MG MY 1st FF(Re-incarnation)(Note on Pg 140) - Page 70

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Posted: 13 years ago
Happy New Year...

part 31
nice part dear...
cont soon...
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Hey Guys I am so happy that everyone has liked this Part of the FF . I am cursing myself why i started writing so late . But i am happy that you all are liking the this FF , keep on liking & commenting . Love you all guys . ❤️
Guys i am getting very few comments . Please comment who are liking the Story . Guys do Like & comment . As that will give more energy to write fast . Do not forget to comment please .
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waiting how much more time would u take dear ...
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After Veer & Priya left to sleep . Dev & Pammy were talking with eachother .

Pammy : Dev Beta aapko mazza aaya ?

Dev : Haan Mom . Bohot mazza aaya .

Jijaji ne bohot acche intazaam kiya tha .

Pammy :Mera matlab hai ki Maan kaisa Ladka hai ?

Dev : Mom , Jiju is perfect for Geet . He is very good for our Gudiya .

Pammy : Main thodi tension main thi ki kahin humne itni

jaldi karke koi galati toh nahi ki na .

Dev : Relax Mom , Aap logion ne Geet ke liye accha hi socha hai

"Don't worry"

Pammy : Thank You Beta .

Dev : Mom ,Geet ka khayal , Jiju humse bhi jyaada rakhte hain .

Woh humari geet par anch bhi nahi anedenge .

Pammy : Accha !!! Who kaise ?

Dev : Geet ke saath hi Khanna khate the .

Wahan servants bhi Geet ke hisaab se chalte the .

Geet wahan ki Princess bani hui thi .

Uski pasand ka khanna bhi bana tha .

Jiju ko toh Geet ki saari pasand na pasand ke baare main pata tha .

Main aur bhai khud hairaan the .

Humme bohot khushi mili yeh sab dekh ke .

Pammy : Wow beta .

Dev : Mom chalo ab mujhe bohot neend aarahi hai .

Pammy : Ok Beta , Chalo soojate hain .

Veer & Priya's Bedroom

Priya & Veer were very happy that Maan & Geet were gelling well together . They were also happy that Geet got along very well with Maan .

Veer : Priya main bohot khush hoon ki

Geet ko pyaar karne wala life partner mila hai

Priya : Haan Maanji ka nature bohot accha hai .

Veer : (smirk smile) Accha !!! Toh mere baare main aapke kya vichare hai .

Priya : Aap bhi na kahan ki baatien jodte ho .

Veer : Pehele mere sawaal ka jawab toh do .

Priya : Aapko bhi yeh sab baatein poochne kaa bhi hi samay mila .

Veer : Yeh mere sawaal ka jawab nahi hai .

Priya : Ab aap apni sharartein karna band kijiye .

Veer : Acchaji .

Priya : Please soo jayiye mujhe neend aarahi hai ,

aur aapko kal subah jaldi Office jaana hai .


Veer kisses her on her Forehead , hugs & cuddles her in his arms .Wishes Good Night to Priya & Go to sleep .

Maan was getting restless to call Geet . He calls her .



Geet : Hello Maan , Aap ne itni der kyun lagadi call karne main .

Maan : Mujhe laga you must be talking to your Mom

isiliye maine thoda late call kiya .

Geet : Accha . Aur mujhe laga aap call karenge

isiliye main jaldi se apne room main aagayee .

Maan : Geet i hope you enjoyed the Trip .

Geet : Haan maine bohot enjoy kiya .

Main toh abhi bhi usike khayalion main hoon .

Maan : Wow Great .

Geet : Maan Aap bohot acche ho .

Maan : Accha .

Geet : I feel like Princess when i am with you .

Maan : Geet , why you feel like Princess ? tum toh meri Princess hi ho .

Geet : (smiled) . Maan very funny ok .

Maan : Geet nahi main serious hoon .

Geet : Haan haan theek hai .

Maan : Geet mujhe aaj kal tumse baat kiye bina neend hi nahi aati .

Geet : What a coincidence Maan .

Mujhe bhi aap se baat kiye bina neend nahi aati hai .

Maan : Geet kal College kitne baje hai ?

Geet : Maan mujhe 9.00 o'clock tak College pohochna hai .

Maan : Theek hai .

Geet : Aap late mat hona .

Maan : Mai late nahi hounga Geet .

Geet : Aap ko pata hai ek baar kya hua tha !

Maan : Kya hua tha ?

Geet : Woh Dhruv mujhe pick karne wala tha ,

but woh late hi rehta hai ,

phir bhi maine use warning di thi late mat hona ,

mujhe first lecture attend karna hai .

Hello hello Maannn

Maan : Geet mai sun raha hoon

Geet : Aap ne response nahi diya na isliiye .

Maan : Ab tum bolne ka muka dougi to bolunga na .

Geet : kya mai itna bolti hoon ?

Maan : Nahi nahi , acha phir kya hua ?

Geet : Phir na Dhruv as usual late aaya mujhe pick karne

Geet : Hum phir late hogayee aur mera lecture miss hogaya

kyunki unhone mujhe entry hi nahi di.

Us din professor ne bohot important Topic sikhaya tha

jo us ghade ke wajay se miss hogaya ,

aur jab mai professor ke pass gayi badme to unhone mujhe aur data .

Maan : Phir tumne kya kiya Geet ?

Geet : Maine Dhruv ko na bohot data jitna mujhe professor ne data tha

woh sara gussa maine uspe nikal diya .

Maan : Nahi mujhe dat nahi khani Mai time par pauch jaunga .

Geet : Main aapko nahi datungi

Maan : kya barossa gusse mai dat diya toh

Geet : Maannn

Maan : Acha main toh mazak kar raha tha , acha ab soo jao ,

Main pohoch jaunga time par .

Next : Part - 33

Precap : Maan & Geet go for Dinner at Ronak's House .

Edited by manesha76 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
nice...

love the way they r now sharing their stories...n coming closer...

continue soon...

thnx for PM...
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Posted: 13 years ago
Nice one...
luvd the way story s moving...

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Posted: 13 years ago

@Manesha..

Lovely one...
liked the convo of MG

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Posted: 13 years ago
loved the update...
everyone happy abt maan...
waiting for the next
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome update...
loved it...
loved their convo...
continue soon...

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