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Posted: 13 years ago

#361

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Vicky ne kitni badi musibat mol le li...bechara...

well u r right love and lust are different from each other...but Sunny can't be Cherry...if Sunny is pregnant with Maan's child that is also fine with me because it is ur story anyways so what u have planned completely depend on u...and succumb to readers pressure will destroy ur story...

see there is lot of difference in mind and heart...above paragraph is my mind's talk and my heart says...

nahin...Geet ko Dev ke bachche ki mee nahin banana...
aisa mat hone dena...Maan ko hamesha dev ki chodi hui Geet kyon mile

waiting for next update...thanx for pm

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aamirkhanfan

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Posted: 13 years ago

#362

nice part...vicky is in trouble

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Downhill

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Posted: 13 years ago

#363

so what is the prank that vicky plays...the girls wer simply fab ...
the precap has set my heart racing and i am eagerly expecting some big drama...
hope to read more
keep writing
love u and ur ff
reva

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crystal-rose

@crystal-rose

Voyager

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Posted: 13 years ago

#364

Originally posted by: maaneetsangel

awesome ... superb ...

thnx 4 d pm ...

continue soon ...

poor vicky ... all set to taste his own medicine ...

thank u... yes, poor vicky...

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crystal-rose

@crystal-rose

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Posted: 13 years ago

#365

Originally posted by: geetsweet
Poor vicky...

Nicepart...continue soon...

thank you dear...was not happy with the lenght of the update...but was super busy...so feeling sad😭

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crystal-rose

@crystal-rose

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Posted: 13 years ago

#366

Originally posted by: ammu5
poor vicky. girls r smart.

Yes...poor vicky...girls r smart...any doubt about it?😉

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crystal-rose

@crystal-rose

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Posted: 13 years ago

#367

Originally posted by: tushti-kiran
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Vicky ne kitni badi musibat mol le li...bechara...

well u r right love and lust are different from each other...but Sunny can't be Cherry...if Sunny is pregnant with Maan's child that is also fine with me because it is ur story anyways so what u have planned completely depend on u...and succumb to readers pressure will destroy ur story...

see there is lot of difference in mind and heart...above paragraph is my mind's talk and my heart says...

nahin...Geet ko Dev ke bachche ki mee nahin banana...
aisa mat hone dena...Maan ko hamesha dev ki chodi hui Geet kyon mile

waiting for next update...thanx for pm

thanks for the comment kiran...i am not happy with the length of the update i posted...so trying to write a good part...will comment later to ur post...so sorry

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crystal-rose

@crystal-rose

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Posted: 13 years ago

#368

Originally posted by: aamirkhanfan

nice part...vicky is in trouble

thank you...yes vicky is in trouble and he is still not out of it.

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crystal-rose

@crystal-rose

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Posted: 13 years ago

#369

Originally posted by: Dreamy_Mystique
so what is the prank that vicky plays...the girls wer simply fab ...
the precap has set my heart racing and i am eagerly expecting some big drama...
hope to read more
keep writing
love u and ur ff
reva

Yes the girls were superb and have still not forgiven him...still some punishment is remaining...so...lets see what happens next.