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Posted: 13 years ago
#11
fast yaar
may be blood loss jyaada na hojaye
injuries are too much dear
atleast face to show karna tha
pm me dear
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Posted: 13 years ago
#12
Here u go...another update...please dont forget to like and comment...😊 😊 😊

Chapter 2
A fatal escapade
Mr. Khurana...she is out of danger...' said the doctor coming out of the OT and Maan breathed a sigh of relief.
'Kya mein usse dekh sakta hoon doctor...'
'I am afraid unhe abhi tak hosh nahi aayi hai...'
'Bas door se dekhloonga doctor...I just want to confirm that she is alright...'
'Theek hai Mr. Khurana...jaise hi hum unhe ward mein shift kardenge...hum aapko batayenge...you can go see her...' said the doctor with a small smile and went inside the OT. Here Daadi was happy that the girl was alright and Maan was peaceful.

A few minutes later the doctor came to inform that the girl had been shifted to the ward and Maan and Daadi went to see her. As soon as they entered the ward, Maan stopped at the doorway unable to breathe. He was staring at the most beautiful girl he had ever seen, peacefully sleeping with a faint glow emitting from her body. She looked so out of place in the hospital bed but Maan couldnt resist himself from watching her. Daadi was noticing the changes in her grandson's epressions and was happy that atleast he actually stared at a girl 😉

The girl was sleeping with a small smile adorning her face and she looked a total angel. Maan was just lost in the innocence, her beauty but reluctantly had to go out as the doctor came and asked him to go. (sad na😭)

Few hours later...

She was running, trying to save herself from the people who were put on a mission to kill her They were having lethal weapons in their hands and she had no means of saving herself apart from running. But how long could she run? 'hai babaji...aapki bachchi ko bacha lejiye...please kripa kejiye babaji' was all she could do: pray her babaji to save from death but that wasnt enough or was it????
The men were following pace, running behind her screaming, to kill her and finish the job but it was looking like impossible. She was running too fast and they were unable to kill her. But suddenly, as though destiny was on their side, the girl tripped and fell and sprained her ankle. The goons were able to reach her. She was dead scared. She tried to get up but fell down again and those terrible goons started laughing looking at her condition. Tears rolled from her eyes; she started begging them to leave her but they showed no mercy. Praying hard she got up and staggered away from them but suddenly one of them caught her by her hair making her scream in agony. Yet she was determined to get away from them. She couldnt think but somehow her mind worked and she hit the goon very hard with her knee and started running away.
Suddenly, a club hit her head and she staggered clutching her head with pain. Blood started to flow from her head and in minutes covered her face. A slash of a sword and her arms started bleeding. She was in complete pain. The pain was unimaginable. But all those goons were having the time of their life looking at this lady suffer from pain. They were laughing looking at her agony and nobody had any heart because they were hurting this little princess who never hurt anybody in her lifetime. The only mistake was that she was beautiful and nobody wanted that because her beauty was causing them a problem.
She fell with a thud on the forest floor and the goons started thrashing her left and right. Her white kurti became completely soaked in blood and her whole body was bruised. She became unconscious. After another shot at her head, the goons were convinced that she was dead and left her abandoned in that dense jungle laughing evilly.
A few minutes later, she opened her eyes. She was still in pain but she realised that she was alive. But if she stayed here for long she might lose her life. She got up with great difficulty and started moving mindlessly in search of the road so that she could get some help and without realising she came out of the woods to the road and suddenly went and crashed to something moving. She crashed so hard that she slid out of conscious and fell on the road...

That was when she opened her eyes with a snap!

PRECAP:
keep guessing...

