. He picked it up while looking at Geet.

Maan: Hello!

Savitri Devi: Maan!

Maan: Ji Dadimaa, koi kaam tha

Savitri Devi: nahi, I just wanted to know dat whether u had reached over dere safely or not. Its been more den 3 hrs since u left from home but u haven't called me once

Maan: I m sorry Dadimaa, wo actually I was driving nd someone told me dat we shouldn't talk on call while driving (he said while looking at Geet) nd ya I m on my way will reach over dere within an hour

Savitri Devi: but wat took u so long? U should have reached over dere by now

Maan: Wo... Dadimaa... Actually we got stuck up in d traffic jam for almost 45 mins. Derefore we get late (he didn't told anything regarding his Accident knowing her health)

Savitri Devi: oh! Koi baat nahi. Call me as soon as you reach over dere

Maan: Ji Dadimaa. U take care of urself nd ur health. I'll be back soon. Bye.

Savitri Devi: bye

He hangs up d call nd again looked at Geet. By d tym Maan was on call Geet gets enough tym to compose herself, to again wear d mask of her coldness to hide her Love for him. Maan was about to question her again wen she spoke

Geet: Wo... I think we should go nw. we r already very late nd we still have to cover very much distance

Maan could say nothing but only nodded his head, knowing dat she won't talk anything related to his questions nw as she has got enough tym to compose herself. He turned his head nd starts to ignite d car but it was not getting started. He tried again but still d result is same. Like dis he tried many tymes but Everytym he just fails.

Geet: Wat happen Maan?

Maan: I dnt knw Geet, but car is not getting start.

He said nd tried again but still it didn't start.

Maan: I'll just go nd check.

He said nd gets out from d car followed by Geet. he noticed dat d engine of d car is burning nd radiator needs sum water. He goes at d back of d car to see dat of dere's sum water over dere but to his luck d container was empty.

Maan: Geet, I need to get sum water. U stay inside d car, I'll just go nd find sum water

Geet: no, I'll also cum wid u.

Maan: Geet zid mat karo. U r already very much stressed nd even i dnt know hw far I had to go in search of water. So just stay inside d car.

She haven't said anything but just twisted her lips in disappointment. He just smiles at her childish behaviour.

Maan: nd one more thing. Dnt cum outside d car until I come. See its highway nd silented road too so I dnt want u to be in any kind of trouble.

Geet: but Maan u r talking like its Dark night. See its day tym nd moreover I can take care of myself.

Maan: Geet, have u swear dat u'll not listen to me without Arguing. Just sit inside d car until I return.

Geet: ok

She said while making face. Maan smiled nd turned to go wen Geet called him

Geet: Maan!

Maan turns towards her to look at her

Geet: Apna dhyan rakhna

Maan: hhmmm

He said nd moves from dere while she just looked at his retreating body until he disappeaers nd after dat sits inside d car.

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1/2 an hour has been passed but Maan still haven't came back yet. By every passing minute it was getting difficult for Geet to sit nd wait inside d car derefore she decided to get out from d car nd look for him. She takes her cell phone nd car keys before getting out. She locked d car nd started walking at d direction where Maan has gone. Though Maan has told her numerous tymes to not to get out of d car but she's Geet who never listen to others wen she's upto sumthing nd derefore she didn't listened to even Maan also dis tym nd has came out in search of him.

She walked few steps ahead from car nd continuously looks back so in case if Maan came in d mean tym den she can see him but she didn't find him anytym derefore she decided to walk more. She walked few steps more now she can see their car from a distance. She was lsot in her thoughts while walking. Dat few mins of her Life were d worst mins of her life. She thanked Babaji that nothing wrong had happened to dem otherwise d condition in which dey r one of dem might lose dere Life but thank god dey both r safe especially Maan.

As she remembered him d questions dat he has asked to her were started running in her mind. She don't know wat she's doing wid her own lyf. She's making things complicated for her own self. Y does she can't give answers to Maan's question clearly nd gets rid from all dis but she don't have courage to hurt him. No matter hw much he has hurted her in d past but she still cant hurt him but at d same tym her heart fears to Love him again. God knows wen dis Turmoil of her heart is going to end.

She was so much engrossed in her thoughts dat she didn't even noticed dat she has came far away from Car until she heard sum sounds from behind. She turned nd Look a Jeep is cuming wid 3-4 guys in it who were hooting badly. She looked ahead nd started walking not giving any attention to dem but unfortunately she catches d attention of dose guys nd dey slowed down d speed of dere Jeep near her. Geet heart has started beating fastly due to fear wen she felt dem near her. she cursed herself for not listening to Maan nd came out of d car but now she cam also not go back to car because she has came far away from it. Wat all she can do now is to handle dis situation alone. Finally one guy who is beside d Driver's seat spoke to her

Guy 1: Hey Baby! Wants lift?

