Mere Papa Maan /Thread one/MG/SS - Page 11

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now dadi whould know about maanata. . . .
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Here Friends..update 8 every buddy wants Mannat in KM ..n She is moving there with Daddi..now what will b the outcome.. wait n watch..I hop u ll read..comment n lik this ..ur appreciation is my way

Part 8

Geet n Nandini they were at Biji's house…Amritsar….Coz when Geet was pregnant n was in bad health …Biji ( Geet's Massi ) visited Golden Temple n prayed to almighty …for Geet n baby…..n when every thing was ok now…She asked Geet …that they should go to Golden temple n should pay homage in front of almighty …who blassed her with a beautiful n healty son…Gurparav ( Guru Nanak Dev ji's birthday ) was coming n it was great to visit golden temple on that day …

But Maan was out for few days on a business trip to Australia… so Nandini accompanied Geet…Daddi was alone in Khurana mension…Dev was there but he had to go to KC..during day time..so Daddi had nothing to do…..She was passing her time …waching old albums….that time when they were at Khuraana house….years back they shifted here….But their old home was as such….Maan n Dev were born there….so how Daddi could….sold it .

Nakul brought coffee for Daddi Maa.She was smiling looking at old pictures.

Nakul : Daddi Maa aap bahut kush lag rahi hai

Daddi Maa smiled : Ha Nakul woh bhi kya din they Jab Maan aur Dev chotay chotay they ….Khuraana House kaise unki shrarto say Masti say gunjta rehta tha.

Nakul : Ha daddi Maa maine bhi bahut saal bitye hai wahan per …Pitaji ki to puri zindgi bahi per gujri….Dadda ji k sevaa kartay kartay

Daddi Maa : Ha Nakul tumhare Pita ji ne bahut saal rahay wahan per…bahut yaad aata hai woh sabh….Rahim aur Salma se milay bhi kai mehiney ho gaye ….Maan k sath jo hua uski wajah say..aur Geet ki pregnancy ki wajah say hum KH ja he nahi paye

Nakul : Daddi Maa ek baat kahon

Daddi Maa asked him to say what he wanted

Nakul: Daddi Ma…Maan Sir bhi bahar hai…Geet Didi aur Nandini Didi bhi nahi hai…Dev Sir bhi saara din office main rehtay hai…Aap bor ho jati hongi..aap KH kyon nahi challi jatti…Rahim Chacha Aur Salma Chachi say mil lijiye aur KH main ja kar purani yaadain bhi tazza kar lijiye ..apka time bhi pass ho jayega

Daddi : Nakul kya baat hai..bahut accha idea diya hai..hum bhi yahi soch rahay thay ….humko jaana chahea wahan per …aap driver say kaho…adhay ghantay main gaddi tyar rkkhey..hum ready ho kar aatay hai .( She was so excited )

Nakul left n informed driver about Daddi's visit

In half n hour Daddi left for KH….

Khuraana House

10:30 in the morning

Mannat was in the study room where her personal tutor..was teaching her…Bua Daddi had nothing to do…So She was reading a religious book sitting on the sofa.

Horn outside …surprised Bua Daddi that how Maan be here ..He was out for few days..But She was not aware which shock was waiting for her...Daddi Maa came out of car n moved inside KH….

Daddi Maa : Laxmi aap (these r those words which came out of Daddi Maa's mouth..she was much surprised what Laxmi Bua doing here…On the other hand Bua Daddi ..found no palce to run both were looking at each other speechless…lik statue )

Bua: Bhabhi aap yahan ?

Daddi Maa: Laxmi hum yahan hai yeh baddi baat nahi..issi shahr main KM hai aur issi main KH..per aap gaaon say kab aaye.?.aur who bhi hamare pass na aakar yahan kya kar rahi hai ? ( Daddi 's mind was not working )

Bua : Bhabhi woh mujhe gaon main yahan ki bahut yaad aa rahi thi ..bhai sahib mujhe yahan lay kar aaye thay ..jab maine bhari jawani maine apna sabh kuch kho diya tha …Maan Dev k sath bahut pal bitaaye hai yahan per sabh bhool gayi thi main ….aur aab …puraani yadain he to hay jinke sath main jee rahi hoon….issi liye maine socha yahan aakar kush din reh lati hun….apke pass aati to aap mujhe wahan say aanay nahi deti (She made excuse..But Daddi Maa was not convinced with her illogical excuse)

Daddi Maa: Nahi Laxmi ..aap Maan Dev say bahut pyar karti hai..isli ek he shahar main reh ker aap unse dur nahi reh sakti…baat kush aaur hai …(Daddi Maa holded her hand saying this )

Before Bua Daddi could say any thing..Mannat's tutor Akaash was jst about to leave

Akaash : Accha Maaji main chalta hu…maine aap ko batta hi diya tha subha..kaal main nahi aa sakuga..mujhe ek shaddi main janna hai..to kal Mannat ko maine chutti kar di hai …khalnay k liye ( He laughed …n left wishing both ladies good day )

Daddi Maa clearly observed that some thing was fishy here

Daddi Maa: Laxmi humko yeh to samjh aa gaya apke aane ki wajah kush aur hai …per yeh ladka kon tha…aur Mannat who kon hai…?...