Chapter 3
Edited by bharadwajrad - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#13
superb update ..loved it dear
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Posted: 13 years ago
#14
chapter 2 ...

awesome ... superb ...

thnx 4 d pm ...

continue soon ...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#15
Hmm...so that's what actually happened with her...oh how brutally she had been beaten...they were really evil...good that she landed with Maan now...eager to see her response to Maan as now she's awake...n happy to see Maan actually noticing a girl so much...😃...continue soon...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#16
loved both the updates...
is the gal geet...
pl cont soon...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#17
Here u go...back with another update...please post ur valuable comments and dont forget to like :) :) :) This time I will update a little later than usual...waise bhi late update karti hoon..but ab aur bhi late hoga...sorry but I am extremely busy with my studies and I have a round of tests coming up...sorry :) :)


Chapter 3
A humane decision

'Mr. Khurana, there is a complication..'
'Kya hua doctor?' asked Maan.
'Sar pe gehri chot lagne ke wajah se we think she has lost her memory. She has no recall of the incident naahi unhe kisi pichli baat ki yaad hai. She only vaguely remembers something that too only her name I guess. Neend mein bol rahi thi...college admissions karna hai uske liye pura naam dena padega na aur something...'
'What??? aise kaise hosakta hai doctor?'
'Hosakta hai, Mr. Khurana. It happens. Aur jis halat unki hui thi usse hi pata chalta hai ki unhe kitni zor se chot lagi thi aur ladki hone ki naate sometimes yeh complication badh sakti hai. You never know what happens...'
'Par ab kya hoga doctor? Naahi mujhe pata hai ki woh kaun hai aur kaha se aayi hai, uski family, nothing I know!.Toh ab iska kya hoga. Uski family ko shayad pata bhi nahi hai..'
'I dont know what to do, Mr. Khurana. I have no idea.'
'Okay doctor, par kya naam bataya uska?'
'We dont know her name. Bas itna lagta hai ki unhe unka naam yaad hai.'
'Okay doctor. Thank you, main kuch sochta hoon.'
'Okay Mr. Khurana' said the doctor and cut the call.
'Kya baat hai beta? Aap tensed kyun hai?'
'Daadi..doctor keh rahe ki us ladki ki yaaddash chali gayi hai. She doesnt remember anything at all. Ab kya hoga uska daadi? Uski family ka? Bohot bura lag raha hai mujhe.'
'Its okay beta. We will think of something. Kya woh ladki theek hai?'
'I think so Daadi.'
'Theek hai, toh phir hum ek kaam karte hai. Hum unhe hamare ghar lekar aate hai. Jab tak unki yaaddash wapas nahi aati tab tak she can stay with us.'
'Par daadi...'
'Arre bete, yaha unka khayal rakhne ke liye hum hai na. Aur waise bhi kaha jayenge woh agar unhe kuch yaad nahi hai toh?'
'Baat to sahi hai Daadi. I think its best if we bring her here.'
'Okay bete, we will do that work once she is ready to be discharged.'
'All right Daadi. Toh phir main chalta hoon. Show ki tayyari karni hai mujhe. I have to go to London tomorrow. Wapas aane mein ek hafta lag sakta hai. Agar koi problem ho to phone kar lejiye mujhe.'
'Okay bete. Hum sab dekh lenge, You dont worry aur Annie bhi aarahi hai na aapke saat?'
'Haan Daadi. Uske bina to yeh show karne ki soch bhi nahi sakta main' said Maan with a smile.
'Woh to hai beta' replied Daadi with a small chuckle.
Maan kissed his Daadi's cheek and went to pack his clothes for his London trip, on the way calling Adi and asking him to inform John about the preparations.
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'Kaha gayi woh? Kaha gayi?' Naina screamed!
'I dont know!' replied Rose.
'Dammit! Aap logon ne uska jeena haram kar diya and now you have even killed her!' Naina shouted.
'Dekho, we dont know anything about her. We dont know. Shayad tumhari best buddy kisi ke saat bhag gayi!'
WHAM! and Rose squealed. Naina had mustered all her strength and slapped Rose hard across her face. 'Khabardar! agar meri dost ke baare mein kuch bhi galat kaha! I will get you for this Rose! Mark my words! Aap dono ko chodungi nahi!' said Naina and stormed out of the house while Rose and her mother glanced at each other, lost for words.

PRECAP:
What will the girl do???


Edited by bharadwajrad - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#18
loved the update...
interesting...
will naina find where geet is
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Posted: 13 years ago
#19
lovely update dear...
very good work
keep writing 😛


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Posted: 13 years ago
#20
hey nice concept...can figure out who the 2 chars were...plz continue soon.

A small suggestion-can u plz give MG ff or Maneet ff/ss along with the title of the ff? It wud b easier 4 the readers 2 understand😊

Love

Shreya

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