She didn't answered nd started walking fast to avoid dem.

Guy 2: Hey Babes! Y r u in so much hurry? Walk slowly yaar

She clenched her fist to control her fear. She thought of calling to Maan but den she stopped as she don't want to gain unnecessary attention. In d mean while one guy gets out from d jeep nd holds her wrist to stop her.

Guy 2: hey do u have any problem in listening? We r getting so kind to u nd u were just walking away (he said mischieviously)

Geet (in angry Tone): Leave my hand

Guy 2: whooo... Angry babes haan, dnt worry we like Girls wid Attitude. Right boys?

All of dem hooted mischeviously at his comment while Geet was just feeling disgusted

Guy 2: C'mon honey dnt be so difficult. Trust me u'll have fun

Now Geet can't take dis anymore. She can't tolerate dese dirty comments of dese guys nd finally she slapped d guy hard who was holding her hand. He holds his cheek leaving her hand. O god! She slapped him so hard. He had never thought dat d girl who look so delicate to him can slap him so hard. But dis make him more angry. He again holds her hand tight just to get another slap from her. she slapped him dis tym more hard. In d mean while other members of d Jeep comes out from it to get hold her. Guy 2 was hell angry. Dis Girl has slapped him not once but twice, d rage could be easily seen in his eyes. Geet shivered in fear but yet tried to maintain her composure. She knows wats cuming next so before dose guys reached her, she quickly takes d sand from d land nd throws it towards dem in dere eyes. All of dem rubs dere eyes nd getting advantage of it she quickly ran away from dere towards d forest.

Wen dose guys opens dere eyes dey didn't found her but dey cant let her go so easily also.

Guy 2: Damn! Where d hell has she gone?

Guy 3: Dnt worry1 she haven't gone so far.

Guy 1: Lets search her guys

Dey said nd left from dere in search of her

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Geet runs towards d forest as fast as she can. She knows dat dose guys can't remain like dat for long. Dey would definitely run after her in search of her nd before dat she needs to reach at a safe place. O God! She herself is responsible for dis Mess. Y haven't she listened to Maan.

"Maan" she said in her mind. She quickly takes out her cell phone to call him but Damn! Dere was no network. She felt so much frustrated at dat moment. Suddenluy she heard sum footsteps at dat moment. She knows who it can be. She quickly hides herself behind a tree nd saw dose guys looking for her. she covered her mouth wid her hand to avoid even d sound of her breathing.

Geet (in her mind): Maan where r u? Pls cum soon.

She thought nd again looked at dem

Guy 1: lets search dis side boys

He said nd dey all move ahead. Geet sighed a breath of relief but den realize dat she cant remain stand like dat. she has to rum from dere fast. She quickly comes out from dere nd started running towards an opposite direction. She was running fastly wen she felt someone holding her wrist to stop. Her heart almost sank wid d fear nd d next minute dat person has pulled her against him nd pinned her against a tree covering her mouth to stop her from Screaming. Her eyes gets wide open wen she saw d person standing in front of her. it was none other den MAAN!!

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Wen Maan came back to d car. He found dat d Door of d car is locked. He felt amuzed. He tried to look from d window nd noticed dat Geet was not dere inside. He understands dat she must have gone out of d car.

Maan: Kya karu main is ladki ka. I told her not to get out of d car yet she didn't listened to me. God knows where she has gone.

He said nd takes out his cell phone to call her but her cell was out of reach

Maan: Damn! (he said while punching d roof of d car hard) nw where should I find her. Geet where r u? pls jaldi se mil jao

He said nd started walking ahead in d hope dat he can find her. he moves few steps ahead wen he saw sum guys standing from a distance. He decided to ask dose guys. May be dey had seen her, he thought nd started heading towards dem but den stops wen he listen to dere Converstaion. Dey were talking to search sum girl. Anger nd Rage could be easily seen in dere eyes. it took him no tym to register dat dey must be talking about Geet. he feel like punching dose guys at d first place but den he calms himself as he needs to find Geet first, god knows where she has ran away nd he too moved towards d Forest.

He was searching for her in d forest wen he heard few footsteps. He quickly hides himself behind one of d tree nd dis is wen he saw Geet running nd within no tym he holds her wrist nd pulls her towards him nd hides her too behind d Tree.

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Maan looked into her eyes which were first scared but den gets calm. He could feel her heart beating fast due to fear. Geet's breathing gets normal wen she saw him in front of her. She felt happy to see dat she has been saved by him. Both looked at each other's eyes like trying to read dem, asking questions to each other. Maan slowly removes his hand from her mouth nd tucked d starnd of her hair behind her ear. He wipes away d tears dat were flowing due to both fear nd happiness holding her cheek. Only he knows hw much scared he was just by d thought dat she's in great trouble sumehere nd seeing her safe in front of him has given him so much relief dat he cant even express. Dey just stood dere lost in each other's eyes.