But Daddi Bua had no answer... till then Mannat came there running ..she was happy that She had a break next day

Mannat : Bua Daddi ..kal ko Mannat free hongi….humko paddany Akaash Sir nahi aaey gay( her delightment was clear ..But Daddi Maa's presence made her to keep silenece)

Daddi Maa was looking at her …without a blink

Daddi Maa: Laxmi to yahi Mannat hai ..per kon hai yeh …jiski wajah say aap humse jhoot bol rahi hai (She became hyper )

Bua : Bhabhi aa maine jhoot bolla …per uski bhi wajah hai..per pehlay aap beith jaaea

Mannat got scared…Bua Daddi asked Salma to take Mannat inside

Daddi Maa: Dekho Laxmi….baat kya hai ..aap such such kahea

Bua : Ji Bhabi aur main chuppa bhi nahi sakti..issay pehlay yeh nahi se bachi kahi andhray main kho jaye apko batta denna he theek hai ( Bua was jst about to cry which made Daddi Maa to calm dowm lil bit )

N Bua Daddi explained everything to Daddi Maa…how Maan came to know about Mannat…n till know How She was taking care of her

Daddi Maa was speechless n shocked.

Daddi Maa: Intna sabh ho gaya aur humko patta hi nahi chlaa..isil liye Maan ko hume kai baar preshan dekha..per unho nay humko kuch nahi bataya

Bua Daddi : Bhabi Maan ko apki sayhat ..aur Geet ki haalat ki chinta ney usko aisa faisla lay nay per mazboor kar diya..woh bhi apni jaghay(place) per theek hai….per bhogna is bacchi ko padd raha hai…kya zindgi hai iski…Maa Baap k hotay anaath ho gayi hai..ghar hotay huay bhi bay ghar hai…

Mannat who was inside again came there coz She wanted to watch Cartoons on TV …

Daddi Maa looked at her…n again Mannat stopped at one place in hesistation.N hided herself behind

Daddi Maa walked toward Mannat n holded her hand

A carbon copy og her father ...Daddi Maa was looking Maan in her...wetness of her eyes were saying every thing

Daddi Maa : Betay aaea hamare pass(she said in soft words n sat next to her on sofa )

Daddi : Apka naam Mannat hai

Maanat (hesitated to speak ): Ha hum Mannat hai….aap kon ho…aab aap bhi Mannat ko lay kar jayegi….Maan Uncle ki tarah…jaise who Mannat ko Tina Massi say lay kar aaye thay…aap bhi humko yahan say lay jayegi…aur fir kon lay k jayega humko…..(n She started to sob )

This made Daddi to melt completely..n She hided her in her arms

Daddi Maa : Nahi Beta aap ko aab koi nahi lay kar jayega

Mannat: Aap jhoot bol rahay ho….Tina Massi bhi yahi kehti..thi..aur Maan uncle bhi

Daddi:Nahi Beta Maan uncle jhoot nahi keh rahay thay….hum to aap ko aab Maan Uncle k pass lay kar jaye gay ..yahan woh rehtay hai..aap unke sath

Rahegi aab say

There was a hope in Mannat's eyes ' Aap sach yeh rahi hai …Hum Maan Uncle k ghar jaye gay '

Daddi Maa: Ji Beta

But this made Bua Daddi worried

Bua Daddi : Per Bhabi aap Geet ko kya kahaygi

Daddi Maa: Geet ki chinta to hai humko…Per woh samjh jayegi…Maan ney Geet ko unkay ateet say nikala..aur Geet bhi samjh jayegi….is situation ko ..Unki tarah Maan ka bhi ateet tha….aur sabh ka hota hai…Maan usko bahut pichay chod chukkay hai…Abb unki zindgi main Geet k ilaawa koi nahi…aur Mannat ka unki zindgi main aana Geet k sath koi dhokha nahi…Maan Geet ka rishta itna bhi kamjoor nahi k ..kissi Sameera ki wajah say toot jaye

Bua : Per Bhabi fir bhi aap kaise bataaye gi Geet ko

Daddi Maa: Kuch time to lagayga….per hum Maan ko bhi ghut ghut kar jitta nahi dekh saktay ..issi liye Mannat ko hum apnay sath KM lay kar jayegay….

Bua : Kaya keh kar aap lay jayegi isko wahan

Daddi Maa: hum Mannat ki koi or pehchaan batta kar kay ja saktay hai Geet k samne... per jab unko hamare jhoot k barre main pata chalega unko aur dukh hoga…isli Mannat jo hai wahi ban kar apney ghar jayegi…Kal ko patta chalay jaa aab….jo tofaan ayega…uski tayari kar li hai hume ….kyonki…Mannat aab sirf hamari hai..kisi Sameera ki nahi…jaise apnay batya k Maan ne kis tarah attet ka har darwazaa bannd kar diya hai …to KM hi wog jagha ha jiska darwaaza Mannat k liye khulta hai…

Maanat was jst listening to two ladies

Daddi Maa: Beta aap hamare sath chalay gi na…Maan uncle k ghar

Mannat said yes with lots of hopes in her blank eyes

Pre cap : Maan got shock to find Mannat in KM

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nice update dear. . .

What geet wil react. . I think she wil except maanata. .

Plz plz plz waiting 4 next pt. Pjz post it. .

hope mannat will be loved by geet