Mere Papa Maan /Thread one/MG/SS - Page 9

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Hi,

Buddies here is update 7..U gav great response..I hop u will also lik this ..if there u find any mistake...forgive me ..n let me know..

Part 7

Few Days had been passed... Maan appointed private tutor for her….coz in mid session it was difficult to admit Mannat in any prestigious school .That lil creature got every thing…Even that lov n affection from Laxmi Daddi…Rahim Chacha..n Salma…..which She never got since her birth …..All materialistic things ..made her happy….but for a time being …..She never got ...what She deserved …..no one could read emptiness in her eyes .

On the other hand Geet was jst about to deliver their first child..n Maan's visit to Mannat was rare now…He spent much time with Geet…Most of time he remained silent …lik He was doing his duties …only …He was not that Maan more..who loved …His family more then every thing else ….He never let Geet know his situation…But Daddi ..She always observed a great change in him..But what was the reason...?... even She never came to know.

One day in Khuraana House

Mannat was playing in the garden…with Rahim chacha's grand son…Shahid a seven year old boy of Rahim's daughter. Who usually visit them as their daughter lived nearby to KH….Bua Daddi was inside

Shahid: Mannat ..kal mera birthday tha..humne bahut mazza kiya

Mannat: birthday woh kya hota hai ?

Shahid ( He started to laugh ): Tumko yeh patta nahi birthday kya hota hai..?..tumnay kabhi birthday nahi manaya ..

Mannat: Mannat ko patta hi nahi birthday kya hota hai !!

Shahid: Pagal kahin ki..Birthday hota hai jis din humara janam hota hai

Mannat: Humko nahi pata hamara janam kab hua tha..

Shahid: Tumko nahi pata ..?..tumhray Mammi aur Papa ko patta hoga..!!!

Mannat: Mannat ko nahi pata…Mammi Papa ka

Shahid: Tum such main nahi janti…?..Mammi woh hoti hai..jo humko janam deti hai..pyar karti hai…roj humko school bhejti hai..acchi acchi cheesay khanne ko banati hai..aur raat ko apne sath sulati bhi hai…humko darr na lagay is liye...

Mannat : Aur Papa kon hotay hai..?..

Shahid : aur Papa ..woh bahut pyar kartay hai…school lay ka jaatay hai...park main lay kar jaatay hai….humko jo tang karta hai..usko martay bhi hai …aur birthday per gift bhi detay hai ..pata hai Mannat... Meray Papa ney kal mujhko ek cycle gift ki…mere jitni…baddi main challa nahi sakta na..woh main challa sakta hun..main kal lay kar aunga….thekk hai

Mannat : Ok Shahid..per Mannat ko kon Batayega Mammi Papa k barre ?...

Shahid: kyon …Maan uncle aatay hai..na woh tumhare Papa hai …

Mannat: Maan uncle hamare Papa...!!!

Shahid : Hamare nahi …sirf tumhare… hamare Papa Maan ..nahi…tum Kaho …Mere Papa Maan..

Mannat (repeats his words ): Mere Papa Maan

Shahid : Abb thekk hai

Mannat : tumko kaise patta Maan uncle …hamare..sorry mere Papa hai

Shahid : Meri Nani Ma keh rahi thi….Mere mummy say

Before Shahid could say more Daddi Bua came...She was shocked to here this ..coz if she came to reality …that would make Maan's life much miserable

Daddi Bua : Shahid Beta…Tumhari Nani ne aisa isli kaha…Mannat k Papa nahi hai na …Per Maan uncle Mannat ko sabh kuch laaker detay hai..tumhare Papa jaise….isli Maan…uncle bhi Mannat k Papa jaise hi hua na

Shahid was a child..so He could not understand what Daddi said…so for him... what Daddi said that was rite ..But Shahid's words were enough for Maanat to think..what Mummy Papa meant …who were her parents…n where were they .?.Daddi took her inside..But lil Mannat was thinking …same what Shahid said.

Mannat: Daddi apko Patta hai Mannat k Mummy Papa kon hai ..?

But Daddi ..she was surprised that this lil girl took that childish conversation seriously

Daddi : Nahi Beta mujhko nahi patta...

Mannat: Per Daddi Maan uncle ko patta hoga…woh humko lay kar aaye thay na…to unko patta hoga na?

Now Daddi was sure this thing gonna stay in her lil mind forever….

Daddi Maa: Beta Maan uncle ko bhi nahi patta woh to apko …apki Tina Massi k pass say lay kar aaye thay...

Mannat had become much obstinate … Uncontrollable..only Maan was able to handle…..She was repeating same n same ..Humko Mere Papa chahea…mummy chahea ….as Shahid said…she was thinking ..that for her this was the rite term " Mere Papa ...Meri Mummy''... by saying Mummy Papa..as...''Mere Papa..meri Mummy'' She would find out her father n mother ….Bua Daddi made many calls to Maan but Maan gav no response.He was in meeting n his mobile was at silent ……..

After meeting when he checked n called back Bua Daddi..She told every thing to her….

Maan : Bua Daddi Main nahi aa sakta…Geet ki appointment hai evening ko..so I hav to b with her..its up to you …how u handle her..n he cut his phone without listening to her

But Maan was much upset ….He was not able to concentrate on work..suddenly He got a call from.Daddi Maa … Geet was in labor ..so She asked him to reach Dr Adwita's hospital..where she was taking Geet..so he had no need to go to KM…..

After one hour of labor..Geet delivered a baby boy .

Maan took his son in his lap n kissed Geet

Maan : thanx Geet..u gav me the most precious gift.

Geet: Maan aap kush to hai na .

Maan: Geet mujhe tumko bataney ki jaroort nahi …tum khod he dekh lo..main kush hu k nahi…

N both smiled looking at each other's face…

Daddi Maa : Bhai hum bhi yahin hai..aur abb to hamara status aur bhi baad gaya hai (Daddi was teasing both..as She took baby from Maan )

Every thing was alrite…Maan had forgotton every thing…getting his son..n Geet was also allrite…for this time they all were waiting coz…How Geet…n Maan passed nine months only they knew…

He stopped going office for few days …..n now it was baby's namkaran sanskar there in KM ….Maan n Geet sat in Puja..wth their son …

Panditji…: yazmaan..puja sampan hue…abb app apne betay ka naam rakh saktay hai….waise to rashi aur nakshtron ko dekh kar naam rakha jatta hai..per jo apney soch hai woh sabh ko batta dejiye..takki..us naam k sath bacchay ko bhagwaan ka aashirvaad mil sakay

Maan : Daddi Maa... Geet aur maine yeh decide kiya tha k ..hamare bacchay ka naam aap hi rakhegi…to yeh kaam aap kijiye

This made Daddi Maa much emotional n She was in tears

Daddi Maa: Maan yeh nanahi se jaan ne hum sabki zindgi k saare andhray dur kar diye…..suraj ki roshni ki tarah…is li aaj hum inka naam AryaMan (Sun ) rekhegy….AryaMan Maan Singh Khuraana

This puja had really ended dark phrase of Maan Geet's lif..the reason was AryaMan …which brought Geet n Maan again close ….after Maan's ML

For Maan his son was everything for him…He had turned KM into KC office from where he ran his work….so that he could spend much time with his son..On the other hand lik Maan had forgotten who was Mannat.…?...that little girl was moving toward darkness Bur even here…She had nobody who could help her to come out of this darkness

Precap: Daddi Maa decided to visit KH coincidently

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Really i like it poor mannat
now maan is not right
afterall she is only a child