Dey came back to reality wen dey felt d sound of footsteps cuming to their direction. He quickly bends down wid her nd hides themselves behind a dense bush. Maan holds Geet tight so dat her face was hidden in his chest. She too holds d collar of his shirt tight due to fear. He wrapped his arms around tight her to tell her dat she's safe in his arms. He bends his head down to look at her while she raises her head to look at him. nd wat dey find in each other's eyes was Love nd only Love for each other. He assured her thru his eyes dat dey'll be fine nd nothing wrong will happen wid dem. he could feel her warm breath falling on his chest which was just making him to lose his control yet he tries to control himself sensing d seriousness of d situation.

Finally he saw dat d guys were frustrated for not able to find her nd has decided to gave up

Guy 1: Damn Yaar! It seems dat she has vanished like a thin air

Guy 3: Ya. But kuch bhi kaho she was too much mouth-watering yaar

Guy 2: True. Wish we could taste her

Guy 1: u r lucky dat atleast she has touched by slapping. We both are not even dat much lucky.

He said nd all laughed in unison. Maan felt his blood boiling due to anger wen he heard such dirty comments from dem. he can't take it anymore. Hw dare dey say anything like dat to his Geet. He just wanted to punch dose guys hard till dey reached to death. His hand turned into fist nd he tightened his jaw. Geet could sense d anger building up in Maan. She knows dat anytym Maan can knock dose out nd she was right Maan was about to get up from his place to beat dem. he was about to go wen Geet held her hand tight not letting him go. He turned to look at her nd she just nodded in head in negative gesturing "Don't do dis". He just closed his eyes in frustration feeling helpless. Finally dose guys were left from dere nd dey heard d sound of Jeep going which indicates dat dose guys left from dere. Both Maan nd Geet takes a sigh of Relief nd came out from d bush.

Geet looked at Maan who was standing facing his back towards her. She could easily tell that he was hell angry on her nd his anger was right also, she was at fault. He slowly goes to him nd touched her arm

Geet: Maan'.

He instantly turned nd held her tight from her shoulders

Maan: I told u... I told you Na not to come out from d car. Its not safe den y d hell did u came out of d car? Do u have any idea dat in wat mess u r going to get in? Wat if I haven't came in tym, wat if dose guys find u, wat if dose guys... (He closed his eyes not even want to think d vulnerable state of her if dose guys find her). Do u have any idea wat has gone thru me wen i heard dose Dirty Comments from dere filthy Mouths for u? Y had u came out Geet wen I said u not to come out? Aisi kya aafat aa gayi thi dat u had to cum out from d car? C'mon answer me

Geet: I... I was worried for u (her voice trailed off while speaking seeing him in so much anger) u... u haven't came... back for long... so I... Thought to look... For you nd...

Maan: Geet m not a kid who'll get lost sumwhere. I too have brain. M mature enough to take care of myself. Late hi hua tha Na mar to nahi Gaya tha

Geet (screamed): MAAN!!!

Maan instantly realized dat he has too far in his anger, she was already very much scared due to trail of incidents happened back to back nd here he's shouting at her. He saw tears forming in her eyes due to his behaviour. He instantly softens his expressions

Maan: Geet wo...

She jerks his hand away nd looks at him in anger

Geet: Shut up! Just shut up! U are right I wouldn't have come here looking for u. dere's no need of me to worry for u. Afterall who m I to worry for u? m nothing, hai na?

Maan: Geet, it's not like dat, actually...

Geet: dnt say anything Maan, u had already said a lot. It was my mistake dat I was worried for u. thanx for making me realize my mistake. Nw I wont repeat it

Maan: Geet, m sorry Pls. ...

Geet: dnt be. Because it was me who was at fault derefore I should be sorry.

Maan: Geet listen to me once.

Geet: u knw wat Maan. U can never understand me. Neither 5 years back nor after 5 years.

Man just stood dere numb wen he listens to her statement. He once again hurt her due to his behaviour. He should be calming her rite nw as she was already stressed out after dat Accident nd here he's shouting at her on top of his lungs. Geet gaves him one last glare nd den leaves from dere towards d car handling him d keys of d car.

He saw her struggling from her tears while she was going back. He punched his hand hard on d tree due to frustration. Hw can he shout on her. She was worried for him nd without thinking about her once she came out in search of him nd he was shouting at her. Once again he had hurted her though unintentionally but he had hurted her nd god knows hw will he make up to her nw. Few hrs back he found a ray of hope dat dere relationship will once again be get normal but again he has losted dat ray of hope

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Geet came towards their car running nd stops near it. She holds d roof of d car nd cries bitterly wen she reminded Maan's words. He easily he had said all dat without even thinking once dat hw will it affect her. hw can he say about his Death wen he knows it very well dat hw much it affects her.

