SS:-Kadva Karelas and Jhakkas Jalebis(Pg 25 Note)

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Zeba

@FebruaryFlower

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Posted: 13 years ago

#11

Hey darling!!

A fab start. I loved the description of the leads...especially Arnav's. You've described him so beautifully, that I'm smiling at my screen!!!

Do add me to the PM list sunshine!!

Looking forward to the next part!!!

Zeba

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647669

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Posted: 13 years ago

#12

Originally posted by: StarryEyedGyal

Oh hoo you just wait until they meet! LOOOL VICKY POLLARD! Shes too sick! Promise I'll update tomorrow cos I'm on my phone and booy will it take long to update. Kinda wishing I hadn't started it now. I just wanna write and wrote and write but watch how freshers will get in the way!

haha waiting eagerly my friend! Haha she isnt she?! Haha yeah but no but yeah but no. You seen come fly with me?? Haha now that wiked! Im on my fone too thats why i did a little promo. Wat fone u got bruv LOL! Aha freshers week will deffo get in way but you'll still have to update or else i'll keep nagging you!!

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AquaBluez17

@AquaBluez17

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+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#13

wow this looks like a great start! plz continue n pm me when you do!

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Simply_Smart

@Simply_Smart

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+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#14

Aaahhh!! I got soo excited when I saw you started a SS! Considering how great your real stories are, I'm sure this one will be a treat too :)

I was cracking up at this, before I realized there was more to the sentence! "Infact not a man" 🤣

So you are going to have a lot of Shyam in it...Im okay with that as long as he isn't too creepy...though walking into two girls' bedroom while they are sleeping = creepy...so I don't know how I feel about having him around often...but it will be interesting to see how you develop the story.

I love this part "A girl with whom he felt comfortable. A girl with whom he felt he could talk to about his past. She was that one girl that had got him feeling again. The one girl, who had opened the doors of his heart to love. " I hope he accepts this and acts upon it soon.

I'm really happy that your Khushi recognizes how weird Shyam's behavior is at times and how he is ghooring at her at any given moment!

So far so good 👍🏼 Can't wait for their first meeting!

Best,

Smarty

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littlemoi

@littlemoi

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+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#15

fabulous start!! plzz continue !!

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CookMySock

@CookMySock

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#16

@mariam
Naaah I haven't seen it. Heard of it though. Is it good? I have the Iphone 4. Got it for my bday present. Still haven't fogured out how to use it properly yet! LOLOLOL! You? Aaah man I can't wait for freshers. London clubs are just tooo sick! But don't worry. I'll try update as regularly as possible! :)

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CookMySock

@CookMySock

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#17

@smarty

Well hellooo there! :D I got well excited when I saw your post cos I love reading long replies to everything!!! LOL awww I'm so flattered you thinky stories are funny. Awww. Awww. LOL too much awwing.
Ahaaa yeh he's not REALLY a man. He's something you might find out of Spongebob Squarepants...the slimy creep.

Ohooo don't you worry about Shyam. He's gonna be so evil in this story it'll make Khushi and Arnav get together.

Thank you so much for reading and replying :)

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Nooriya

@noorie_

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#18

Vandu!!🤗

Awesome SS!! and looove the title!!

Glad you decided to start writing instead of stuffing yourself with cheesy bread...mind you, that is making me extremely ravenous. yum!

ok ok back to m'point...you write really well so keep me updated!!

looking forward to the next part my gujju saathi!❤️ Bahu saras!

-Noorie

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meepha

@Meeph

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#19

Hey Vandini,

So after giving up hope in this drama,i was like i am quitting everything on this drama including FF's/Ss etc.I was going through extreme disappointment but then i saw the title 'Kadva Karelas & Jhakaas Jalebis'.I could not stop myself from opening this post.Thank god i did😊

It was very well-written

I could imagine Arnie boy ' Dressed in a navy blue suit with a cream coloured shirt and a black, silk patterned scarf he looked absolutely dashing'

Man,he must have looked sizzling hot.

i hope u update this sooper soon😃

P.S-Ur SS and the new promo has brought me back on track😛

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CookMySock

@CookMySock

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#20

Originally posted by: cute_gurl
Vandu!!🤗
Awesome SS!! and looove the title!!
Glad you decided to start writing instead of stuffing yourself with cheesy bread...mind you, that is making me extremely ravenous. yum!
ok ok back to m'point...you write really well so keep me updated!!
looking forward to the next part my gujju saathi!❤️Bahu saras!

-Noorie

LOLOLOL. When I was trying to think of the title I was in the kitchen and I was eating some jalebis my dad had bought for me. And Akhil comes in and goes to my mum OMG AUNTY TAMHE AKLA KADVA KARELA NU SHAK KEM KARYU! Have toh maru akhu modhu bagdi jashe. Look at this face. Why would you wanna ruin it!' As soon as I heard the kadva karela bit I was like oh yeh baby. Kadva Karelas and Jhakkas Jalebis! XD

Blad cheesy bread is the one. Butter some bread, put some cheese on it then put it in a samdwich toaster for like 5 mins and may i say it is the yummiest shit EVER!

Edited by StarryEyedGyal - 13 years ago

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