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seemamary

@seemamary

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#381

It was a nice update, it shows as geet hears the song maybe maan loves her but not showing as dev loves her too and maan will never hurt his little brother, but its the saying that everything is fair in love and war .The precap sounds interesting. Hope they are our maaneet. continue soon.

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Eva Shah

@maanujaanu

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#382

brilliant n amazing update

luved it

n waiting to read more

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crystal-rose

@crystal-rose

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#383

Originally posted by: tushti-kiran

poor Vicky became laughing stalk for everybody in party...

hmmm so Geet has one secret admirer...who dedicated a song to Geet...who is that one other then Maan😡
only Maan has the right to love her..admire her...😍

u have said that there is some big twist coming in engagement
where is that...

song was beautiful...Maan didn't ask Geet for dance...he must be feeling uncomfortable...
but I am confused no body is talking about Sunny and her child's father...Maan is not also spending time with her so he is certainly not baby's baap...then who is it and if that baap is not from Maan's family then why he bring Sunny into his home...

eagerly waiting for next to know--who is pressing whose body...yaar ab torture band kar do na...pl...pl..pl..

o gosh I am first one to comment and that so long...now u have to fulfill my wish

poor Vicky became laughing stalk for everybody in party...
Tit for Tat...well vicky deserved what he got😉

hmmm so Geet has one secret admirer...who dedicated a song to Geet...who is that one other then Maan😡
only Maan has the right to love her..admire her...😍

It could be vicky...or someone else also(Like sunny was brought in...maybe someone...not too sure)

u have said that there is some big twist coming in engagement
where is that...

I said a twist is comming...not necessary a big one and it will be subtle and will confuse a little the story a bit more(i think!)😊

song was beautiful...Maan didn't ask Geet for dance...he must be feeling uncomfortable...
I love the song...wanted to use it somehow...so the situation was created...Why should he feel uncomfortable?...she is his best friend

but I am confused no body is talking about Sunny and her child's father...Maan is not also spending time with her so he is certainly not baby's baap...then who is it and if that baap is not from Maan's family then why he bring Sunny into his home...

well...the day is not over yet...and as for sunny...maybe he did not dance with geet bcoz of her

eagerly waiting for next to know--who is pressing whose body...yaar ab torture band kar do na...pl...pl..pl..

naaahhhiii...yeh torture abhi nahi band hoga...aur kuch samay chalega!!!!😉

o gosh I am first one to comment and that so long...now u have to fulfill my wish

Even i am happy......Good to read such long and thinking comments first thing when i interact with friends...it make me want to make the story more interesting. (or rather more tortureous😉)

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crystal-rose

@crystal-rose

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#384

Originally posted by: khushboo22
nice update

thank you...plz keep on commenting i like it😊

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@6n6s6k6i6r6a6n6

Sparkler

Posted: 13 years ago

#385

Originally posted by: crystal-rose

poor Vicky became laughing stalk for everybody in party...
Tit for Tat...well vicky deserved what he got😉

hmmm so Geet has one secret admirer...who dedicated a song to Geet...who is that one other then Maan😡
only Maan has the right to love her..admire her...😍

It could be vicky...or someone else also(Like sunny was brought in...maybe someone...not too sure)

u have said that there is some big twist coming in engagement
where is that...

I said a twist is comming...not necessary a big one and it will be subtle and will confuse a little the story a bit more(i think!)😊

song was beautiful...Maan didn't ask Geet for dance...he must be feeling uncomfortable...
I love the song...wanted to use it somehow...so the situation was created...Why should he feel uncomfortable?...she is his best friend

but I am confused no body is talking about Sunny and her child's father...Maan is not also spending time with her so he is certainly not baby's baap...then who is it and if that baap is not from Maan's family then why he bring Sunny into his home...

well...the day is not over yet...and as for sunny...maybe he did not dance with geet bcoz of her

eagerly waiting for next to know--who is pressing whose body...yaar ab torture band kar do na...pl...pl..pl..

naaahhhiii...yeh torture abhi nahi band hoga...aur kuch samay chalega!!!!😉

o gosh I am first one to comment and that so long...now u have to fulfill my wish

Even i am happy......Good to read such long and thinking comments first thing when i interact with friends...it make me want to make the story more interesting. (or rather more tortureous😉)

hahaha...torture will continue...if I am admitted to hospital I am going to claim bills from u

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crystal-rose

@crystal-rose

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#386

ab vicky kya karega...thats goona wreck havoc in maneet's life...

I didnot say vicky will do the prank...a prank will bring a twist...but what twist?...is it going to bring havoc?...i am not sure

i am literally chewing my nails out of tension...

Na..tension mat le...bal safed ho jayenge...as some more is yet to come

maan seems to have no interest in geet apart from being her friend...
so i presume that its only after vicky's prank, things are going to change drastically...

Maan is Geets best friend. No vicky will not play a prank so there is no Q of things changing drastically...but some change will be there for sure...but the effects of the change will be farfetching

the precap has set my heart racing...is maneet or dev and sunny, presuming the other person to be their partner...
i am gonna faint out of this tension..

Will post the nxt part when i get 30 likes...so uptill that time plz dont take too much of tension

keep writing
love u and ur ff
reva

love u🤗 encouraging me so much dear...thanks u😃

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gurudrishti

@gurudrishti

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#387

HEY BUDDY, STORY IS NICE BUT FRANKLY SPEAKING IM NOT SO HAPPY WID DEVGEET LUV TRACK😉.U KNOW D REASON . I ALWAYS THOUGHT THAT MAANGEET SECRETLY LUV EACH OTHER VERY MUCH.BUT ALAS U BROKE MY DREAM😭 N I AM SURE PRECAP IS ABOUT DEVGEET AS THEY R TRULY IN LUV.BUT , I STILL APPRECIATE UR WORK. MAY U SHINE WID UR EVERYWORK.GUD NITE BUDDY.KEEP IT UP.👍🏼BY D WAY LEHNGA OF GEET WAS VERY BEAUTIFUL 😊 N N WHY DIDNT U MAKE VICKY WEAR DUPATTA.😆

Edited by manisha259 - 13 years ago

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crystal-rose

@crystal-rose

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#388

Originally posted by: tushti-kiran

hahaha...torture will continue...if I am admitted to hospital I am going to claim bills from u

u gave me a good idea!...from next update ther will be a Heading...medical bills not accepted...🤣...for any kind of emergencies

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crystal-rose

@crystal-rose

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#389

Originally posted by: seemamary
It was a nice update, it shows as geet hears the song maybe maan loves her but not showing as dev loves her too and maan will never hurt his little brother, but its the saying that everything is fair in love and war .The precap sounds interesting. Hope they are our maaneet. continue soon.

Thanx seema(if i may call u that) . Yes Geet has heard the song and is now curious to know about the admirer.

will update as soon as i get 30 likes.