Geet: u can never understand me Maan, never ever. I thought dat u have changed in dese 5 years but I was wrong. U r still d same, u still say things without even thinking once. U can never change Maan. Never.

In d mean while Maan came near d car. Geet feel his presence behind her derefore she quickly wipes away her tears but Maan can easily sense it. he needs to make up to her nd by thinking dis he goes near her

Maan: Geet wo...

Geet (in cold voice): We r already very late. Lets go nw. I dnt want to get Late further.

Maan can only nod his head dis tym. He knows she was very much hurt dis tym nd if he says anything to her right nw den it'll give opposite result. Derefore he opened d lock of d car nd opened d Door for her. she quickly sits inside without looking at him. Maan takes a deep breath nd gets himself at d Driver's seat nd started Driving.

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Another hour has been passed nd dey were about to reach their Destination. Both of dem didn't speak to each other. Maan keeps on looking at Geet by every now nd den but Everytym finds her looking outside d window. He dnt know hw will he make up to her derefore he decided to give her sumtym nd thought of making up to her wen dey'll reach Hotel. He thought nd started concentrating on Driving.

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Finally dey reached their destination nd Maan in front of d Hotel. He gave d keys to d person who parks car nd headed inside wid Geet. Geet was moving little behind him not wanting to face him. Finally dey reached to d Reception to take d keys of their Respective Rooms

Maan: ummm Excuse me!

Receptionist: Hello Sir! Hw can I help u

Maan: ummm Hi I m Maan Singh Khurana nd we had a booking over here for 2 rooms.

Receptionist: Let me check sir.

He checked d Register to see their name nd den looked at dem. in d meanwhile Geet too cumes near Maan.

Receptionist: Yes Sir. We have d booking but dere's only one Room. But sir its of only 1 room.

Both Geet nd Maan widens their eyes nd wen dey heard wat d receptionist has said.

"WAT?" dey both said together nd den looked at each other in shock nd den to Receptionist

Receptionist: yes sir. Its true we have booking for only Room nd its by d name Mr. nd Mrs. Khurana!!!


"Wat?" dey again said in unison making Receptionist confused nw


Geet had to pinch herself hard to make sure dat she was not dreaming. Even Maan was too shocked wen he heard dis. its true dat he needed sumtym wid Geet alone but he had never thought of dis option.

Geet felt her world spinning wen she thought of sharing her room wid Maan.

Geet (to herself): Babaji! Savere se jo ho raha tha wo kam tha jo ab ye ho raha hai. mujhe iske saath Room share karna padega. Main iske saath Room kaise share kar sakti hoon?

She thought nd looked at Maan who was looking at her wid equal surprise. God knows wat else their Destiny has stored for both of dem.


OK so dis is it guys. i knw u all wanted to see Maan in Action but i havent shown him over here. i had stored dat for another update of it😉. Keep waiting for dat. nd for dis Part well do tell me hw u all find dis Part. it was very much Tragic na? i knw. Anyways hit d like button if u all like it nd do Leave ur Comment/criticism. its necessary

P.S. nd ya not to forget dat song Sequence. It was Teri Meri Meri Teri (Reprise Version) from Bodyguard. actually i was listening to dat song while typing dat part derefore decided to include it. forgive me if u all dnt like it

Luv Aakriti😊😊
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Edited by aakritisri1111 - 13 years ago
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Yippie m d first one to comment🥳

Hey dear sorry couldnt able to comment earlier actually my net was out of order. ok so now cuming to ur Update it was marvellous. just awesome. actually i dnt have words to express it.👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏

From starting to end everything was just perfect. dat accident part nd den dey both taking care of each other's wounds nd ya not to forget that song sequence it was beautifully narrated

u knw wat wen i read dat Geet convo where she called him SHONA not once but twice i feel so much touched nd overwhelmed. it reminds me of sumthing.

But one thing dnt take it as a criticism its just my Doubt y Geet has behaved in dat way i mean y she has said dat "U can never understand me". i knw Maan has been harsh to her at dat tym but it was just because he was scared nd i guess Geet too knows it still she says dat. well i guess all my doubt will get cleared in next update.

OMG dey both r going to share one room. sounds ineresting huh... Loved to see wat will happen next.

Keep writing like dis only. Pls update soon.
Edited by lovemyangel - 13 years ago
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Congrats for the new thread.
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hey basanti 😊😊
welcome back 🤗🤗
and thanks for te update 👍🏼👍🏼
lagta hai dhanno wapas chahiye 😈😈
isiliye itni jaldi update de di 😆😆
hehe😆😆
well i'll comment after i read the part 😊
so see u soon 😊
luv 😳
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